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This is basically about us getting accepted at a superhero academy. We will work out more of the plot later!
Name: Aveleen ORourke
Appearance: Gold hair, white skin, BRIGHT green eyes
Power: Telekinesis
Personality: Smart, bossy, funny
We can start when we 've worked out a little more of the basic plot! 
submitted by Brooke E., age 11, Arkansas
(July 18, 2014 - 8:17 pm)
(July 18, 2014 - 8:17 pm)
Layla watched as Draco turned into a dragon. She heard the scorion king rumble angrily, saying how he meets the dragon again. Layla suddenly felt something within her stir. She stumbled a little, her mind filled with fog.
Concentrate. Layla heard the single command and knew it was Ember.
Focus. Layla shook away the confusion of why Ember was telling her this, and concentrated, trying to see the ground that her paws stood on. The haziness that she was seeing started to disappear. But as soon as it cleared away, a large paw came flying towards Layla. She leaped away, trying to calm her speeding heart.
Layla, think of me. Then think of me right beside you. Layla shut her eyes tight, thinking of Ember. She reopened her eyes, and Ember prowled towards her.
" This better not be a trick," Layla spit.
" It isn't." For with Ember, came forward two other scorions.
" We are under your command, Nightmare. We will fight till we die," Ember growled, glaring up at the scorion king. Layla nodded, and the four scorions leaped towards the scorion king.
(August 12, 2014 - 8:28 am)
Frank watched as Draco summoned the dragon, and while Layla did the same with three scorions. Aveleen just looked scared. The scorion king was all mangled, but he wasn't giving up yet. Frank had to do something. But what could he do? He closed his eyes, and thought positive thoughts. Like his mom and dad. Oh, If they could just get together again, Frank's life would be perfect. Then he figured it out. The real villain here is the scorion king. He's the one who hurt his friends. The one who messed with TEA. The one who took away his mother. The one who ruined his life.
Frank opened his eyes, and noticed something right away. Every one, except him, was in slow motion. Was he going so fast that it looked like that to him? He decided to try something out. He jumped, then fell, then jumped again, on nothing. Yup, just as he had expected, he was also going fast enough to jump on pockets of pure air. He was now ultimately powerful. He must look so fast to his friends. He then safely bounced back to the ground, and turned to the scorion king.
He muttered, "This is for my mom," and leaped towards his foe.
Also, Noelle, Draco summoned the dragon, he didn't turn into one.
(August 12, 2014 - 4:18 pm)
The scorion king was mangled..... so why was Aveleen still terrified?
Hello, Aveleen......
Aveleen gasped and tried to wrench the scorion king out of her thoughts. How could he stick in there when he was down for the count?
How? How, you ask? Your friends aren't fighting me.
What? No, it can't be.......
Yes, Aveleen. They're fighting a mirage.
You just made a mistake, scorion. I'll tell my friends.
You can't...... if you're out of comission.
No!
Aveleen screamed as she blacked out,watching her friends rejoice over the lifeless body of the mirage.
Plot twist! Sorry if this messed you up. We can forget about this if you guys dislike it.
I wanted to give Aveleen a reason for just standing there looking scared, so..... yep.
(August 12, 2014 - 5:49 pm)
No this plot twist is awesome!
Layla's gleamed with victory as the scorion king fell. But she suddenly leaped around, when Aveleen's body fell to the ground.
" Aveleen!" Layla rushed over, scanning her, trying to find something that hurt her. There was nothing. Nothing that seemed wrong. Layla felt something nudge her. She turned her head, her eyes meeting up with that of Ember.
" Look," Ember whispered, her eyes wide with fear, shock, and confusion. Layla turned her head back to the scorion king, wondering why those emotions were running through Ember like a river. The body of the scorion king... It would disappear by splitting, then reappearing, like a picture on a computer.
" What? What's going on with its body?" Frank asked bewildered. Layla's eyes widened.
" It was too easy!" Layla hissed in anger.
" You're right! The whole time he was swinging his tail, and moving his paws. Never once did he move forward or retreat! And if he's that big and powerful, he would have been regenerating, like Layla does! It's a fake!" Draco yelled, glaring at the spot where the fake, dead scorion king was. Layla looked back at Aveleen.
" Please wake up," Layla whispered, as she shifted back to human form.
(August 12, 2014 - 6:48 pm)
Frank looked at Aveleen, then the body of the mirage. It was all for nothing. His ultimate power was for nothing. Then he turned to Ember.
