Article Game

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Article Game

Article Game

 

This is a game, as it says above. Basically, I will choose the first headline, and everyone else has to come up with the article. I will judge first, and then the winner will judge. If you don't understand, I can explain more. Here is the headline

 

New Variety of Carrot Set to Revolutionise Our Eating Habits

You have to at least write one paragraph. You can write more, but the minimum is one paragraph for the article. 

submitted by Pancake, age Open24hour, Pizza Place
(December 31, 2021 - 10:00 am)

New Variety of Carrot Set to Revolutionise Our Eating Habits--

 

We know how much you and your family hate vegetables. It's a disgusting chore that has you wanting to throw up. Well, what if I told you that there's a solution to that?
We here at Star Food Co. have created a revolutionary new variety of carrot. Why is it revolutionary, you ask? Just ask one of our customers!
"All I can eat is vegetables! They're the new candy!" says Jon, a young man who bought our carrots. We have put new minerals in them to cure your tastebuds and alter them so that vegetables taste more delicious, all in one carrot! So don't delay, go buy our revolutionary carrot today! 
submitted by Red Starlight, Star Co.
(December 31, 2021 - 4:24 pm)

Top! And great article!

submitted by Pancake
(December 31, 2021 - 5:29 pm)

Also! Judging is on January 9th.

submitted by Pancake
(December 31, 2021 - 5:30 pm)

I need more submissions!

submitted by SUBMIT BEFORE THE 9T, H!!!! from Pancake.
(January 3, 2022 - 8:38 pm)

I need more submissions!!!!

submitted by Pancake
(January 4, 2022 - 9:53 am)

New Variety of Carrot Set to Revolutionise Our Eating Habits

 

From disgusting and gag-worthy to to delicious explosions on your tastebuds, carrots are exploding as a go-to food for many. In particular, Sage's Vegetable Inc. now brags mouthwatering carrots with finely sculpted tastes in addition to all-new rainbow colors. A feast for the eyes and the tongue—at the same time!

Reports show the new type of carrot is a blend of two other vegetables. Sources refused to say which two when asked, however, so the breed remains mysterious. 

However, one thing all experts can agree upon is the delicious new taste of these rainbow tubers. “Extraordinary flavors highlight beautiful colors,” reports Kracker McGlum, a notoriously picky eater. This new brand appeals to all kinds. As the carrot market continues to boom and our diets change, all we can say is keep your tastes healthily rooted—and check back for more updates about Sage’s Vegetable Inc!

submitted by Jinx
(January 4, 2022 - 9:11 pm)

I like this one too!

submitted by Pancake
(January 5, 2022 - 5:15 pm)

I'm Hex now, someone else was Jinx, sorry!

submitted by Hex, Formerly Jinx
(January 5, 2022 - 10:38 pm)

OK! Sorry about this being a day late, but it wasn't as hard to decide, seeing as I only had to judge two pieces!

 

1st Place: Hex

I really liked your piece and I felt that it was more descripitve. It also summarized the headline perfectly! 

 

2nd Place: Red Starlight

 

I loved this piece, it seemed as if you just made it as you went along, only fixing the spelling mistakes, exactly like I would I do!

 

Thank you both for participating! 

submitted by Pancake, JUDGING
(January 10, 2022 - 8:01 pm)