Writing SI of

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Writing SI of

Writing SI of sorts 

So I had this strange idea. You know how we have a lot of SIs? Well, what if we have another SI, only people try to guess who it is based on the writing style?

Like, I'd provide an example of my writing and you guys try to guess my identity based on it. As for what to put in the 'name' field, anything goes— from 'Author-San' to 'Angst Ink' to ':)' like me.

Here is my excerpt. It's from one of my stories, Nightingale.

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He’s content, most of the time. Sometimes he feels that he must be missing something, that long ago his life left him behind in this dusty shop with nothing but the wood shavings for company. But he can’t guess where it might have gone, so he stays with his carvings and his paintbrushes and forgets what might have been. Live in the moment, as Nana would say, but it’s been a long time since he’s talked to her, or to any of his relatives. They all moved on once it became clear that he was never going to do big things with his life, never going to be the great hero they all expected him to be. Obviously, his destiny is to stay here in his tiny shop with the afternoon sunlight and the cobwebs and the wood shavings while life, and everything else, forgets about him.

 

He's not sad—he’s got no desire to travel abroad, or any farther than the local drugstore for that matter—but he can’t say he’s happy either, and he’s stopped wanting to be. He has his paints and his woods and that’s enough.

 

He can’t remember when he started carving. Probably around the time Geo, his best friend, moved away. Lonely and depressed, he’d turned to what he remembered most throughout his childhood: wood.

 

He never became a lumberjack like his dad, but the wood still called to him. He remembers the first time he set a knife to it, how his eyes saw the shape before he’d chiseled away the excess. That’s how he always sees it: finding the shape within the wood, and bringing it out.

 

And then he discovered painting, and his carvings came alive. His brush discovered the varying russets of a fox’s tail; the black gleam of a fish’s eye. And eventually, he started selling them: rented a dirty shop that no one wanted; covered the floor with sawdust and no one cared.

People buy his carvings, praise him for his work, but he can’t help wondering how they see him. The strange, quiet woodworker, doesn’t talk much, maybe is a little off in the head but hey, at least he makes pretty sculptures. He’s been here for what, three years now? Everyone knows him, but no one knows who he really is. Probably no one ever will. 

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© 2023 by... go ahead and guess :)

Hope you enjoyed! 

submitted by :), age ?
(May 17, 2023 - 1:15 am)

Clink, clink, clink. The constant grate of former farmlands-turned-gravediggers' shovels rang out into the budding light of the chill dawn. The face covered in dusk and fastened with vemon smirked. It took this being of chaos a the self-control it had not to burst out in laughter. This really was too amusing....

 

Not Reuby, btw :)

submitted by Solia
(May 26, 2023 - 1:13 pm)

Ah, Lyric got me... I am, indeed, Jaybells. >:P 

submitted by Solia
(May 28, 2023 - 6:54 pm)

I don't have any guesses yet, but here's a snippet from the novel I'm writing~

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There is blood on my doorstep.  I’m certainly no stranger to death, but the suddenness of this sight has alarmed me.  Droplets lead across the snow-sprinkled ground into the woods’ thick darkness.  They urge me to follow the path, to find the source of this strangeness.  I shouldn’t, but if it is from a sprite, they’ve emerged from their slumber unseasonably early.  Maybe they’ve found something of value.  And so I follow, leaving light footsteps in the snow.

The evergreens grow thicker around me as I walk, until the watery sun is practically invisible.  To my surprise, I don’t recognize this part of the Adelwood, despite spending my childhood exploring its icy streams and deep hollows.  The air is thick with silvery mist and an eerie silence.  After a while I stop and sigh.  This was just a useless detour, it seems.  Faint howls resound in my ears, from far away and right behind me all at once.  Despite myself, chills run down my spine.  I’ve wasted enough time.  I huff as I turn back, but stop dead.  Blocking my path is a towering shadow of fur and teeth.  The lupine beast’s thick coat, dark as ashes or a new moon, is adorned with twisting briars that shimmer like gold.  His fiery eyes meet mine in a petrifying glare.  The pounding of my heart tells me to run, but my limbs refuse to move.  I can’t even speak, my tongue as heavy as stone.  Those old horror stories - tales of a beast whose claws could tear iron and whose gaze froze your very blood - they couldn’t be true…

 

The old widows called Him the Wolf King.  A hunter more cunning than any man, a terror to be venerated.  No, I am a fool to let fear grip me.  Stories are just words, and words are rarely ever true.  Having found my voice again, I let it echo across the placid drifts of snow. “I don’t know who you think you are, but you’re blocking the path.  Move.”

