Castle Solo Write

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Castle Solo Write

Castle Solo Write

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Once upon a time, in a kingdom far far away, there was a castle. A big castle, a mysterious castle, a happy castle, a sad castle, a busy castle. It was all of these things and more. The common folk passed by everyday. Some entered, to voice their concerns, to voice their wishes. Some entered, for unknown purposes, and some never left. 

This was a castle. But not just any castle, oh no. It had a name. Florin Castle. And inside this castle, a story unfolded . . .

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Name:

Age:

Gender: 

Job/Position:

Personality:

Appearance:

Talents:

Flaws: 

Family (or the lack thereof):

Password: 

Shipping:

Other:

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In regards to the character sheet

For this character sheet, you're allowed to meet any character, as long as it fits the requirements of being able to fit in to a medieval fantasy setting. Your character is allowed to have magic but I might ask if I can tweak it slightly (just go all out, I generally don't care). The password is: omnipotent. Your character can also be anyone that has any relation to the castle! So, your character could be the crown prince! Or a servant. Or a commoner who passes by the castle everyday. Or a witch in the castle dungeons. Anyone

Also, for job/position, if your character is, say, a child, you can just put child, or whatever description fits your character closest. 

If you have any questions, feel free to ask here, or on YWP (if you're on it). Also, if you have any suggestions for plot/worldbuilding or any requests, feel free to ask too!

Max 1 character per person. 

Accepting 10 people! 

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Yep, a solo write! I know I already have a ski lodge, but it's almost done anyway, and I expect this will take a while to fill up. Please read the whole thing, idk if the information is that important but it's important anyways (maybe, I honestly don't know).

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submitted by Raining Rainbows
(July 26, 2020 - 7:58 pm)

Aaaaaaa this is so amazing! Your writing is so good and I can't wait to see what happens next!

submitted by Agent Winter, age Classified, Enceladus
(August 10, 2020 - 2:50 pm)

Fantastic, as always! Pies before guys is my new favorite phrase XD

submitted by Quill
(August 10, 2020 - 3:35 pm)

I love this! Also...

submitted by Sammy Everlast
(August 10, 2020 - 3:52 pm)

Nice! You're writing is so funny and I love the caracters' relationships.

submitted by DoodleGirl , age 13, Earth
(August 11, 2020 - 8:53 am)

Chapter 79

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“aaaaaAAAAAAaaaaaAAAAaaaaHHHH!” Liam shrieked.

He had dashed off to investigate the source of the glowing, and found a pond. It really looked like a magical pond. The water was crystal clear, so clear that he could see the bottom, with seemed to be fathoms and fathoms down, yet Liam could see the grass and water plants down at the floor as clearly as he could see the forest around him.

He had noticed something moving. Was it a fish? No, it was a deep green scaly horse with a dripping wet mane, thrashing fish tail, luminescent green fins, and glowing yellow eyes.

It was a kelpie.

And then Liam had backed away, stumbling across the grass, away from the kelpie, away from the ocean-deep pond, away, away, away.

But then the kelpie had leapt out of the water.

And suddenly, it wasn’t so horrifying. It was beautiful, in an eerie, mysterious way. It reminded Liam of deep ocean diving, swimming among kelp forests, waving sea plants, and the world being completely quiet.

Liam had stood up. 

He had walked to the silent kelpie.

Touched its scaly side, climbed on its back.

And then the spell broke. The kelpie roared, and twisted and churned violently, leaping into the water. Liam was trying desperately to get off, but he couldn’t! “HELP!” he screamed, holding onto the edge of the pond as the kelpie tried to drag him under, down to the watery depths of the pond.

Pounding feet, rushing toward him.

And then Liam’s hand let go. The kelpie plunged into the water, and Liam couldn’t breathe.

He was surrounded by light. Light, refracting off the surface of the water, shining down into the depths of the pond like spotlights. He was surrounded by water. Water, flowing everywhere, closing in on him, suffocating him, bubbling around him as the kelpie swam deeper.

He was surrounded by silence.

And suddenly a hand plunged into the water, sending bubbles up, and breaking the silence. It hooked onto Liam’s arm, and jerked him upwards, the kelpie getting left behind.

Liam broke the surface of the pond, gasping for air.

“Liam!” Roslin said, “Are you okay?”

“Ehhhhh . . . how about no?” Liam said, coughing.

A couple minutes later, Liam was all bundled up in a blanket, and Lena was lecturing him while he rocked back and forth in the wagon. “Dude, you can’t just go running off to somewhere whenever you like, you have to think about safety and stuff,” Lena said.

“I know,” Liam mumbled.

“Okay, good!” Lena said.

