'Prompt' Exchange

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'Prompt' Exchange

'Prompt' Exchange Thread!

A thread for random ideas you thought up but are probably never going to write/a place to brainstorm cool plots, whether or not you end up going any further.

Maybe you'll inspire someone else with cute, heartfelt, mysterious, angsty, or flat-out weird ideas? Maybe you have a really cool first line or interesting premise, but don't know where to use it? Maybe you're looking for something to motivate or inspire you, but don't know where to start? Or perhaps you just want to design an OC without writing a whole story, or concoct an outline for an overly-convoluted scheme? Perhaps you really want to see more post-apocalypse cyberpunk or a fresh take fantasy or pure fluff-mance stories, or something niche and oddly specific, and want to egg random people on until they finally write it for you?

Well why not try exchanging with others? Drop off ideas that you might not want to write an entire thing about, and pick up other people's ideas to test them out. Maybe you'll find a new favourite genre or writer; maybe you'll finally cure your writers' block. Challenge yourself! And of course, have fun! 

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 17, 2021 - 12:28 am)

Ooh, simple premise, but it could turn out cool!

It sorta reminds me of the core frame of the original Snow Queen fairytale.

Also the quote is hilarious, I might borrow that to use in some roguish, comic'y-relief character~ 

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 22, 2021 - 8:01 am)

Here's some more snippets from my story.. thing with Ermir and Dorian! For context on the last two parts, Dorian is forced to move out of the city. The last part is Ermir just reflecting when Dorian left.

Aaaa, I need to think of a title for the story. Any suggestions? :D 

-

Ermir chuckled, taking Dorian's hand into his own and guiding the slender hand over a fret. Dorian had been struggling with playing the acoustic guitar for the longest time, and so, Ermir took it upon himself to teach the ravenette.

"Like this?" Dorian asked, softly strumming a chord.

Ermir softly smiled and nodded, "Just like that."

-

"Don't leave me," Ermir begged, hugging Dorian close to his frail and delicate body.

The sun had already disappeared from the sky, on the complete other side of the world. The only sounds echoing off of the empty sidewalks and streets was the faint sounds of nature. The moon had risen and the sky was a dull shade of steel blue, slowly fading into a darker blue.

Dorian let out a quiet chuckle, the soft sound lingering in the air. "I'll be back."

"Dorian.." Ermir started, grasping at the ravenette's mustard yellow sweatshirt.

Dorian gently grabbed Ermir's hands, making the blonde let go of his sweatshirt. The ravenette already started pulling away. "I promise you that I'll be back."

-

"Dorian," Ermir murmured under his breath, watching the whispy clouds roll by.

The sun had been on the other side of the sky, but the clouds were still lined with a dust pink. the moon had risen. The weather was pleasant with a soft, cool breeze blowing the plants in the wheat field.

"I miss you." 

submitted by Hollyshock, You'll Never Know
(December 21, 2021 - 12:50 pm)

Aaah, it looks so good and subdued-sad so far~

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 22, 2021 - 8:05 am)

I did not look at the other prompts, so this might have been suggusted before. Or something similar was suggusted.

 

 

There is a ghost that resides in _________. The ghost is only able to be seen by those who will die very soon. However, (Insert name) saw her five years ago, and never died. there were many close encounters, but no one knew why. The person still sees the ghost, who seems to be causing the accidents. But what if that's not the case? 

submitted by Pancake
(December 21, 2021 - 1:42 pm)

That sounds like a cool, unique premise!

Maybe it could turn into a mystery rom-com? Or it could be more in-line with horror? Personally I lean towards the former, but who knows?

Great idea, Pancake!

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 22, 2021 - 8:09 am)

[. . . . .]

Eula gently swiped her thumb over Bitty's chapped lips, pretending not to notice the anguish in her eyes. The pink eyes and pale skin of the latter were scarred with unmistakable tearstains, traced and deepened by the thin shadows and highlighted dyed purple by the faint bluish-purple glow of the lab's 'equiptment'.

Only the golden eyes that stared back didn't match the scene.

"Lala..." The words were choked out, raspy and painful, "Lala, please don't... P-please- I beg you, I'll do anything... Just please don't do it..."  