"You!" he raged. "You were controlling me! You took my mom! Where is she?!" Before Ember had a chance to answer, Frank was fighting her, delivering many punches and kicks in only a fraction of a second. Ember lashed out her tail, but Frank dodged, and with his new power, was soon on top of her.
"Stop!" Draco yelled. Ember and Frank turned to him and seperated. Draco was pointing to the limp body of Aveleen. Frank glared at Ember, then joined Layla next to Aveleen. Then, finally, something happened.
The dragon Draco sommoned pushed throught the crowd and looked at Aveleen. "I think I can help her," he said. But before he could do anything, little flakes of orange started falling off of him.
"Hurry!" Draco shouted. "You're dying!"
(August 13, 2014 - 1:29 pm)
That's right, but Layla doesn't know that Draco summoned a dragon, she thinks he turned into a dragon. She doesn't know that it's a different dragon. :)
(August 12, 2014 - 6:39 pm)
"I'm afraid the real scorion king is not even close to where we are," Phoenicious said. His ears pricked up. "Yes, I am sensing he is more then 500 miles north of here."
Draco's shoulders slumped in disappointment. "How, then, are we ever going to save the world?"
"There is only one thing we can do," Phoenicious replied. "Go back in time and kill the scorion king as a baby."
Draco's eyes got wide. "You mean," he spluttered, "You can TIME TRAVEL?"
The dragon nodded mysteriously. "Yes, Draco," he replied. "My power has few limits. But we must hurry. Frank and Ember, you stay here and tend to Aveleen. Draco and Layla, you'd better come with me."
Phoenicious led Layla and Draco away from the others into a small clearing. Then, he whispered some words in a strange tongue, and a swirling portal opened up right in front of their eyes. Draco and Layla gasped in amazement.
"We don't have much time. Step into the portal," Phoenicious said urgently. Layla, Draco and Phoenicious enetred the swirling vortex, and they were transported back in time.
Draco groaned as his head hit the dirt. Hard. He looked around. He was near the TEA building! But, it was not like the scary TA building they had visited. It was newer. Brighter. He spotted a young girl dancing in the yard in back of the building. She had blonde hair and deep blue eyes.
"TES!" Draco exclaimed. Phoenicious silently shushed him.
As Draco watched he saw TES beckon a girl with black hair over. That must be Layla, Draco thought. Soon, a boy joined young Layla and young TES. That must be me, Draco thought. He almost didn't recognize himself, since before he went to the fire realm, he had brown hair, not fiery red hair.
Draco, Phoenicious and Layla continued to watch the scene play out. "Hey guys!" called young Draco. "Look what I found! A scorion egg!"
(August 13, 2014 - 5:38 pm)
Layla watched as young Draco called out about finding the scorion egg.
" We do this now," Layla said, turning to Draco. They both gave a brisk nod towards each other, and headed towards where the egg was.
" Should I go get a blanket or something?" young Layla asked, her mind going through the small amount of knowledge she had about scorion egg caring.
" Draco, do it now!" Layla hissed to Draco. Draco nodded, and rammed himself into young Draco's body. Young Draco's eyes glazed over.
" I-I think we should leave it alone. If we bring it in, the TEA might test on it. We don't want that. Let's go," Draco explained, looking a little unsure of himself.
" Well, we can't just leave it here!" young Layla wailed.
" Alright. Let's go put it in that-that clearing we sometimes play in," Draco said, and the group hurried off to a small clearing. Layla placed the egg in the shade of a tree.
" We leave it here. And we don't come back until we're sure that it's gone. Alright?" Draco instructed. Layla nodded, and they left. Present Draco slid out of young Draco.
" C'mon. Let's get back home," Draco mumbled, looking pale, and weak. They stepped back through the portal. By now, Phoenicious's skin was half showing. The large dragon sniffed the air. His eyes widened.
" What is it?" Draco asked, a worried look on his face.
" He still lives," Phoenicious said his last words, as he fell to the ground.
If you guys don't want this, then change it up. I thought we should keep this around a little longer, like find a different, harder way to beat the scorion king. If you guys don't like it, then again, change it up! :D
(August 13, 2014 - 7:08 pm)
Aveleen felt like she was in a warm blanket, surrounded by blackness. A small part of her mind tried to wake up, but the rest was asleep. She thrashed around in her sleep and moaned.