“Ehmmmm, Liam, if you, I mean, I’m glad, well, um,” Princess Bella stammered, “Um, you’d better be okay!”

Princess Bella walked away, pulling Arc with her.

“She’s got communication problems, what she means is that she’s glad you’re okay,” Roslin said with a faint smile.

“Oh! Thank you princess!” Liam exclaimed.

“It was nothing!” Princess Bella called.

“At least she’s warming up to people?” Liam said, catching sight of Roslin’s sour expression.

Roslin shrugged.

Liam shivered. Even though he had a blanket, he was still cold. “I really wish I had chocolate right now,” he said, “chocolate is the best.”

“Agreed!” Sylvia said.

“Haha, I smell chocolate right now,” Brigit laughed.

“I don’t think that’s just you,” Liam said slowly, “I smell chocolate too.”

“And gingerbread,” Sylvia said, “and peppermint, and icing sugar, and gumdrops.”

The wagon rounded the corner, and Liam’s eyes widened. A gingerbread house sat snugly in between trees on the side of the road, with candy cane fences, gumdrop roof, candy glass windowpanes, and a chocolate chimney and door. Enticing scents wafted from the slightly opened door, smelling of chocolate, and sugar.

“What is that thing?” Princess Bella asked.

“It’s a gingerbread house, duh. Haven’t you read any books?” Marina said.

“Oh yes I have, have you learned anything about rhetoric?” Princess Bella said hotly.

Liam smelled something else. Burning sugar. Smoke.

“Guys! I don’t think this is the time to have an argument, there’s a fire in there!” Liam exclaimed, jumping down from the wagon.

Marina and Princess Bella forgot their argument temporarily, and turned to the house. Pink and yellow flames were licking the windowpanes, melting the sugar glass into sludge. Smoke was flowing steadily out of the chocolate chimney, which was melting as well.

“Water! We need water!” Bradley said, looking around wildly.

Sylvia jumped up. “Water!” she shrieked, and a jet of water burst out from her finger, knocking down the chocolate door, and dousing the roaring flames inside.

After the last flames sputtered and died out, Marina carefully stepped over the chocolate door and peered inside, followed by Liam and Arc. 

Inside was a melting mess of what seemed to be deformed chocolate tables and chairs and burnt crisps of paper and books. “There’s a basement, should we check it?” Arc asked, pointing to a trapdoor that had a couple of scorch marks on it but otherwise seemed perfectly fine, curiously enough.

Marina nodded, and opened the trapdoor.

As Arc and Marina descended into the basement, Liam picked up a couple of loose pages of paper that had only been burnt at the corners. He glanced at the scribbled writing on it. The first page was about how to catch porcupines.

The last page was about the proper spells needed to cause someone to slowly go insane.

Oh no . . . oh no . . .

Liam felt sick to his stomach.

What kind of person would devote their time to writing something this horrible? This is cruel. I hate this.

“Ooh, are you writing a book?! Can I see?” Brigit exclaimed, popping up behind Liam.

Liam yelped, and covered up the papers. What would Brigit think of the pages?! “No! He exclaimed, stumbling over his words, “They’re not for you to see!”

He stuffed the pages in his backpack.

Brigit frowned, and was about to say something, when Marina’s voice echoed from beneath them.

 “Guys . . . come look, I think you guys should see this,” she called.

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haha it's chapter 79 because I completely forgot what chapter number this is 

submitted by Raining Rainbows
(August 13, 2020 - 10:59 am)

I love the fairy tale-esque theme you've crafted in this story. It is such a great piece of writing and I'm really excited to see how this plays out. 

submitted by Luminescence, age XI, California
(August 14, 2020 - 3:22 pm)
submitted by New Chapter!
(August 14, 2020 - 12:56 pm)

lol so I'm discontinuing this bcause I've lot motivation :p so . . . yeah I'm not going to be writing any more of this XD

submitted by Rainbow Riot
(August 17, 2020 - 8:49 pm)

*cries* *wipes away tears* *smiles* Well, I don't want to make you feel bad by telling you I wish you'd continue it (true), so let's focus on the good! This was an amazing piece of writing and I'm so glad I got to read at least some of it. (also true.) If you ever need another writing project, please think about continuing it! 

-Lumi, an enthusiastic reader 

submitted by Luminescence, age XI, California
(August 17, 2020 - 9:48 pm)

Aw, no worries! I get not having motivation. Either way, you're a fantastic writer!

submitted by Quill
(August 18, 2020 - 12:56 pm)

It was going so well and I really enjoyed it!  I understand losing motivation.  Just remember, if your motivation ever comes back please continue this!

submitted by Peregrine
(August 18, 2020 - 11:25 am)