YEAR OLD STORY!!!!

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YEAR OLD STORY!!!!

YEAR OLD STORY!!!!

 

So, yeah!  I started writing this story a year ago, with full intent of finishing it. (I actually have a little notebook that I mapped the whole plot out in)  But, school came around, and then I got distracted.  I'm going to try and finish it (or at least continue it) this summer though, so I though I'd share with you guys!  Anyway, without further ado, here is A Thing In Fancy Script!

(See, I'm great at temporary titles)

 

Chapter 1

Cyan 

I loved the market, the hustle and bustle, and the way that all the important announcements from the castle were boomed to the masses from the tower in the center of the fountain.  The one thing I couldn’t ever bring myself to appreciate was the immense crowd’s tendency to push me back and impede my vision. I knew very well that I was shorter than average, though it rarely mattered with the heeled boots and shoes I often chose to wear.  Today however, in order to be a little more inconspicuous, I had opted for a plain flat shoe, and a turquoise dress with a deep brown apron.
Many people would suppose that my efforts would be to conceal my activities from my parents, so focused on raising a good and proper young lady that they would ignore my own feelings, like in the tales.  In reality, my main objective was to stay out of the center of attention for as long as possible. I had always frequented the market, but recently I had grown to draw more attention that a typical lord’s daughter would.  People were not unkind, or even rude, but I simply preferred to allow them to go about their day. As for my parents, I had not exactly told them of my plans for the day, but I knew that they would be arriving soon enough.  My mother would scold me for leaving my thick brown hair down but for a partial braid in the back, but it would be kindly said.
By the time I made my way through the crowd, I was beginning to sweat.  I had forgotten how this dress trapped heat, and though it was cool, the sun beat down upon the market.  Many other girls were clustered about the front of the mass of people, and I slipped into their group without attracting attention.  Within moments, the creak of a carriage began a wave of cheers.
Finally, I made it to a position on a low stone wall which allowed me to see the large platform which had been erected around the circular fountain and announcer’s tower.  The king emerged from the carriage, which was a deep blue with golden trim, and waved to the crowd, smiling broadly. One of the girls standing on the ground below be scowled up at me, muttering about how unfair it was that I could be more visible.  The others around agreed, I could tell, but it was just silliness. The Queen’s Lot was totally fair, with each girl being given an equal chance. Well, all but one. And that girl did happen to be me.

I turned to speak to the girl, but my eye was caught by the king, who was looking directly at me.  Once he noticed my attention on him, he waved, grin widening to nearly split his face in two. Ok, maybe I did have a better chance than other girls. But I certainly hadn’t cheated to get there.
A sudden flutter on my finger drew my attention down to my hand, where a ring fit snugly around my middle finger.  Though it changed metals every day, the same veins and ridges formed the curved leaf every morning when I put it on, looking as if it had fallen fresh off a maple tree.  Today it was bronze, to match my outfit I suspected, but even that magic was not the most special thing about it. My ring was bound to another, identical down to the smallest detail, which was worn by my best friend, Alessio.  My ring pulsed in time with his heart, and his did the same with mine, though we rarely noticed in anymore. Our heartbeats has become almost identical in the five years that we had worn the rings, except when one of us was exceptionally hurt, or, in this case, nervous.
Not that Ales had no reason to be nervous.  It was his life being decided about after all.
His heartbeat continued to race against my finger as the king quieted the crowd and the queen joined him onstage.  The announcer clambered hurriedly from his place at the top of the stone tower rising above it all, and conferred with the royals before clearing his throat and calling out in the deep loud voice he was so famous for: “Announcing, the royal majesties King Ronan and Queen Elowen!”
The cheers were so loud I thought that they might have echoed all the way the the Braed Forest.  King Ronan laughed, and Queen Elowen smiled beside him, eyes full of joy.
“And,” the announcer continued.  “Our one and only Prince Alessio!”
Ales stepped out of the carriage, and all the cheers fell silent.  His heart pounding into my finger, he looked straight ahead as he made his way to the stage.  I suddenly realized the true reason that our rings were bronze. Ales’s hair was the exact color of the metal, gleaming on the sun while he made his way to his parents.  He too was wearing blue, a shade just deeper than the carriage making up the entirety of his high necked coat, and a swath of fabric which matched his hair and eyes created his loose trousers underneath.  His eyes were searching, looking over the crowd, searching for me, I knew. The moment his eyes locked on me the pounding of my ring faded, and he gave a slight nod before turning to his parents.

In the second these things had taken, the crowd had remained silent, but now they roared even louder than before.  The announcer struggled to quiet them again, and pulled a long roll of paper out of his coat pocket.
“Will all young ladies come up to the stage and form a like when I call their names,” he requested, wrestling the scroll open.  He began, and slowly every single 14 year old girl in the kingdom was called up to the stage. Soon, Alessio and his parents were surrounded by a growing throng of girls.  The king and queen grew more and more energetic as girl continued to stream toward them, looking resplendent and powerful in their finery and golden crowns. Ales himself, however, was becoming paler with each girl his parents greeted, his crown seeming to weigh him down, and I began to worry that he would faint before the Queen’s Lot finished.
Finally, there was a lull in the name calling, and the crowd hushed, peering around.  Only one girl remained in the crowd now, and no one yet knew who it was. I had hopped down into the crowd while the girls had been moving, and went mostly unnoticed as the announcer readied the scroll a final time.
“And now,” he said, drawing out each pause.  “Our final contender, the Prince’s Favorite.” Not a sound was heard through the whole market.  I felt my ring begin to pulse again, and realized that my heart was pounding as well. “And the Prince’s Favorite is,” the announcer paused, almost too long.  “Cyan Frued!”

