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NEW STORY THREAD!
NEW STORY THREAD!
Okay, I know there's already a bunch in Inkwell right now, but I needed something new. The other ones are not moving or are too developed for me.
Here's my character: Nathaniel
Age: 13
Appearance: Normal looking by regualr standards, with plain brown hair and a gaunt look on his face.
Nathaniel was filled with a fiery rage. Why was it always HIM they decided was nothing special? He would show them! Nathaniel walked away from the building, not believing he had been rejected. It's not like EVERYONE can turn invisible! He filled out about fifteen applications, did one thousand pushups for them, and turn invisble. He couldn't believe they wouldn't let him into superhero school. Just because he couldn't fly.
Nathaniel didn't want to feel the rejection. He was not normal. He did not fit in with normal people. The truth that the people at Shane's Academy, also known as Superpoweed School, were telling him was that he didn't fit in with them either. He didn't fit in anywhere. He felt himslef unwittingly turn invisible and stalk down the road.
Don't feel afraid to use someone else's character or add something that doesn't really have anything to do with the plot!
submitted by Theo W., age 12, Dark,Dreadful Places
(January 19, 2013 - 11:23 am)
(January 19, 2013 - 11:23 am)
Just write the real story, please. I only wrote the Voldemort thingy because I was bored and waiting for you to write.
(April 1, 2013 - 5:27 pm)
Yes. That is one of the wackiest, funniest love stories I have ever read! As my family would say; "Well, it's a better love story than Twilight." So yes, I was cracking up all through it!
(April 1, 2013 - 11:23 am)
Wait never mind I read it wrong.
What? I'm confusing myeslf.
(April 1, 2013 - 3:48 pm)
I'm currently hating myself too, so I guess that means I hate us, but I agree. It should be John. Now that we're talking about him, he kind of reminds me of James M. Maybe it should be him, which would be a hysterical bizzare twist.
(April 1, 2013 - 5:57 pm)
*tsk, tsk* So many loose ends. I'm going to add on to this.
Nathaniel didn't want control of the Death Eaters, so he transferred leadership to John who renamed himself "Moldyvort" (German for Moldy Wart) and built a magnificent keep on a hill. It was the Death Eater manor and, in keeping with ancient tradition, it was named Canterlot. Moldyvort, a.k.a. John started the Death Eater Hot Pink Pony Fan Club. Surprisingly, it was quite popular. They can now be found in this world making a children's (and college student's) cartoon.
Nathaniel left Shane's Academy and used his invisibility to pick pockets... I mean, of course, he changed his name to Albus Dumbledore, grew a beard, and founded a school for superhero children that accepted anyone, no matter how talented. Aww. Brooke left the bakery, became best friends with Bellatrix Lestrange (apparently, the two shared a love for Anne of Green Gables and large books that hurt when they fall on your head called Little Women), and decided to live in a commune with Bellatrix. She kept no less than 42 cats and wrote cheap romance novels for a living. Elexhiia, meanwhile, went back in time and met her parents. They created a salmon farm and Elexhiia worked happily with them until she got bored, went into the future, and created the robot apcolypse.
Meanwhile, no one remembered Catherine and she got to go home to her family. She lived happily ever after and had no strange adventures or hobbies (except for a particular love for badminton) like everyone else in this weird story. Storm, meanwhile, went to the higher world where he now lives in California and terrorizes his friends. Do you know, he gave a cupcake to three of my friends today and they ate it? They need to learn a few lessons about life and death.
(April 1, 2013 - 5:53 pm)
HAHAHAHAHA!
(April 1, 2013 - 7:08 pm)
In my defense, I told them not to eat it.
(April 1, 2013 - 10:06 pm)
Good one! I was tempted to do something a little similar...
(April 2, 2013 - 9:58 am)
It just struck me, rereading this, that you had Brooke write cheap romance novels.... Are you serious? Or are you being ironic? ;)
(April 25, 2013 - 6:34 pm)
Uh, I just wanted Brooke to have a silly job/hobby. So, it was either that or crocheting house elf hats or making cat fur snoods. Yup. I don't htink you can make a snood out of cat fur, actually...
