Chatterbox: Chirp at Cricket

 

 

THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON

 

The shadows surrounded the clearing.

Emma closed her eyes and breathed, wind swirled lifting up her hair, but the tree's branches and leaves were calm. The ball of energy pulsed around her, then shot up in a quick flash of orange, and then was gone.

 

Emma sat down panting. The probe had taking more energy she had originally wanted to commit. But the astronomers would be pleased. Her mom didnt know what she thought she was doing, giving up her daughter to science. Emma certainally didnt want to be examined under x-rays and violet lights, but of course as Emma well knew the scientists didnt have elf DNA.

Which is why they would never know what she really half was.They had finally given up trying to find out, and had resorted to send her up in space, as in they thought she was immortal.

Just because those pinheads knew human wepons couldnt kill her, didn't mean she couldn't die.

She had wanted to know what she would soon be seeing in person, so she had sent up a catagory 4 probe.

She had moved dried leaves together in a pile to make a makeshift pillow, of course it was not as comftorble as some she had used, but she was still able to drift asleep.

to be continued

( just look for my name to read the rest that will soon be created )

submitted by ham is good y., age 12, Buckin'HAM' pa
(October 29, 2009 - 1:47 pm)

Wow, I can't wait to see how it turns out............

I really like the first paragraph.

submitted by Reece D., age 12, Mars
(October 29, 2009 - 6:13 pm)

Hi, Reece. Sorry about that.

I meant tree's branches and leaves.

Sorry

submitted by ham is good y., age 12, buking'HAM' pal
(October 29, 2009 - 6:15 pm)

Oh ok,

hey um ham,

have you ever considered publishing??? I really like your story.

submitted by Reece D, age i dunno, somewhere
(October 30, 2009 - 6:21 pm)

Pplz don't have to love my work but plz comment. i neeeeeeeeeed my friend and diferent plz to see it.

submitted by Ham is good y., age 12, Bucking'HAM' pa
(October 30, 2009 - 6:23 pm)

Hey, I like it!!!!!!!

Also love the 2nd one!!!!!!

 

'cause it's cash.

Money mouth

submitted by Sarah M., age too young, la la land
(October 30, 2009 - 8:18 pm)

Pretty good. I didn't really understand it, though.

 

submitted by Henry V., age 13, a house
(October 30, 2009 - 9:18 pm)

It's cool, but explain more.

submitted by C.C/ Cecelia R., age I forgot , my room, its on
(October 30, 2009 - 9:22 pm)

Interesting story. Are all the people on this thread suddenly new, or what?

submitted by Brynne
(October 31, 2009 - 5:42 pm)

Huh? I've never seen any of you! What's happening? Have I really been gone this long?

submitted by Ima
(October 31, 2009 - 6:17 pm)