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Would anyone be interested in reading a bumpy first draft of a Christian spiritual journey novel?
Of course they don't. All your writing is terrible. And all of your ideas are about character arch.
Oh, Dynasty, shush uo!
You shush up, furcake!
no, you shush-
you little-
girls! I wasn't asking you! Would you please just let the CBers answer? sorry about them, I'm going to sign Dynasty up for obedience lessons.
obedience lessons? what do you think i am, a pet dog?
Dynasty. shush up!
submitted by strawberri, age 13 winters
(October 10, 2020 - 3:56 pm)
(October 10, 2020 - 3:56 pm)
strawberri, stop beating yourself up! Your writing is really good, especially for a rough draft. No one's writing is perfect before editing, and I would completely understand it if you want to wait to share until after you edit it, but it is good. Also, one strategy that might work is editing each piece and then posting it when you finish with that. This way, you can keep up with your editing, and also share it. And no matter what, this is not terrible!
(October 18, 2020 - 4:35 pm)
Hey strawberri, stop banging your writing! It's totally fine if you decide you aren't comfortable posting it until it's more edited, but this is not terrible and not something you should be ashamed of sharing! *sends positive vibes your direction*
(October 18, 2020 - 10:32 pm)
I'm sorry guys, I know I disapointed you. i really feel bad about this, and i think ist's for the best if I don't bring my self-doubt issues to the chaterbox.
(October 20, 2020 - 4:24 pm)
It's okay! Please don't beat yourself up. I completely understand not feeling comfortable sharing your writing, but I thought it was really good! Especially for being unedited. Just know we love and support you!
(October 21, 2020 - 1:54 pm)