 

submitted by OrangeAndTealMermaid, age 15
(June 23, 2019 - 8:50 am)

This sounds like a great story! I can’t wait to hear more! It does take a lot of time and motivation to finish a story, doesn’t it? But we’ll be here to cheer you on!

submitted by CignusMoon, age 159 moons, The Story World
(June 23, 2019 - 2:24 pm)
submitted by a top of faith, age o, catalyst
(June 23, 2019 - 3:00 pm)

Thanks so much Cignus!  I got about 15 1/2 chapters done last summer, but now my problem is there were things I alluded to in my writing that I never wrote down and now I can't remember what they were!  Anyway, here's the rest of Chapter 1.

 

Chapter 1 Pt. 2

The crowd parted as I stepped forward, feeling all their eyes on me.  I didn’t focus on them though, just Ales, looking terrified but partially relieved as I made my way up to him.  The king and queen were waiting for me at the edge of the stage, and the king offered his hand to help me up the steps.  I accepted, curtsying to the royal couple as the crowd broke into wild cheers once again.
Ales stepped forward between his parents, still looking stiff and scared, though I knew that only I and his parents could tell.  It was in the straightness of his back and the whiteness of his lips, but he managed to return a formal bow as I curtsied once again.
“Prince Alessio,” I said quietly.
“Lady Frued,” he returned.  Then, in almost an unintelligible whisper: “Cyan, what will I do-”
“One in five, Ales, one in five,” I hissed, stepping back into the mass of girls, all glaring at me, jealousy etched into their faces.  A couple weeks ago Ales and I had taken the time to look through the entire list of girls eligible for the Queen’s Lot, and found the rules surrounding the Prince’s Favorite.  I had a one in five chance of being chosen. Of being tied to Ales for the rest of our lives, not that we weren’t already. Of someday being his wife.
The announcer stepped forward again, a massive basket replacing his scroll.  “Within this basket,” he boomed. “Lays the name of every girl upon this stage. Queen Elowen,” he asked.  “Would you place the Favorite’s name within the basket?” The queen produced a bundle of papers, tied with a string.  They were small, and each was tinted the color of a rainy sky, Ales’s favorite. I knew that each of them bore my name, in the cramped, looping script of the queen, who had been so excited when Ales had told her of his choice that she had nearly fallen out of her seat.  There was one more within the basket, identical to all the other girls’ slips, but it was nearly impossible for it to be chosen. In one fluid motion, the queen unraveled the string and scattered the papers into the basket, reaching her hands to the bottom to thoroughly mix them with the other names.
“Now then,” the announcer began.  “Let’s begin.” My finger began to throb beneath my ring where Ales’s heart was beating faster and faster.
He came to stand beside the announcer when called to do so, ahead of the mass of girls that was slowly swallowing me up.   Slipping his crown off in one hand, Ales tilted his head straight up to the sky.
I couldn’t see when he plunged his hand into the basket, but I knew he had done so when the market became silent once again.  Wishing desperately that I could be beside him, I tried to push my way forward without disturbing any of the other girls as Ales rummaged around in the basket, but no one would budge.  Finally, stretching so high I felt I might begin to float at any moment, I saw Ales take his hand out of the basket and throw it into the air, a song slip of paper smashed within his fist.
The whole crowd inhaled.  A bit of paper stuck out of the side of Ales’s fist, but it wasn’t the grey blue of my extra slips.  It was a plain off white, which meant that it could be anyone’s. Any of these girls’ names could be on that tiny piece of paper.  Any of them could be the new queen. Any of them could take my place as Ales’s best friend.
The announcer took Ales’s crown from his other hand, and he unfurled the crushed slip of paper.  A gasp sounded from his throat, and my eyes began to sting. So many times I had promised that I’d stay with him, no matter what, but what if, what if I wasn’t-
Taking in a long breath, Ales called out loudly: “Cyan Frued!”
Silence.  Then, loud, long, resounding cheers, echoing off the buildings and up into the sky.  Swiftly parting around me, the other girls mostly shot daggers at me with their eyes, though several I saw clapped along with the crowd.  A few were crying, though what their feelings toward me were I couldn’t tell.
Ales was waiting for me, I saw.  At the end of the tunnel of girls, he stood grinning shyly, but I knew he was bursting with happiness.  It would all come out later, but for now he was composed. A prince. And now, I was his princess. A grin grew across my face as I neared him, and when he took my hand and crushed the paper with my name on it between us, both our hearts finally slowed to beat as one on our fingers.

submitted by OrangeAndTealMermaid, age 15
(June 23, 2019 - 4:15 pm)