 

“Raisa of Adelwood.” The beast’s speech is like thunder.  The very wind is silenced by the sound. “Do not try to control what you cannot own.”

 

“I’m just trying to get out of here,” I mutter, raising an eyebrow at my name.

 

He laughs and it shakes the trees.  It is not a lighthearted act, instead He scoffs at me. “I suppose I gave you too much credit for your feeble attempt at cleverness.  You see, it is not I who is at fault here.”

 

“What did I do to offend you?  I don’t even know who you are!” I snap.

 

“I am the hunter of midnight, the herald of justice, and the kind of wolves.  You will listen when I speak.” The briars adorning His head are gold, I realize, not thorns but a crown.  His words freeze me, stealing the breath from my lungs.  I have no choice but to obey. “How many lives have you taken for your own gain?” He continues. “How many lies have you spun?  How foolish must you be to mutilate one of my own pack?  No, theirs will be the last blood you will ever spill.  I do not allow you to live, to go unpunished.”

submitted by cordia
(May 29, 2023 - 8:08 am)

@Lyric, you guessed me - I'm Poinsettia. How did you know??

submitted by a storyteller
(May 30, 2023 - 9:24 am)

Oh, I noticed that you frequently guessed other CBers as me in SIs, and then saw that you guessed a descriptive writer and :) as me as well in your previous post. And I think I've seen you set your location to "a sea of crystal waters" before and recognized your writing style.

Lovely story by the way :) 

 

submitted by A Sorceress/Lyric, age 14, time traveling to 1861
(May 30, 2023 - 2:55 pm)

Oh, right, my location. Oops. I really have to remember to stop using it when I don't want people to see who I am...

and tysm! :)

submitted by a storyteller, aka Poinsettia
(May 31, 2023 - 11:23 am)

The salty breeze whisks my hair into my face and I dive beneath the surface to escape. I cannot risk being seen by any of the sailors above. It’s a looming ship, one that could kill me if I was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Exactly why I must be careful. The High Queen told me three boys would fall today, two of them slaves. The third one must be a stowaway, or else they would not toss him overboard. The young men on this boat are priceless, or at least that is what the captain thinks. 

Suddenly, I hear an arousing cheer echoing over the water. I poke my head up to see the sailors carrying two boys, younger than me by a few years, it looks. I can’t help but feel a twinge of guilt, knowing that I cannot save them. In fact, I am the reason for their death. But alas, my sisters must eat, and there is only one way for that to happen. 

“Toss em’!” a man with a scruffy beard and a bright red tunic yells. “Make it quick!” The boys are frozen in terror, their young faces contorted in pain. They are much too young for this. 

The men speak for a moment, and I only catch a few words, not enough for me to make out what they are saying. But then the thinner boy begins to walk along the edge of the ship, and I know what they want. I shake my head—-he is taking too long. Much too long. They will be angry. 

“Go, boy! Jump.” the red—clad man shouts. “Or we’ll stab this one, easy. No need for drowning.” That’s all it takes; the boy jumps off, and I swim quickly toward him. 

With a quick slash of my long claw, I kill him. He does not need to suffer any longer. I peer around for the other one and spot him drifting along the surface, blood spiraling from a hole in his jacket. Hastily, I do the same to this boy and lug them closer to the ship. According to the High Queen, there should be another. But he has not arrived—if he ever will. 

But she’s true to her word—a commotion has begun on the mast of the ship. A boy about my age struggles against the grip of a burly man. I spot the metallic sheen of a blade and my heart clenches. Before I think anymore, he’s flung overboard. 

I swim toward him, my eyes gleaming. He’s a fine young man with plenty of meat on him. It’ll be an easy kill. 

Then I notice who he is. 

 


 

“Anders?” I bubble, my heart beating like a catan drum. He’s half conscious, and a gash leaks thick blood into the salty sea. It must hurt like the devil.

His eyes open blearily, and his mouth works. I pull him above water, and he coughs and hacks like his life is ending. Maybe–maybe it is. 

“Nereibel, listen to me. I won’t be here long.” I nod frantically, but..my Anders, he will not die, surely? 

“You must save my brother, please. He lives on the Island of Koralli, but Thanatos is out for him, like me. Except…he does not deserve to die—-he is not sick, no symptoms.” My eyebrows furrow, and then I realize. A curse. “Ursa!” Oh, that witch!

