Hey, guys.  Sorry

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Hey, guys.  Sorry

Hey, guys.  Sorry I haven't been here for a while.  But how do you like the beginning of my 4th story?

Amazing, the fact that Scar was dead.  Chloe and her friends had been hunting him for awhile.  But Chloe could still feel a shiver rush through her as she remembered his cold gaze, his burning eyes.   And she couldn't help but remember Scar's dying words.  "You know what to do."

submitted by Leah G.
(March 10, 2009 - 2:37 pm)

It's splendid! Is Scar the same gentleman (ehem, for want of a better word) that killed Michelle's husband on a different post, or am I thinking of some other maniacal villain?

submitted by Mary W., age 11, Bordentown, NJ
(March 11, 2009 - 4:51 pm)

Oui.  Scar is the same 'gentlemen', if that's what you prefer, that killed Michelle's husband.  Stunning, isn't he?

submitted by Leah G.
(March 12, 2009 - 2:14 pm)

Wow. I have no idea what's going on, but I'm already trying to picture it... great!

submitted by Falmiriel
(March 11, 2009 - 7:06 pm)

Thanks.  I think this is the only place where I can actually put my stories.  It's great to have support with them.

submitted by Leah G.
(March 14, 2009 - 1:33 pm)

I like it. Write more please.

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(March 12, 2009 - 7:20 am)

All right, but i have to warn you.  That was just the beginning sentence.  The kids tell the rest of it, and the grownups only get a little part to say.

"Ann-Marie!" Michelle called, exasperated.  She looked at her watch.  30 minutes until her sisters wedding.  "ANN-MARIE!"  they had to get going.                                                                                                                    Ann-marie waltez down the stairs as if she had all the time in the world.  "Come on," her mother said impatiently.  "We have to drop you off at the Johnson's house."  Ann-marie inwardly groaned.  She knew that MRs. Johnson was a long time friend of her mom, but that didn't mean that she had to be friends with their little brat, Melody.

that's all i can do for now.  how do you like it?

submitted by Leah G.
(March 12, 2009 - 2:19 pm)