The golden eyes remained empty as a smile creeped up into their matching lips. It should've worked. That was what made her want to laugh; just a little while ago--heck, just days ago--and that kind of begging from the only person that meant anything in her life would've made her drop everything and desperately go over in an attempt to soothe the girl. It really should've worked this time too.

The corners of the golden eyes creased until the gold disappeared, as if to hide the hollow irony within.

"Sorry, Bitty. I'm afraid I can't." Her thumb continued its trek across Bitty's cheek. The pink eyes widened in horror.

"W-why? If someone's threatening you, I can-" 

"Bitty."

The pink eyes lowered, voice trailing off, and Eula's hand fell to her own side. The invisible red string that connected them was clipped before her eyes. For good. It was a done-deal. Absolutely over.

"I said 'I can't,' didn't I?" Her eyes were dark and yet still seemed to shine, glinting ominously against the dimness of the room. "I meant it."

Her eyes swept the dim room, as if to punctuate her sentence, and red button caught her eye on the control panel. It was impossible to see from where Bitty was currently situated, and as long as she didn't come any closer and was kept distracted, it would stay that way. Eula smiled, a gesture that went unnoticed under the cloaking dark. She slowly edged towards the button, all senses peeled for any strange occurrences.

"Lala, wh-why are you doing this? Answer me for real this time." Bitty's voice trembled, eyebrows scrunched up like she was pretending to be angry or commanding, or maybe both. It was just adorable. The smile sunk deeper into Eula's lips. Why? Did it really matter, why? When had it ever mattered before? Did it- No. Calm down. Eula shook her head lightly and the dark crawling-feeling under her skin dissipated, like ice to a blowtorch. She was no monologging villain, and certainly not some idiot who’d ruin her own plans by revealing them to a party that couldn't be trusted-- especially not when the other party was clearly dead-set against her own goal.

She forced out a cold laugh. 

"Quit playing around. It's over, Bridget." Bitty looked like she had just been slapped. 

"Bridget?" Disbelief and indignation rose in that usually-soft voice, actually making it sound angry for the first time. "Since when- What- Did you just- Why-???" She sputtered, seemingly incapable of forming a complete thought in frustration.

Eula internally punched herself, desperately forcing down the lid of the wooden chest that held her heart and those pesky left-over emotions with every mental ounce of strength she had left. Why did she have to say something so openly provocative??? Who knew what would happen if she let herself lose her cool here? That had been way too irresponsible! She exhaled and focused on her body, on steadily inching towards the button, biting back curses and forcing herself to retain a blank expression. Maybe… Just maybe, it was for the best, after all…

However, Bitty seemed to notice this strange behaviour and in an instant her eyes darted about Eula's direct sorroundings, and spotted the button. It all connected in that moment; her eyes widened, she lunged forward.

"LALA NO-" It was only a split second that Eula had to react, but pushing a button is so often easier than keeping someone from doing so. When the flurry of movement ended, there was only silence. Black, sickening silence. Eula removed her hand and the button stayed down, fixed in its "pressed" state. 

Suddenly, a wave of deadening sound rent the very air, pulsing through and rocking the ground like a violently hungry monster tearing to get in. A crack appeared in Eula's composure. The shaking and tension only let it spread; then silence again. 

But the damage was already done. By then, the crack had spider-webbed, wiggling itself into a thousand pieces, all threatening to shatter loose at the slightest breath.

A whimper stirred the thick silence.

And Eula broke.

A laugh tore from her throat, every last particle reverberating-- trembling in relief as she doubled over, her insides no longer threatening to burst open in the name of hiding that unwanted secret. It was over. She did it. Her laughter echoed and bounced around everything, tickling her into laughing again, somehow even harder.

"Lala-- no, Eula! How... How could you?" Bitty's torn voice drew her back to reality. It sounded painful, like getting those words out was ripping her throat apart, making the other girl grimace internally. She made no move of resistance when the gentle girl reached up and grabbed Eula's collar with all the force she could muster, wrenching -- or at least trying -- the sturdier-framed rebel. Eula's expression didn't change as she was fixed with a glare, eyes brimming with tears; her tiny frame trembling with anger and grief. Nothing came out of that golden-eyed face. She didn’t need to justify herself. Instead, she just watched, pretending as if she felt nothing as the girl she had once loved brokenly sobbed into her chest. 

