Flash Fiction, Anyone?

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Flash Fiction, Anyone?

Flash Fiction, Anyone?

I, personally, adore reading and writing flash fiction! For those of you who don't know, flash fiction is essentially a story written in about 2,000 or so words or less, I believe. (Forgive me if my numbers aren't right.) Anyhoo, would anyone like to share some flash fiction they've written?

I'd love to read it! 

submitted by The Girl Next Door, age 14, Washington
(February 18, 2019 - 1:21 pm)

Oooh! Hi TheGirlNextDoor! I'm Chinchilla, Chinch, Chilly, whatever ya wanna call me. (NOT. Snookums. NEVER SNOOKUMS) I don't think I've ever actually heard of Flash Fiction before I read this, but it sounds cool. So it's essentially a longish short story? I may have actually written it before, without knowing it.... But yeah, I might post some, if I write it!

submitted by Chinchilla
(February 18, 2019 - 3:20 pm)

Hi, Chinchilla!

I looked up the definition, and flash fiction is "fiction of a type characterized by being very short, typically consisting of only a few hundred words".

So, kind of like a short short story, I guess?

Anyway, it's nice to meet you and I look forward to reading some of your writing! 

submitted by The Girl Next Door, age 14, Washington
(February 18, 2019 - 8:10 pm)
submitted by Top!
(February 18, 2019 - 3:42 pm)

I'm pretty sure I learned about flash fiction last year in school, but I can't completely remember. And, on a similar topic, I wrote this last year in school and it might be flash fiction? Yes? It's 394 words...

Alex stared at his computer screen, shoved in the only clear spot among piles of unfinished work, stale chips, dirty socks, library books due five years ago, old toys, and broken electronics. Why am I doing this? he asked himself. Because I have to, he answered himself. But why do I have to? You just have to. No, I don’t. You do if you want to have a life! Okay, but why do I have to do it this way? Good point. You don’t. He slammed his laptop closed and grabbed a piece of paper. It seemed to stare him down. “No, paper. You will not distract me from completing this.”

Sal chose that moment to push open the door. “Alex? Were you just talking to a piece of paper? Are you okay? Do you need help or music or something?”

“No, I’m fine!” he snapped, yelling to be heard as a staticy buzz started up.

“O-kay,” said Sal tentatively, stepping back out. Alex returned to his paper and began to write. He had just finished his first sentence when he became aware of music playing in the background. Spooky music. “WHO PLAYED MUSIC?!”

“I did,” said a feminine, robotic voice.

“WHO ARE YOU?”

“I’m Alexa, your virtual assistant.”

“Alexa, shut up!”

“I will turn myself-” Alexa’s voice fizzled out as static overcame it. The music continued playing.

Why does this always have to happen to me? And right when I’m about to do something actually good? Well, is that going to stop me? No! It isn’t? It isn’t! I am going to do this anyway! And with that, Alex bent his head to the paper and continued writing. 

Just when he thought he was actually going to accomplish this, the music reached a crescendo. Alex’s head snapped up as if it was part of a puppet and slowly turned toward the corner where Alexa hid. If eyes could be lasers, his would have burned a hole straight through the muddy shoes and into the core of the robot. Unfortunately, eyes cannot be lasers, so he snatched the nearest object and threw it as hard as he could toward the source of the music. He didn’t realize that the object was a rotten tomato until the music stopped and he started thinking rationally. Ah well. At least now I can finish writing in peace. 

submitted by Kitten, Pondering
(February 19, 2019 - 11:55 am)

So, this is an expressive metaphor type thingy I wrote yesterday called "There were Dragons".

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Once upon a time, there were dragons.

They flew through the land, breathing magic into the eyes of man. They spread their wings over the sun and made puppets that danced on the grass, and they shaped the clouds into infinite forms. Because of the dragons, anything existed, even that which did not exist in the land.

Once upon a time, the world had layers and streams that ran to the center of the earth and back again, flowing with light and color. Inside the streams was life, and it grew and evolved and pulsated with energy, always changing. Because of the layers, anything existed, even that which did not exist in the land.

