I will post my story tomorrow, as it is late here.  But I will tell you what it's about:

It's a story about four of my stuffed animals. Named Wiggly, (Pig) Sir Moo (Cow) Max (Donkey) and Nibbles (Mouse).  Sir Moo thinks he's a knight for Queen Whatshername.  It's an adorable story, but I'm stuck at the moment.

Ok, here's the story.

"I'm telling you, Queen Elizabeth the II was better!" That was Wiggly.

"Queen Whatshername was better than the II AND the III!!" That was Sir Moo.

"Why are we fighting about this? Who cares who was better?!" That was Max.  "Sir Moo, how do you have a queen that you're a knight for if you're not even a knight! You don't have a suit of armor even." Max asked the cow. "It is not my fault that the royal tailor never got me fitted!" Sir Moo said in his fake-ish British accent.  "So does the queen call you Sir Moo or Knight Moo?" Wiggly asked him. "Neither. She calls me by my full name."

Sir Moo always said that his parents named him after a famous cow school. Hence his name was Moovard Henry the III.  Wiggly laughed at the thought of a queen always calling him that.  Then she wondered what kind of animal Queen Whatshername was, but she didn't have to ask Sir Moo herself. Max had beaten her to it. When asked, Sir Moo said, "Queen Whatshername is a starfish.

There was silence from Max and Wiggly, untill Wiggly said "Whatshername is a.... starfish?" "Queen Whatshername Wiggly, and yes, she is."  Then a squeaky voice said, "Who's a starfish?" It was Nibbles.  "Hello Nibbles, we just found out from Sir Moo that Queen Whatshername is a starfish." Max told her.  Nibbles looked confused.  "But if Queen Whatshername is a starfish, doesn't that mean Sir Moo was a Knight underwater?" Everyone looked at Sir Moo.  Then Moo said, "She was a... unique starfish, has an allergy to water."  "Sure Sir Moo, sure."

"So what should we do now?" Wiggly asked. "I have an idea!" Sir Moo said a little to loudly.  Nibbles covered her ears.  "We should go see Queen Whatshername!"  Max shook his head.  "We donkeys don't like getting wet Moo. Nibbles, what do you suggest?"  Nibbles gave Max a blank look, as she was still covering her ears.  Sir Moo glared at Max.  "Did you not hear me? Queen Whatshername has an allergy to water!!!!"  "I have never seen a starfish that was allergic to water Sir Moo," Nibbles told Sir Moo. "Are you sure she isn't part of your wild imagination?"

Sir Moo almost fell over with shock.  "PART OF MY IMAGINATION? PART OF MY IMAGINATION??!?!?!?!?!?!!!!" Sir Moo sighed.  "I can't deal with this.  I'm going to raid the humans refrigerator."  Wiggly shook her head and said "He won't be able to reach the handle.  I'll go help him." And she walked off.

That was a lot of typing. Whew!

(Also, any ideas to move the story foward will be welcome XD)

Would it be ok if I post a writting assignment I'm doing? If so, I'll do that later.

I had to write a historical fiction story for composition and I'd like to post. It's about romans when the barbarians were invading.

   "cornelius, Cornelius," Antonia cried, running to meet her brother. "How was rome? did you go to the Clleseum? Did you go to the circus?"

   "Yes! Yes! Avus (latin for grandfather) took me to the charriot races. Oh, it was..." the two walked through the city to their house, talking all the way.  Later that day, a soldier came to see their father. "General," panted the man who had run 5 miles to get to the city. "general, the barbarians have attacked the garrison outside the city. They have taken it and only a few of us escape. They are marching towards the city!" More tomorrow, hopefully.  Kudos for any Constructive Critisism.

woww this is cool. 
I'll hopefully post part of one of my stories sometime! 

Above cool story! I might suggest a paragraph break at "Later that day..." are there going to be sympathetic barbarian characters? Also by the way did you mean to type colosseum...? 

I love studying this period of history so yay  are the barbarians Gauls, by the way?