Chatterbox: Inkwell

Hi Everybuggy! I love to write. Here is a story I'm making right now about the Holocaust. This topic is new for me to write about, because I'm usually Realistic Fiction/Fantasy. Hope you like it! Btw, constructive critiscism is always welcome. I would like to know how to be the best writer I can be!

The Diary Of Ayla Azizi

December 3, 1943

My name is Ayla Azizi, a Jewish girl, thirteen years of age. My family and I live in a small house in the outskirts of Berlin. I write this journal in hope that someone will come to help us, for we live in constant terror. Any day the Nazis could come banging on our door, and find us. Several of my friends - Batya Luvin, and Raizel Saul, have already been taken. However, my family does have one very important thing that we only shall use if we have to… we have a secret trapdoor in the floor of our kitchen. We have stocked it with food and supplies, like candles, that we will use if the Nazis discover we live here. Oh, how I hope that does not happen. I know there are people fighting for the Jews, but Hitler and his horrible, horrible army are so powerful! How will anything ever change?