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Superhero RP

 

This is basically about us getting accepted at a superhero academy. We will work out more of the plot later!

 

Name: Aveleen ORourke

Appearance: Gold hair, white skin, BRIGHT green eyes

Power: Telekinesis

Personality: Smart, bossy, funny

 

We can start when we 've worked out a little more of the basic plot! Laughing

 

 

 

submitted by Brooke E., age 11, Arkansas
(July 18, 2014 - 8:17 pm)

YES! PLOT IDEAS R GREAT! PLZ TELL!

submitted by Brooke E., age 11, AR
(July 24, 2014 - 5:42 pm)

Ok, so, the academy is speeding up our powers, under TEA's orders. We are all suppose to be for the goverment U.S army. Layla was captured from her tribe in the Amazon, with other Scorions. They told her that her powers were to command three other scorions. She was captured, and the TEA added fast healing, spikes, and the healing cocoon to her power growth. They captured Aveleen, who they added metal controlling powers to her power growth, as well as flying, and teleporting. If you want that as your character's powers. So, when they captured the kids, they added the power growth serum. Layla, Aveleen, and the other kids escaped. There was one scorion that was Layla's companion. Ember. She died in the fire, or so Layla thought, and never returned. But she has, and is under TEA's control. Also, Tes, used to be a friend of Layla and Aveleen. Her full name is Eleanor Sally Taller. When the TEA got a hold of her, they found her powers useful, and made her skin paler than she already was, white hair, and made her eyes a little bit more bluer than usual. The reason Layla slightly remembered her, and why Tes thought that Aveleen was a bad thing, was because the TEA killed the real Eleanor ( or did they? ) and made a clone, who implanted old memories into the clone, and made the images so that Tes would think that Layla and Aveleen were evil, and should destroy them. TEA made sure that Tes didn't escape, because they thought her powers were very useful. When Layla and Aveleen escaped, it was in the middle of the memory wiping session. Aveleen got away with very little memories of Eleanor, and Layla got away with half. But, the images are blurry, or hazy, or end very quickly. TEA are planning on luring in the crew so that they can get a hold of them, and Tes is planning on turning on them right in the middle of everything when they are in a bad spot in the building. What do you think? :D Too much back story?

submitted by Noelle C., age 12
(July 25, 2014 - 7:57 am)

Oooh! I like it! also, if they made a clone, we can still use this plot! they made a mechanical clone. I'll eventually probably have control over something else, but I think Draco should get flight.  Also, it isn't specifically metal control. It's altering the molecular structure of matter and shaping it to fit her.

 

BLINDED WITH SCIENCE! 

submitted by Brooke E., age 11, Superhero plane!
(July 25, 2014 - 9:41 am)

" Frank, the people at the academy had the green liquid. That was for speeding up our powers. They might have been working of TEA, but we don't know if TEA themselves made the green liquid for them. Besides, it's raining. Let's see if we can get inside the fence," Layla said. As they started to walk, a voice suddenly sounded in Layla's head.

I know you're here.

I will find you.

Four years ago wasn't the end of me.

I have one last thing to tell you.

T.E.S 

 

submitted by Noelle C., age 12
(July 24, 2014 - 12:13 pm)

"If you want to come inside, you'll be ok!" said Aveleen to Tes. "No," said Tes. "Ok then......," said Aveleen. But as aVeleen passed Tes, she heard a strange noise. A whirr and click, coming from Tes's head. Something was familiar about that. Suddenly Aveleen grabbed hold of Tes's shoulder. "GET--" Tes started.

 

"I am NOT going to hurt you. Let me see something..." Aveleen pulled aside Tes's hair. On the back was

T.E.S

Tactical Enforcement System

Made for the hunting and recapturing of  

aRyaL ERomRevE

If the cogs in this traker's cranial system jam, please remove tracking device and memory card.  

 

So this girl.... was a machine? and who was she supposed to track? Wait. Make a few letters lowercase. Read it backwards. Oh, no........

 

The name was Layla Evermore.

 

( We can scrap this if Noelle had a better idea for a plot.) 

submitted by Brooke e?, age 11, AR
(July 24, 2014 - 5:55 pm)

I saw this right after I gave you the plot, but I like this one a lot! :D Choose whichever one you want Brooke, it's your RP. I also thought that if we kept this, then there are three others made for the hunting and recapturing of Frank, Aveleen, and Draco. Dun dun dun!

