Our Villain!

Chatterbox: Crowd Sorcery

Our Villain!

Our Villain!


We have a villain! You have selected Khaos to vie with Fable Thatcher in Fred and Emily's upcoming Crowd Sorcery story. The dastardly pirate Margaret O'Shanahan came in second, with evildoers Darkshroud and Whisperer neck and neck for third. All your bad guys received a good number of votes.

Thanks again to Brooke E. for creating Khaos and to everybody who submitted characters and voted.  

Who will be the next Crowd Sorcery character? It's your choice! Be sure to vote for a sidekick by July 28.




1. Name: Khaos

2. Physical appearance: He is the spirit of a wicked sorcerer who died in an attempt to rid the kingdom of those who opposed him. He can make himself look like various animals when traveling low-profile but is usually in human form. He is around six feet tall with a disturbingly handsome figure. He has slicked back deep brown hair and reddish brown eyes. He tends to strike an imposing figure in any situation. Khaos wears a black crown made of his father's bones. His cape was made of shadows and trailed behind him as he walked. He has a blood red robe set with with inlaid ebony around the hem. He goes barefoot. 

3. Background: Khaos used to be a young sorcerer by name of Lif Kann. He grew up in a shack with a drunken father and distant mother. He grew up highly intelligent and resented everyone but himself. He eventually grew to loathe the government and, vowing to change it, vanished. Eight years later he led a vicious army to attack the kingdom. Being the new king of the monsters in the army, he adopted the name Khaos. In one climactic battle, he was killed in the middle of a huge battle that wiped out his monsters.

4. Lair (Hut? Castle? Cave? Ship?): A huge, ancient cave -- it is a shrine for worshipping Mael-Koth, the pagan god of death.

5. What is the villain’s goal? To kill the son/daughter of the man who killed him in battle, as he believes that some monsters will allow him to be their leader after that. He believes that he will save the kingdom by becoming its ruler.

6. How is the villain stronger than the hero? He has determination and incredible magical power.

7. How is the villain weak or vulnerable? He is conceited and vicious. 

8. Your Crowd Sorcery Sentence(s): Khaos drifted slowly along the musty, forgotten halls of his cave. The rusting idols leered out from dark corners as though they were waiting for something. Khaos knocked one over as he glided by. Soon (insert hero/heroine's father's name) would regret killing him.(insert hero/heroine's father's name)  would regret everything. 


Brooke E., age 11, Arkansas 

submitted by Admin
(July 21, 2014 - 1:49 pm)

Oh wow! I actually won! EEEE! Thank you so much, everyone!



:D :D :D :D :D 

submitted by Brooke E., age 11, AR
(July 21, 2014 - 2:42 pm)

Good job, Brooke E.!

I'm disappointed that Darkshroud didn't win, but I personally think that Khaos would've been a better match for Fable. Congratulations to the 12 villains who made it to the finals! 

submitted by J.B.E, age 12, United States
(July 21, 2014 - 2:50 pm)

I was rooting for you!


submitted by Danielle P., age 10, California
(July 22, 2014 - 7:02 pm)

FrownSmileCryLaughing   Mixed feelings. I didn't vote for Khaos,  but as soon as I looked at the chart/graph thingy I knew he/it would win.               

submitted by Tigerlily, Maine
(July 25, 2014 - 7:47 pm)

Congratulations Brooke E!!! 

submitted by Will T., age 14, Georgia
(July 21, 2014 - 2:51 pm)

Hoorah for Khaos! I didn't vote for him, but he's a wicked cool villain, and I'm glad that he's won! 

submitted by True
(July 21, 2014 - 2:54 pm)

Margaret came in second?  I was just happy she made it into the top twelve!  Thanks guys!  Congrats to Brooke.  If anyone beat Margaret, I'm happy it's Khaos.

submitted by Melody, age 16, Disney
(July 21, 2014 - 4:57 pm)

Congrats Brook!InnocentKissLaughing

submitted by Avella D., age 10, California
(July 21, 2014 - 5:49 pm)

I voted for Margaret! She's awesome!

submitted by Evlyn, Maine
(July 25, 2014 - 7:51 pm)

Yay!!!! I sooo wanted Khaos.:)

submitted by Forrest
(July 21, 2014 - 5:30 pm)

Congrats, Brooke E.! Khaos will make great villian for the story. I voted for him and Margaret. I voted for another one, but I forget which. I think everyone should congratulate themselves if they even just made a villian or voted. Congrats! #Khaosforpresident #Pledgetothepirate #Whispertakesoverme #Wolfthief

submitted by Ellie, age 11, Place of congrats
(July 21, 2014 - 5:41 pm)


submitted by Ashleigh G
(July 21, 2014 - 5:49 pm)

THANK YOU, Ashleigh, for being so supportive!



submitted by Brooke E., age 11, AR
(July 21, 2014 - 7:21 pm)

Even though my character didn't win, I was still very happy to be in the top 12. Khaos is a very good villain to be picked! #Khaosforpresident

submitted by Rebecca D., age 12, IN
(July 21, 2014 - 9:04 pm)



Cappie says codg. Cappie wants a fish? 


submitted by Ashleigh G
(July 22, 2014 - 2:19 pm)