Once upon a time, magic was inside, but the magic has left now, and I am like a dead coral, a shell of something once great. Once upon a time, I swam in those streams, and I flew with the dragons, but now I am wingless, and the streams have dried up, and the dragons have flown away.

Where they have gone I do not know, but they must be somewhere. I seek paths through the tangled dead things in the land, but so far, I have not found a way out.

I need to catch up with the dragons. I need to take what made them leave and destroy what holds me captive here.

Once upon a time, there were dragons. They dazzled my eyes and sang magnificent songs.

But now they are gone.

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The dragons represent creativity, or things imagined in the mind. I guess I've sort of been going through a low point in that regard lately, but writing this helped me start to bounce back.

submitted by Micearenice
(February 19, 2019 - 12:36 pm)

Ahhhh, this is so beautiful! Wow. I love this so much. Amazing writing, Mice!

submitted by Leeli
(February 19, 2019 - 1:44 pm)

This is SO. BEAUTIFUL. I love it!

submitted by Kitten, Pondering
(February 19, 2019 - 3:14 pm)

I enjoy writing some flash fiction. This one is called A Road at Night. It's a little spooky.

The girl feels the cold, damp pavement as she walks down the road. It is night. The cool wind that so frequently pushes its way through Oakwood rustles her dark hair. The only light is that of the streetlamps, casting a ghostly yellow glow onto the concrete. The girl stops walking, and bathed in the light of a nearby lamp, she waits.

    Time passes. The clouds that once blocked the moonlight move, and new ones take their place. The girl stands waiting, watching. She is not old, not tall, and not moving. She wears a camera around her neck, and her hands are perched around the sides.

    A noise is heard. The girl lifts her camera, ready to take a picture. A shape moves across the light, its shadow flickering across the ground. The girl anxiously waits for the shape to come into the light. She holds her breath as wet footsteps slowly edge their way closer. She had been mapping this spot out for months, this was going to be it.

    “Listen, I don’t know what you think you saw, but we don’t have the time or resources to go hunt for some mysterious bogeyman.” The girl scowled. She would find it herself. If Officer Bluth didn’t want the fame and glory, that was fine with her. A loud sound brings her back to the present.

A foot, furry, scaly, wrinkled, and clawed slaps down on the pavement under the streetlight. The girl readies her camera. The foot is followed by a leg, then the torso. The girl is still like a tree, planted and unmoving. Any slight move could scare it away again. The girl raises her camera to her face as the creature steps fully into the light. The girl gasps.

The camera slips out of her hands and falls to the ground, cracking against the pavement. The girl does not care. She does not want to take a picture anymore. She backs away slowly, she does not want the creature to notice her exit. Suddenly, she is all too aware of how alone she is, how dark it is, how distant she is from the people she knows. The creature does not seem startled by the sudden loud noise of the dropping camera. It’s only reaction is to tilt its head in a slow, almost fluid, and deeply disconcerting way. The girl is frightened, and she continues backing away. Her bare feet scratch against the rough asphalt, as the creature continues to look. Suddenly, she stumbles, sending wayward stones skittering across the ground. The creature turns to face her, and extending a long finger, it speaks.

“Eeee wan chu. Eeee wan chu.”

Its voice is raspy and rough. It takes a step closer to her. Then another.

“Eeee wan chu.”

    This is too much. The girl turns around and runs. She does not stop until she reaches her home. She shoves her key into the lock, turns it, and dashes inside. She collapses onto the nearest chair, exhausted. Although she is in the safety of her own home, she is terrified. The face of the thing… it unnerves her to no end. Why had it not run when it saw her? As this thought crosses her mind, another bubbles to the surface. What noise had the creature made? Eeee wan chu. She tries saying it aloud.

“Ee wan chu... Ee want hu... We want hu...” The girl suddenly takes a sharp breath.

We... Want... You...”

 

submitted by General Waffleson
(February 19, 2019 - 6:05 pm)

Wow! This is really wonderful. I love it!!

submitted by The Girl Next Door, age 14, Washington
(February 19, 2019 - 7:56 pm)