Deep down, Eula knew it wouldn’t matter in the end. None of it would. It was simply never meant to be.

She raised her head, as if staring into the blackness would cue a hidden source of refreshing rain, or reveal the framework and machinery of a stage. But this was no play. The lab would not disappear, melt like undried paint under raindrops, no matter how hard they tried. Her empty yellow eyes dismally bore into the dark, thinking, but only faintly to tune out the sobbing. She wondered if she'd be ordered to kill Biddy next. If she would have to return to the tirn world outside and witness all she'd done. If she'd have to face the villagers some day. But she knew. Her time had not yet come.

Fleeting emotions, or even deeper affection, would only hold out -- linger helplessly in this world -- for so long. But this was all for The Cause; and The Cause would last for years to come. It was the beginning of something new and real, and would change everything for the better. She just knew it.

And so here was no going back, nor was there any room for compromise. 

[Fin]

~~~~~~~~~~ 

This is a snippet of something larger that I 'planned' but never really got anywhere with. I like the drama tho' :p

Any suggestions or feedback? Like, do certain sections sound clunky or odd? I was practicing with a different style so it's a bit new to me, and I'd really appreciate any constructive criticism!

submitted by Jaybells, age Nebulous, Lost in a Story
(December 22, 2021 - 8:55 am)

This style of writing is so nice! I adore this snippet. AaAAaa there's so much emotion and everything is so nicely written. I can actually invision this and the dialogue is just *chef's kiss*. The description and details are so lovely and it's just so beautifully written!

If you plan on going any further with this, I'd love to read more!! :D 

submitted by Hollyshock, You'll Never Know
(December 23, 2021 - 2:10 pm)

Aw, thank you!

I'm not really sure what else I would honestly write (I tend to focus on the small-scale rather than the broader strokes of the story better), but maybe it'd be nice to include the backstory and motivation and a bit of wider-world-building, like focusing on how Eula's choice effects people/politics/etc. but it sounds like a lot of work in the end...

For a brief overview of the backstory I envisioned which molded my characterization:

Basically, this story takes place in a medieval'ish fantasy place. Eula has been an orphan for as long as she can remember, constantly mistreated and harassed as she wandered alone from rural'y place-to-place as a child. It's sort of unclear what the cause of the stigma was, but I reckon that real-life discrimination doesn't have much logic behind this, so neither does this! Somehow or other she meets Bitty, and develops a friendship(and possible/vaguely-implied romantic interest) for/with her. Eula -> Bitty = absolute adoration and care, whereas Bitty -> Eula = ??? Like, she's sweet and innocent and all that, but also seems to be fine with using Eula and her feelings for her for her own gain sorta stringing her on. That's never explicitly stated, but you just get the feeling that she knows and is taking advantage of it. That's what I had in mind anyway. Maybe it is totally unintentional. As for the whole 'Cause' thing, I'm thinking it's fom a sus organisation/possibly a cult or something who convinces the hurt and sort of gullible Eula (perhaps after a fall-out with Bitty?). They give her purpose and direction while showering her with attention and love, so she becomes really devoted quickly after they expose her to the "truth."

As for the future, there'll be a war or something because of the... Well, terrorism, actually. So... Yeah. Great Times. Maybe sprinkle in some moments of comradary and humanity in so it doesn't get too bleak? I could work with that.

If you're still interested, maybe I'll end up seriously brainstorming some more!

As always, discussions, suggestions or any ideas for cool directions for the story to take are welcome!

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 24, 2021 - 7:50 am)

That is so cool! I love the whole backstory. It really adds a lot of emotion to the snippet after reading it again!

It's totally understandable to work on the smaller scale rather than focus on the big stuff. I like to write short stories instead of trying to conjure up big ones. 

I did find some songs that are kinda fitting, but you don't have to listen to them if you want! I feel like Strange by Celeste or Pluto Projector by Rex Orange County are quite fitting, but it's from my interpretation, so it might actually not be fitting.

