Follow meCha

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Follow meCha

Follow me

Chase me

See the truth behind the letters on the page

 

submitted by Galaxy of wonder
(January 10, 2018 - 6:31 pm)

GoW- I still don't know who you are, but this is incredible! Keep writing! Please!

submitted by coyotedomino, age 14, the Wood, Omniverse
(January 25, 2018 - 5:27 pm)

GoW- I still don't know who you are, but this is incredible! Keep writing! Please!

submitted by coyotedomino, age 14, the Wood, Omniverse
(January 25, 2018 - 5:28 pm)

I'm on the edge of my seat every time more of this story comes out!!!! 

Oooh, and they lost me on a trip? Wait... does that mean I died or got captured? Guess I'll have to wait and see... XD 

submitted by Aspen
(January 25, 2018 - 5:43 pm)

Thanks so much to those who have bothered to put encouragement on this thread! It means so much to me.

I can't post again quite yet; I'm on a computer that doesn't have my notes. 

submitted by Galaxy of wonder
(January 25, 2018 - 9:11 pm)
Realm backed away quickly. "Wait. You literally--I just arrived in the Chatterbox today. You're asking me if I believe in a bunch of stuff about glitches and things when I just got here--I don't even know much about this place! I'm not from this world!"
Viola considered it, then opened her mouth to say something wise.
"Yeah, that would make sense." She replied with a yawn.
She coughed and stiffened, correcting her posture and behavior. "The Chatterbox will be looking for a Glitch to blame. If you said no to this task, you would still find yourself involved, blamed." She stated, before looking at him with a small glow in her eyes. "If you would like to participate...here is what you must do."
*   *   *
Capture stiffened as he attempted to identify the Glitches in front of him. It was a pure honor that he was even allowed to hear their voices. "Sirs...I.." He began.
"It is your fault. Your knife pierced our only portal to the outside world, just seconds after the boy used his Name--knowingly or not--to escape." The Glitch in front of the group of black-cloaked men and women hissed. "But just as he used our job assisting CAPTCHAs to escape, we will use it to capture him once more." 
Capture flinched at the energy his name brought, but simply listened wordlessly.
"We need his name. We still do not know it's full power--and I suspect that the powers of Realm have only begun. We will use whatever force is necessary to bring him back...not as a fellow Glitch...but as a prisoner."
submitted by Galaxy of wonder
(January 25, 2018 - 10:00 pm)

Oh, no. What will happen to Realm?! Also, may I guess you, Galaxy? Because I think I know who you are....(Agatha says 'dedd'. She thinks that Realm will die!)

submitted by Vyolette
(January 26, 2018 - 11:19 am)

Please don't guess until the end of the story; after a short period, I will be revealing myself. I am extremely curious to hear your guess, though.

submitted by Galaxy of wonder
(January 26, 2018 - 12:46 pm)

I'm back! I had to put this away the other day because I would've gotten too excited. That said:

I love it so much! It's terrifying and exciting and awesome, and the suspense! My palace is a stronghold!?! Like Minas Tirith, under the shadow of the Enemy. They are coming for us, I see, but we will not yield! Eee, got to fortify the palace, set up a healing center, unless that's already done? I don't know. Got to ask Realm about the Glitches so we know what we're up against. Sneak it into a conversation about his past, maybe...

I'm so hungry for more. I want to know about Vyolette, her powers and what she discovered. I think I have an idea of what that mission was, but I want to be sure, and to find out what we got out of it, and how Aspen fell, and what happened to her after. What weapons do we have? What supplies? Is the Pudding's Place safe? Is that where my palace is? How much time is left before the invasion? What do we know of our foes? Is it going to be enough? What happens next??

So excited, I can't wait! 

submitted by Viola?, age Secret, Secret
(January 26, 2018 - 2:11 pm)

Ooh!! What’s going to happen?? Will Capture (what a legend btw) go to the CB? REALM! I really like your characters, and your CAPTCHA... world building? Is that what it is? ACK! I need a next installment!

submitted by Tuxedo kitten, The Karabujaun
(January 26, 2018 - 3:40 pm)

Explanation post!

 

Okay, so, I figured I'd have one of these about Glitches (or at least Realm's species of Glitch). You may have noticed that I've talked about 'names' and 'naming', etc, when in the setting of their little world/Dimension thing. In any case, I wanted to point out that a Glitch's power is based off of what their name is. Which is why Capture's name is...well. Capture.

submitted by Galaxy of wonder
(January 26, 2018 - 5:50 pm)
submitted by 100
(January 26, 2018 - 5:55 pm)

I just started to write the next installment, when I realized one thing. @Aspen, I don't actually know your gender yet, and since I write in third person, I need it for the story. ._.

submitted by Galaxy of wonder
(January 26, 2018 - 6:45 pm)

Aspen's a girl. She said so on Lilypad’s “CBr Names” thread.

submitted by Tuxedo Kitten
(January 26, 2018 - 11:02 pm)

First off, this is simply AMAZING, seoncd of all, OOH if Capture Captures people... then what does Realm do? DUH DUH DUH!

~Starseeker 

submitted by Starseeker, age 156 moons, Enterprise
(January 26, 2018 - 8:26 pm)

Move things between realms?

submitted by Viola?, age Secret, Secret
(January 27, 2018 - 10:35 am)