Anyone wanna help

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Anyone wanna help

Anyone wanna help me write a book for fun? I found a really fun prompt, but I want like two or three other people because it is more fun as a group. Tell me if you wanna join! This is the prompt: 

Start your story with someone receiving a one-star review

 

Tell me. 


Captcha says {atmyw}

submitted by Pancake, age Fresh, On A Plate
(November 14, 2022 - 10:46 pm)

Sure! I'd love to!

submitted by WiLdSoNg
(November 15, 2022 - 7:49 am)

Yay!!! So we could start planning. What kind of story do you think would fit.? I kinda thought comedy would be good. Also, maybe only one main character we all help make so that we can all write and we won't get confused. Also not sure what happened with the text.

submitted by Pancake, age Fresh, On A Plate
(November 15, 2022 - 5:36 pm)

Comedy would be great! Maybe they get the one star review, get really mad, and start sabotaging publishing companies and news stations. And nobody knows who it is, so this really new/bad detective tries to take the case.

submitted by WiLdSoNg
(November 23, 2022 - 5:24 pm)

YES!!!! It would so fun to have like three people working on it. Let me think about what to post....captcha says taodg??

submitted by MorticiaTheStargazer, age 13 moons, Earth of the Frogs
(November 17, 2022 - 12:40 pm)

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submitted by Pancake, age Fresh, On A Plate
(November 18, 2022 - 9:44 am)

Sounds fun! I'll stick around and just lurk until we get more of an idea of what we're doing. :D 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(November 20, 2022 - 12:38 pm)

I am currently working on coming up with main character ideas, but feel free to add your own ^v^

submitted by Pancake, age Fresh, On A Plate
(November 20, 2022 - 6:05 pm)

Maybe (assuming we're using the prompt at the top of this thread) I could write the character who leaves the one-star review, and offer their perspective.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(November 23, 2022 - 5:51 pm)

I would love to help if I can!

submitted by Piano Man, age 12, nowhere
(November 23, 2022 - 1:24 pm)

Erm...I don't really know if this is what you want, but I made a little story. Literally just putting it out there, it doesn't have to be in the real story. :)

Asha glanced down at her cell phone. A Yelp review had been posted by a woman named Lura. She clicked to read it:

This store was simply disastrous. Where are the real alchemy supplies? Never again will I go to this shop for necessities. :( 

To her concern, Lura had given a one-star review. Asha shrugged and shoved her phone back into her jacket pocket. She’d have to deal with it later. Right now, she had to meet Torren for a quick meeting. And she was late.

She hurriedly wiped her boots on the rug placed at the front door of Pasted Cafe. Attempting what she hoped was a warm smile, she made her way to a table where Torren was seated. 

“Asha,” he said coldly. “You’re late.” She nodded apologetically. 

“Sorry, sir.” Asha waved the server over and ordered an almond latte. 

“You should be.” Torren replied, frowning deeply. “We need to talk about your..store.” he said, wrinkling his nose. 

“What’s wrong with my store?” she asked. The server had returned with her coffee, and she took a sip. Torren rolled his eyes.

“Asha, you know.” She shook her head vehemently.

“Uh, no, I don’t.” She had owned her alchemy supplies shop for four years, since she finished college. Asha wasn’t about to admit she knew it wasn’t very successful. 

“It’s failing. Clearly.” Torren responded. She stifled her scream.

“Torren,” Asha told him as calmly as she could. “Why are we talking about this? You have no investment in my store, so why should you care?” 

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submitted by MorticiaTheStargazer, age 13 moons, Earth of the Frogs
(December 12, 2022 - 11:21 am)

Sorry everyone! I forgot this thread existed lol. OK so yeah, it will be from the perspective of one person, who got the one star review. I have been thinking of a few characters and here is my idea. Suggust your own if you would like. and anyone who wants to can help.

 

My character doesn't have her full personality yet and i will post it once it is finished. 

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submitted by Pancake, age 13, Fresh
(December 12, 2022 - 1:59 pm)