There's more specific parts of the songs which seemed fitting. From Strange it was, "From strangers to friends, friends into lovers, and strangers again", and I thought the fall-out between the two would match that kind of.. vibe? (Of course, this is if you want the two to be in a possible romantic relationship.) I think there's a remix of Strange and Je te laiserrai des mots (by Patrick Watson), and I think that's a really nice mix.

And from Pluto Projector it was, "Old enough to understand", which might match up with the organization exposing her to the "truth" and it's just the moment Eula realizes everything? While the meanings of the lyrics are its own thing, the music behind the lyrics are really a punch in the gut. It kinda feels like it's someone realizing the true menaing behind something.

Anyways, I'm super interested in this, so if you do plan on continuing or brainstorming more, I'd love to read it! If you want, I can try to find more songs?

submitted by Hollyshock, You'll Never Know
(December 27, 2021 - 9:18 am)

Yeah, this is really helpful! Thank you so much for all the suggestions and analysis!

I'd be happy to continue writing with this... 'World,' I guess, and if you have any ideas/songs, I found these really interesting! It would be great to hear any more (It's funny because a lot of times I am either directly inspired by songs, or sorta file particular lyrics away for later use, so this totally works with my process.) 

Anyway, not gonna make any promises about dates/deadlines for the time being, but I plan on chipping away at the backstory's details for now!

*pops confetti-popper in anticipation*

submitted by Jaybells, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(December 27, 2021 - 6:41 pm)

I have a ton of songs with specified parts, so I'll list them here and why I chose them! I'm super excited for the backstory's details, but of course, take your time and make sure not to stress yourself out too much! My music tastes are really mixed, so it's going to be a little bit of a craze when showing songs. I'll do my best to cut down the length of lyrics and try to explain where it starts and ends to make this post shorter.

Blow My Brains Out by Tikkle Me, but more specifically the lines that are, "Lucky is she who lives unaware, doesn't get bothered by those who don't care" until "Unlucky me who knows way to much" and the rest of that part. I think this is kind of fititng for more of Bitty's perspective, kind of analyzing Eula.

I Love You So by The Walters, but "But I love you so (Please let me go), I love you so (Please let me go), I love you so (Please let me go)". I feel like it's fitting to Eula's take between the fall-out between her and Bitty. There wasn't much context on how Eula was feeling after the fall-out except for how hurt and sort of gullible she was, so maybe she's just trying to let go of Bitty to the best of her abilities?

Dark Red by Steve Lacy, but the part where it repeats, "Only you, my girl, only you babe". I guess it was my take on Eula always caring and loving Bitty, maybe even devoting everything she has to her.

Drift Away Omnichord by Mars Bars. The whole song is about one character slowly drifting away from another, and I feel like it's the relationship between Eula and Bitty. So.. yeah!

Unfair by The Neighbourhood. The whole song in its entirety might be fitting for background music for interactions between the suspicious organization and Eula.

Two Birds by Regina Spektor, and it's again the whole song. I feel like the song is fitting for the relationship between Eula and Bitty. It's kinda the same reasoning behind Drift Away.

Stars Will Fall by Duster, again, the whole song. It has some sort of feeling to the song, and I feel like it would be another good background song for more moments of comradery. 

I have more, but this post is getting quite long. If you're interested in any more, I can do another post about it! I have a ton more if you want to hear them. (I kind of had to really think and over-analyze a bunch of parts of the backstory, so some explanations might be a little mixed in future songs.) 

submitted by Hollyshock, You'll Never Know
(December 28, 2021 - 7:26 pm)

OML these are perfect! I literally love you so much right now(like platonically, of course)!

If you still have more songs-inspirations that'd be great! I really appreciate those, especially since they can be reused in similar-toned stories, or to keep the ideas in-tune throughout the course of a longer story without losing sight of the original 'feel.'

If you're fine with it I think I'll post the polished versions of anything I finish writing here in Silver Crystal's Regular Writing Thread, just 'cause it'll be a little more polished and overly-specific than the whole 'general prompts' thing. Plus, you might find something new that you enjoy over there!

Here's the link to her thread: http://www.cricketmagkids.com/chatterbox/puddingsplace/node/492055

submitted by Jaybells@Hollyshock, age Obscure, Lost in the Universe
(January 8, 2022 - 1:21 pm)