So, I didn't mean to make it ironic and I'm not sure how it would be ironic. Do yyou write cheap romance novels in your spare time?
(April 28, 2013 - 1:19 pm)
No! It's funny cause I detest romance of any kind (except Anne and Gilbert), so the idea of me, or my character writing romance novels is hysterical!
(May 6, 2013 - 6:34 pm)
Okay. It should be John. Bracing myself for impact.
"I tell you excatly what happen," said a cold harsh voice from behind him. Nathaniel spun around. It was John.
"John!?" exclaimed Nathaniel. "You're the one who..." he gestured around wildly.
(Overused idea float through my head. Theo, you're better than that! [thought; twin, explaining how he could destroy Shane's and be on an adventure at the same time])
"Well," John glanced around. "Yeah. Not my own handiwork, mind you, I would have destroyed it in a much more sofisticaye manner. But yes. I was the one who set this up."
"But-but..." stammered Brooke.
"But why?" Elexhiia finished.
"Why?" John's eye lite up with anger. "Why?!" Dr. Mod's eyes drifted towards the safe.
"Oh," Dr. Mods face went a ghastly white, making her look almsot comical, blue hair and a ghostly white face. "Oh my. It wasn't for the..."
"Yes," said John trumpantly. "I have secured the Fifteenth Element."
Nathaniel blinked. "Phosphrus?"
"Gah, do they not know what the fithenth elemet is?" John asked Dr. Moddington, irritated.
"N-no," Dr. Mods said weakly.
"Let me explain..." said John. "The fifteenth element was the name of a machine created in the late 1850s by Dibert MacDireletter. MacDireletter did not have superpowers, but he was very aware of us and our society. There was a concil back then, and when they found out, they were very much so tempted to lock MacDireletter up. It actually, for them, would've been a better move not to. MacDireletter swore vengance upon all unsually powered humans.
"While he was locked up, a local mechanic took pity on him and donated small clockparts for MacDireletter to waste his time messing with. The mechanic did not realise that MacDireletter could make a machiene using these parts, but he did.
"MacDireletter's machience became know as the fifthteenth element. It was rumored to be somewhere at Shane's academy. Sometimes," John grinned, "rumors are true."
(April 1, 2013 - 8:01 pm)
I simply love this! Great job with John!
Brooke ~
I stared in absolute horror. How could John have possibly betray us? Then my shock turned to anger. "HOW COULD YOU!" I nearly screamed. "After everything we've gone through. Everything. EVERYTHING! THIS is what you do?! Why did you even bother to help me, or Nathaniel, or Elexhiia, if you were always just going to turn on us?! I thought you were our friend!" John simply smiled. I noticed my hair was blood red with black streaks. I was now struggling not to turn into a panther and rip John appart. I glanced at Nathaniel and Elexhiia. They were just as angry as I was. "Where is it?" I asked, my voice low. He simply chuckled. He glanced behind him. I wondered what he was looking, then realized a second too late. He turned and leapt out an open window. I relented into my feline temptation, and transformed in seconds into a cougar, and lept out after him. I saw him fleeing down the street, and took off in persuit. I could hear Nathaniel and Elexhiia behind me. We'll get him, I said to myself.
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So, we're pursuing John. Perhaps John can actually do mind control as well? Play mind games. You know, cause people to see things, give them intensive pain, all from the mind... Just a thought... Cappie says mvtw. Sounds like a tv channel.
(April 1, 2013 - 8:56 pm)
Theo, do you still exist? If you do, please write the next bit.
If not, then I assume that the shock of John's betrayal caused you to keel over and die.
(April 4, 2013 - 7:11 pm)
I am waiting too, but never fear, Theo has not died! The Internet is mean.
(April 6, 2013 - 5:31 pm)