" What's wrong?" Layla asked as she stepped closer to Aveleen and the girl.

" NO, STAY AWAY!" the girl screeched and lifted up an arm. A large, arc of invisible force field went up and glided as fast as anything towards Layla. Layla's eyes widened as she was suddenly thrown back. She hit the ground hard. A ringing sound right after that came into Layla's ears. She screeched as it continued. She grabbed onto her head, her eyes shut tight, wishing it would stop. She suddenly felt like it was coming from somewhere. Her eyes opened and stared at the fence. It was electric, but it was also putting that ringing sound in Layla's ears. Layla suddenly roared in anger, and transformed. The pale girl screeched in terror, and released another force field. Layla leaped out of the way, and charged straight at the girl. The girl raised her arm again, but before she could release her power, another lion creature just like Layla leaped in front of her.

Ember. 

submitted by Noelle C., age 12
(July 25, 2014 - 8:07 am)

Aveleen knew it was about time tto test her powers. She touched the concrete, which was iced over. She was quickly covered in armor, made of solid ice. she ran between the scorions. "Stop!"

submitted by Brooke e?, age 11, Scorion plane
(July 25, 2014 - 9:45 am)

A siren sounded out of the TEA building and floodlights started raking the ground. INTRUDERS DETECTED, sounded a loud, metallic voice, COMMENCE RELEASE OF ATTACK DRONES. Draco squinted at the edge of the building. Several large, dangerous robots were released out of the top and started climbing down the side.

"We have to go!" shrieked Aveleen. She started to run across the road, but Draco blocked her path.

"If we go that way, we'll surely get spotted," he strategized. "We'll have to go where the floodlights can't see us." Draco gestured to a hole in the barbed wire that led to a sewage pipe.

"But we can't just leave Layla behind with that, that other lion thing!"

 

"Trust me," assured Draco, "She'll be fine. That lion is protecting her from tes, not attacking her." Frank agreed and went through the hole in the barbed wire, and down the sewage pipe. Aveleen cast one more worried look at the other lion, who was now fighting against one of tes's shockwaves. Finally, she followed Frank and Draco down into TEA's sewer system.

Aveleen wrinkled her nose. "It smells like dead fish in here.

Suddenly, Draco shushed everyone. "I hear something," he said. "I see something, too. A dim light." Draco pointed towards where he heard and saw them. "I think we should go that way." Everyone hurried after Draco, until they could also see the light. It was a pale, greenish light, and the sound was a cackle. Draco's shoulders slumped. "I thought that might've been the exit. We should probably still check it out."

They got closer to the light. Finally, they rounded a corner, and there she was. A pale, old woman wearing a lab coat and goggles, cackling a tune as she stirred a cauldron of green liquid. The woman looked up from her work. "Welcome, children," she screeched. "I've been expecting you."

submitted by J.B.E, age 12, superhero school
(July 25, 2014 - 8:46 am)

Oh and btw I know they are called scorions not lions I just wrote this in a hurry

submitted by J.B.E, age 12, superhero school
(July 25, 2014 - 10:40 am)

It's fine. :3 

submitted by Noelle C., age 12
(July 25, 2014 - 11:59 am)

So, do you guys think I should keep Visily in here or is she totally unnesassary? I really do love the story so far. It's very interesting.

submitted by Ellie, age 11, Place of question
(July 25, 2014 - 9:19 am)

Frank had no idea what was going on. They were just about to enter that base and probably save the world and stuff, and the BOOM! That Tes girl comes out of nowhere and messes everything up. Then that lion thing that looks like Layla comes out! It was too much. He had to do something. Frank trusted Aveleen, Draco, and Layla. But he didn't trust Tes one bit.

submitted by Pete the Trollslayer
(July 25, 2014 - 9:41 am)

Layla watched as Frank, Aveleen, and Draco ran towards the sewers. She had heard that she would be fine with the scorion, but no.

Oh, were you wrong Draco.

" Well, well, well. If it isn't my master," Ember hissed, her yellow eyes gleaming. Layla let out a feral growl.

" I thought you were on my side," Layla snarled, the pictures starting to piece together. Ember wasn't the same companion she knew four years ago. No this was Ember under control.

" Hahaha! It was just to lure you here. And I stopped little Tessy here because, you are mine to finish," Ember growled, her spiked tail whipping back and forth. Layla looked at Tes, who was still behind Ember.