Ah thank you!! I'm so glad that these songs work for the story, and I'm super glad that they'll work for any others in the future! I'm completely fine with you posting the polished versions of the story onto Silver Crystal's thread!

I do have some more! And this time it'll be kinda gramatically correct.. hopefully. The lines of the lyrics will be awkwardly structured because I don't want this post to be too long (length wise), so.. yeah! Please excuse the typos I'm literally too tired to correct them-

"East of Eden" by Zella Day, but more specifically, the lyrics of, "Keep me from the cages under the control, Running in the dark to find east of Eden". It's not really particularly the name "Eden" that really strikes out to me, but it's more of the lyrics before that! I felt like it was fitting to maybe the war?

"Sparks" by Coldplay. The lyrics that are fitting are, "My heart is yours, It's you that I hold onto". I felt like those lines kinda made me feel something when thinking of Eula being gullible and hurt from the fall-out between her and Bitty. I feel like it'll be fitting to Eula's take on the whole fall-out and her way of kind of.. coping?

"Be Nice To Me" by The Front Bottoms. The whole song kind of reminds me of Bitty's relationship with Eula, that being her taking advantage and stringing her on. Personally, I think the song is would be more directed in the POV of Eula.

"Hey Kids" by Molina, and it's the whole song. It's another one of those background songs for the suspicious organization interacting with Eula. The song is really good and it just gives me those kinda.. vibes, I guess?

"Black Out Days" by Phantogram. Most of the song would be fitting for the specific part of the story, that being Eula pressing the button and Eula's composure cracking. Although most of the song would be fitting, I really like the part where it goes, "(I'm hearing voices all the time and they're not mine)". That part is kind of fitting to me because I feel like it would be in the order of her being exposed to the "truth", and her voice of reason just kinda dies out? Another part where those specific lyrics fit are when Eula lost her cool and had called Bitty, "Bridget". Maybe she's trying to reason out stuff?

"Achilles Come Down" by Gang of Youths. The part where it goes, "Today of all days, see, How the most dangerous thing is to love" is quite fitting for maybe a tint of malice behind the fall-out between Eula and Bitty. That is, of course, if you're planning on taking it that way!

And last but not least, "Telephones" by Vacations! The beginning lyrics of the song, "I wish I could live without you, But you're a part of me. Wherever I go, You'll always be next to me", is either fitting for Eula being a bit bitter of the suspicious organization, or maybe between her and Bitty? Either way, I think it's fitting! For the organization part, it's where Eula might be regretting ever letting them shower her with affection, while for the relationship between her and Bitty, it would be more of Bitty's POV to Eula. Maybe she wants to detach herself from Eula, but Eula just sticks around because she cares and adores Bitty.

And that's it!! I'm always totally open to recommending more songs for inspiration, but this is what I have at the moment! If ever you need me to help with any song recommendations for inspiration, I'm always here! If ever you add more backstory to the whole story, I'd love to add some more song inspirations and stuff!

Thank you for your time and thank you for letting me do this! It was really fun! I'll be sure to check out the Regular Writing Thread soon!! :D

submitted by Hollyshock@Jaybells, You'll Never Know
(January 8, 2022 - 6:36 pm)

Of course, you've been an incredible help! And thank you so much, too!

I actually posted the second part over there earlier today, and would be glad if you checked that out. It's a little different in tone again, but I'm sure the angsty-ness will resume shortly.

*rubs hands in anticipation* 

submitted by Jaybells@Hollyshock
(January 9, 2022 - 6:13 pm)

She advanced closer, and let her forehead rest on the cliff. In a calm, dangerous sort of voice, she said, “I am done with your little games. Your terrors have driven that poor girl from Tregaron into a cave so she may die, but she is not dead. You feel her strong heart beating against your walls? I am no longer that poor girl. I am no longer the girl that wails for her people, or the girl that freezes in a scream, petrified.” She said the next part strong and clear. “I am Adira, and I am not afraid of you anymore.”

Silence stretched on for ages. Then she whispered, tears streaming down her cheeks- “I am Adira, so know that I must do this, and I do it for my people.”

 

submitted by Phoenix Tears, age 12 she/her, Revolutionary Grape Jelly
(December 22, 2021 - 10:40 pm)