“Ur-ursa, yes. I am sorry, Nereibel. I wish to be with you longer.” I press a kiss to his chapped, dying lips, and then he is gone. I want to cry, but the High Queen will ask too many questions. Instead, I slit his throat like the others, and swim to the depths like any other day. But this isn’t any other day, far from it. Anders, my human love, dead? The coincidence is heartbreaking. I always thought that when I was released from my siren form, I would come back to him. 

Now, I will never be embraced by him again, never comforted by him again. So I harden my resolve—-forever.

 


 

submitted by a siren
(May 30, 2023 - 10:45 am)

I still have not been guessed...

If no one guesses me by next Tuesday I'll just reveal 

submitted by :)
(June 8, 2023 - 5:41 pm)

Not really sure who anyone is. It's a bit hard to guess. Here's a part of a story I'm working on, though it's modified.

Verena, the High Witch of Kemry, was well-known and respected for her magic skills, spells, and being a quest-giver, especially one to Isul, who had saved all of Kemry. So when Verena received news of a new quest to achieve, she would have expected the designated quest-taker to be Isol. Instead, the designated quest-taker chosen was Ivy.

 She was not at all famous like her older brother, and was in fact the complete opposite of him. She was known to have caused many incidents in Kemry, and her personality was not at all like Isul’s. She never was used to formalities, dropping them completely, was constantly curious and asking questions, even when she wasn’t supposed to, was a bit selfish, and always focused on achieving her own work, never thinking about anyone else. But, Verena reflected, If she’s the designated quest-taker, there must be a very good reason. So she sent word to Ivy straight away. 

When Ivy heard the news, she was certain that there was a mistake. She was constantly aware of her shortcomings, as her parents were always comparing her to Isul, and barely anyone really knew her. Surely Verena meant Isul?, she thought to herself.

Ivy shrugged, thinking that Verena would call for Isul once she realized her mistake. She knocked three times at the door to Verena’s place, which one might call a witch’s hut, even if it was more like a mansion than a hut. It was made of smooth, mythical stones, and carved wooden symbols decorated the whole area. The door itself had an intricate design of a tree. 

Verena heard the knocking and immediately answered the door. There stood Ivy, dressed in a simple tunic, leather pants, and dark brown boots. Her blue eyes seemed clouded with confusion. 

Ivy looked back at Verena, a tall woman dressed in a long cloak with graying eyes and a wise face. She stared for a moment, then finally started speaking.

“Verena, forgive me if I lack formalities, but are you sure you didn’t make a mistake?” Ivy asked, thinking that Verena would indeed say that she made a mistake.

Verena drew her lips into a small half-smile. “No, I did not. I do not know why, but this quest calls for you, my dear. Shall I explain?”

Still dazed from the fact that this quest was actually for her, not Isul, she nodded without really knowing she did.

“You may know that Isul brought peace to Kemry, but there are more worlds out there that need saving. However, some have gone past the need for saving, as they have become far too evil. The evil world, if not stopped, could invade Kemry, especially since they have the magic capable of doing such a feat.”

“Evil world?” Ivy echoed.

“Evil world, Ivy dear,” Verena said. “Some call it…Karviek.” The name sent chills down Ivy’s spine. “It is full of terrible, terrible beasts, horrid beings, and dark magic.”

“May I ask how to stop them?” Eve asked meekly.

“You will find out on your quest,” Verena said simply, making Ivy even more confused and a little frustrated. “But do not worry, I can give you some assistance. Here is the clue: 

To bring an end to evil,

An end to a world,

You must endure the danger,

Before it uncurls.

Go through a quest,

Defeat a beast,

Collect its blood,

And head to the East.

Search for a fairy,

Hope will give it light,

Collect some glow,

And keep it bright.

With the tears of a dragon,

From a mythical cave,

Earn their trust,

And danger you shall brave.

As Ivy ran through the words in her mind, Verena chanted a spell, opening a portal to a gloomy-looking world. Ivy stepped through, and it closed behind her. She took in a deep breath, and decided she had to start. 


submitted by Evening, Kemry
(June 13, 2023 - 8:25 pm)

Nope, I'm not Darkvine. 

I'm honestly really not sure who anyone is, but everyone's stories are gorgeous.  

submitted by Wolf
(June 14, 2023 - 5:59 pm)