" What do you mean she's yours?" Tes asked, looking very confused.

" I'm supposed to kill her," Ember growled, her long claws sliding out.

" Remember, that day, when the sun was bright. You asked me what our life would be like in two years," Layla's voice cracked a little, at the memory. Tes cocked her head to one side, as if trying to remember.

" Don't beleive a word she says! She's evil!" Ember hissed, trying to get Tes to think like she's supposed to. Layla kept telling her small little memories, but it seemed like Tes would get wrenched back when Ember would tell her something. Layla hung her head, knowing it was impossible. This was a clone. And it started to look like it was preparing to kill her. Layla suddenly heard a scream.

" Aveleen!" Layla roared, and leaped forward. Ember suddenly knocked her down, and put a paw on her chest. Tes walked over, and lifted an arm, when Layla noticed something dangling out of Tes's pockets. It was a dog tag. Layla peered closely. On the front it said Nightmare. On the back:

Rank: Sergeant

Under command of General Hassen, U.S Army 

Owner: Owen Maller, Member of TEA 

" AVELEEN!" Layla roared, trying to get up, but Ember wasn't letting her. Layla knew what she had to do. Her tail lifted up, smacked Tes away, and her tail whizzed through the air, slamming down onto Ember, all four spikes sliding in. Ember screeched in pain and fury. Layla leaped up, wrenched her tail out of Ember, and dashed towards the sewer.

Don't let them die, don't let them die. 

Layla shut her eyes tight as another scream erupted and echoed through the sewer tunnel. Images of endless halls, and tightening her grip on another girl's hand swam through Layla's mind.

It can't happen again. It can't! 

submitted by Noelle C., age 12
(July 25, 2014 - 11:49 am)

Draco stared at the creepy old woman. Everything was quiet for a second, so quiet he could almost hear Tes and the scorions fighting outside. Finally, the woman spoke again. "My name is Edna. You look rather thirsty, my dear," she said to Draco. "Why don't you have something to drink?" without warning, she scooped up some of the green liquid and shoved it in Draco's mouth.

"Ew! Why would you do that?" Draco spluttered, trying to spit the liquid out. But most of it had already been swallowed.

"it was for your own good, Draco," said Edna.

"Wait, how do you know my name?" Draco demanded. Wait, demanded? Draco didn't usually demand things. And, he usually stuttered, and, his voice wasn't usually that similar to a dragon's roar...

"Why, I know all your names, children!" Edna said. "But that's not important. The important thing is, this!" Edna gestured to the pot of green liquid. "This is called Facultanium. It is a liquid that is used to increase superhuman abilities. It's usually injected, but it can be swallowed."

"But why do we need it?" asked Frank

"You see, Frank," Edna replied, "I am the one who makes this stuff for TEA. Every day I toil restlessly in the sewers, brewing it. You may think TEA is evil, and I have to admit, it can be pretty despicable sometimes, but we're really just preparing you for an even bigger threat, One that draws closer every day from its home 5,000 miles away."

"What is it?" Aveleen asked nervously.

Edna leaned in close. "The scorion king." 

submitted by J.B.E, age 12, superhero school
(July 25, 2014 - 11:38 am)

"The scorion king?" yelled Draco. "What does that even mean?"

"He is the largest scorion in the universe," Edna said ominously. "Legend has it he is as tall as a skyscraper. He is slowly plodding towards us from his home many miles away, destroying everything in his path."

"But why?" asked Aveleen.

"It's the Falcutanium," Edna replied. "The scorion king is addicted to the stuff. He will not stop until he has consumd every drop of it, growing bigger every time he does. I'm afraid you children are the only ones who can save us, with the help of the Falcutanium."

"Is there a limit to how much we can have?" Aveleen asked nervously.

"Not really," said Edna, "But every time you have a dose of it you will become increasingly more powerful. At 10 doses, it stops being effective, and you become completely invincible."

Suddenly, Draco heard the metallic beeping of robots and the roaring of scorions in the sewers. "Go quickly, children," Edna said, quickly packing up her work tools and preparing to escape through a shaft in the sewer ceiling. "I'm afraid this will be the first of many battles."

With that, the old woman scuttled quickly through the ceiling and out of sight. 

submitted by J.B.E, age 12, superhero school
(July 25, 2014 - 7:19 pm)