(August 13, 2014 - 7:27 pm)
Phoenicious dissolved into a pile of orange dust and floated through the wind and out of sight. "PHOENICIOUS!" Draco yelled, tears streaming down his face. "You weren't supposed to die for days! The scorion king was supposed to die!
Draco turned on Layla. "This is all your fault!" he screamed at Layla. "We should've just destroyed the egg then and there! But, noooo, you didn't want to hurt another scorion, did you!"
"I'm really sorry Draco," Layla said. "But I don't think you should blame me for everythin-" Layla froze.
"What, what is it?" Draco asked, alarmed.
"Draco, look around you," Layla said. Draco looked. He gasped.
They were not back in the forest clearing. Instead, they were in some wasteland of a city. There were billboards all around that had pictures of the scorion king on them.
"We changed the past," Draco breathed. "Instead of caring for the scorion king, we abandoned it. I thought that would kill it, but I guess living on its own made it stronger. Now we're in some apocalyptic future where the scorion king rules the world."
"We have to go back in time again to set things right!" Layla gasped.
Draco shook his head. "We can't do that without Phoenicious."
"Then what are we going to do?"
"I don't know."
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I hope you like the plot twist. This RP is getting pretty intense!
(August 14, 2014 - 11:19 am)
" You can't blame me for not wanting the scorion egg to die! I was a kid remember? It isn't my fault! You were the one who found it in the first place!" Layla suddenly exploded.
" Well guess what? I was a kid, remember?" Draco hissed back. Layla growled in frustration.
" If we can't go back into time, then we have to kill the scorion king here, in the present. Now, I'm off to find the others. With or without you," Layla snarled, and started to walk away, scenting the air for Frank and Aveleen.
" Wait." Layla whirled around, her yellow eyes glaring at Draco.
" How are we supposed to kill him? Let alone find him?" Draco asked, looking helpless, weary, his eyes red from crying.
" I am going to die trying. And if you and the others are going to help me, then we are going to die trying."
(August 14, 2014 - 3:04 pm)
Aveleen sorted through the ruins of trash. If she found enough scrap metal, she could sell it to the king when she went back to his academy.
Layla saw her. Layla quickly changed back into human form and raced towards her.
"Aveleen!" Layla yelled.
Aveleen spun around. "How do you know my name? Who are you?"
Layla wondered if she looked different. "It's me! Layla!"
"I don't know a Layla. Are you from the scorion king's academy?"
"Scorion king's academy?"
"Back off."
"What?"
"I said, back off."
Aveleen hurled Layla back with her mind and ran. To tell the truth, she was scared. She hadn't dared show emotion for years. But when Layla ran up, though she couldn't explain it, she'd recognized her.
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So basically, since Draco and Layla changed the past, Aveleen doesn't know them. Then she somehow gets her memories back. I think Frank should still remember. Oh, and if we want to make it really bizarre, when we fix everything we arrive in our time on the day this story began. Just interesting making!
(August 14, 2014 - 7:20 pm)
I love your idea Brooke!
Layla's eyes widened as Aveleen ran away from her.
She doesn't remember...
" Draco!" Layla screamed out. A faint voice was heard, calling out her name.
" Draco!" Layla screamed even louder, tears starting to fall.
" Layla? Layla! What's wrong?" Draco saw that it was her, and ran towards her.
" Aveleen.. S-she doesn't remember.. We have to find Frank, who we don't even know where he is and if he remembers us. We have to kill the scorion king, who, again, don't even know where to look, and what the hey are we going to do?!" Layla fell down onto her knees.
" C'mon Layla. We gotta go try to find Frank," Draco said, a sad look on his face. Layla shifted, and scented the air.
" This way," Layla murmured, silent tears falling.
(August 15, 2014 - 7:50 am)
Frank kneeled at the ruins of the TEA building. He went there every day, since the day the scorion king took away his mother and killed her here. She was the first on he killed. The start of his reign of terror.
Frank got up to leave before he was seen, when he saw something himself. Two kids that he hadn't seen before at the academy. He sped towards them to get a closer look.
(Btw Frank can eventually remember Layla and Draco.)
(August 15, 2014 - 10:02 am)
Aveleen wondered why the strange girl had cried when she ran off. Was she an old friend of Aveleen's? Aveleen went back over and collided with her friend, Frank. "Sorry, Frank!" she said.
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So in this world, I already sort of know Frank. Yep.
(August 15, 2014 - 12:53 pm)