Chatterbox: Inkwell

see you again
meet you again
and catch you when you
[f a l l]
my friend

a wonder
[f o u n d]
a wonder
[l o s t]
and still none of us know the
[c o s t]

three years by your
[s i d e]
who knows
[w i t h o u t]
i love only
[y o u]
with[o u t] a
[d o u b t]

five metal
[s t r i n g s]
and feathers in
[a i r]
those things are
[u s]
burdens we choose to
[b e a r]

and our hearts bound with
[t w i n e]
and our souls bound with
[s o n g]
i truly am
[s o r r y]
it took me so
[l o n g]

now you wave
[g o o d - b y e]
as you head to the
[e a s t]
my sky has now
[s h a t t e r e d]
but my heart has not
[c e a s e d]

you were a wonder
[f o u n d]
you were a wonder
[l o s t]
and neither of us knew the
[c o s t]

yes you were a wonder
[f o u n d]
and yes you were a wonder
[l o s t]
and now both of us know the
[c o s t]

So....critique?