Here's a poem!

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Here's a poem!

Here's a poem!

The Beach

The salty, cool breeze mingles with my hair

Blowing it in every direction

Every step I take leaves a footprint

In the fine, rocky sand

Until the tide comes up

With it's cold foam

And washes it all away

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me if you do or don't like it!

 

submitted by Julia, age 12, Oregon
(January 17, 2009 - 11:25 pm)

back to the Inkwell

It's great! Very simple, but nice. I like it! Smile

submitted by Lena G., age 11
(January 18, 2009 - 6:28 pm)

Thanks!!:) The more I read it, the more I think that I should have done things differently. I made it up kind of on the spot, so I probably should have spent more time revising it.

submitted by Julia, age 12, Oregon
(January 19, 2009 - 1:19 pm)

I like it!  My mom says she LOVES IT!

 

submitted by Meadow K., age 11, IL
(January 19, 2009 - 10:24 am)

Thanks!!!!!!:):)Smile

submitted by Julia, age 12, Oregon
(January 19, 2009 - 2:06 pm)

I LOVE it!:):):):D:D:D

submitted by Kimberly B, age 13!:), California
(January 19, 2009 - 3:15 pm)

:)Thanks!!!:):)

submitted by Julia, age 12, Oregon
(January 19, 2009 - 9:36 pm)

I like it! :)

submitted by Maddy, age 14, OR
(January 19, 2009 - 5:30 pm)

To the top!

 

i like this poem! 

submitted by As of now: top, age 12, Topper city!! Aka sc
(January 9, 2015 - 11:09 am)

TOP! ^ that was me! I can't believe that was 24 weeks ago.

submitted by Rose bud
(July 1, 2015 - 4:45 pm)

TOP! ^ that was me! I can't believe that was 24 weeks ago.

submitted by Rose bud
(July 1, 2015 - 4:45 pm)