I wrote a

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I wrote a

I wrote a poem a long time ago, and I would like to share it with you.  I have three different virsions of my poem "BOOKS."

 Original:

The pages of a book,

they took me to a different place,

a book with dragons, a book with dwarfs,

or even a book with a bunch of chores,

any book will take me places,

all kind of books have different faces,

some are scary, some are sad,

some sometimes make you mad,

some are happy, some are cool,

some have somebody jumping in a pool.

 

Revised version:

The pages of a book,

they took me to a different place,

like a book with dragons, a book with dwarfs,

or even a book with a bunch of chores,

any book will take me places,

all kinds of books have different faces,

some are scary, some are sad,

some sometimes make you mad,

some are happy, some are cool,

some have somebody jumping in the pool,

I love books, yes I do,

how about you?

some books have really nice trees,

some books have giant bees,

I don't know about you, but that's true,

in to the mist,

I'll give you a list,

there's a giant bee in nighttime is really just daytime with your eyes closed,

it's about people who dozed,

there's a giant bee in,

Slappy Hooper,

no, his middle name is not Cooper.

 

Shortened version:

The pages of a book,

they took me to a different place,

like a book with dragons, a book with dwarfs,

any book will take me places,

all kinds of books have different faces,

some are scary, some are sad,

some sometimes make you mad,

some are happy, some are cool.

 

Please tell me if you liked them,  and which one is your favorite.

 

 

 

submitted by Meadow S., age 11, IL
(January 15, 2009 - 3:40 pm)

I like the original!

submitted by Zoe, age 12, Standish, Maine
(January 15, 2009 - 6:40 pm)

Thank you.Smile

submitted by Meadow K., age 11, IL
(January 16, 2009 - 5:55 pm)

I do like them, Meadow, My favorite one is the original.

submitted by Mahogany J. , age 14, MI
(January 15, 2009 - 8:42 pm)

Umm, I think I like the original, too.

submitted by Maura M., age 12, San Diego, CA
(January 16, 2009 - 8:13 pm)

Thanks!

submitted by Meadow K., age 11, IL
(January 17, 2009 - 12:31 pm)

Thank you.  I think that yours didn't show up on my computer that quick.  It's weird because you were the first one to write anything down. 

I like your name.  Is it some kind of wood? 

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(February 9, 2009 - 12:39 pm)

Me, too!

submitted by Lena G., age 11
(January 17, 2009 - 2:29 pm)

Wow, they're all REALLY good!:):):):D:D:D Great job!:):):)

submitted by Kimberly B, age 13!:), California
(January 18, 2009 - 11:30 am)

thanks to everyone!Smile

submitted by Meadow T., age 11, IL
(January 19, 2009 - 7:21 pm)

i keep on writing diferent last name enitials so I am going to stop writing them.

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(January 20, 2009 - 9:41 am)