Regular poetry thread

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Regular poetry thread

Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)

This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!

submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)

Oh, yes! Thanks so much, Admin! ^^

submitted by Luna-Starr/Soren, age 27 eons, Existential Ponderment
(July 26, 2019 - 9:23 am)

Ooooh, yikes that is relatable. 

submitted by Leeli
(July 23, 2019 - 9:56 am)

I fell
You fell
We both fell
Like stars fell

submitted by Rogue Wildling
(July 27, 2019 - 12:47 am)

The deep, chilling shriek of Wind--

Fire's hope, destruction cast away,

Doused by keening maiden;

 

Tears rolling, forming

A sea of unquenchable thirst;

Prompted to drink,

Only to be faced with inadequacy;

 

The churning darkness

Straining, stabbing-- pleading--

Until consuming all;

 

Yet still, unsatiated,

Rages like black fire;

Dying alone, still pain-shrouded. 

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(July 28, 2019 - 10:43 pm)

I suppose I've just been particularly angsty lately...

~~~~~

Snaking your arms around me

You promised everything was alright;

"We both know I'll never leave you..." 

You hissed, trusted without a fight.

 

But then, you were venomous, toxic--

Saying it was your nature to bite;

And soon after slipped right though

my fingers, just as I figured you might.

 

After accepting it, and moving on

You came again, hugging me tight;

Roaring how unbearable it is to lose

A loved one, just greeted with a "Quite." 

 

You assured me how reliable you are,

And I was, again, blinded by the light;

Only when you growled, casting me away,

Did I finally learn, at least in slight.

 

Perhaps I'm now a loner,

I know you'll be in for a fright,

But now I full well know,

And my future's looking bright!

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(July 28, 2019 - 11:12 pm)
July twenty-ninth
~~~~~ 
To me, you are like
The tree of life--
Your chestnut-brown 
Hair, and amber eyes;
Your iron resolve 
And fierce, but just
Determination, always
There when needed most; 
Only you can bring a smile
To my face, at any time or place;
and though I can do the same for you,
You seem to save it just for me; 
A dan-dere is what
I suppose you are, 
But you'll always be
Something more to me;
Every time you catch me, happily;
Or your beautiful golden eyes light up;
stargazing or watching sunset vermillion;
It makes me beam to finally say:
Happy birthday, you adorable buttercup! 
submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(July 29, 2019 - 1:08 pm)

Hmm, I think the spacing might have been changed, it was supposed to be every forth line ended a stanza, except for the last paragraph, which had five lines.

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(July 29, 2019 - 2:18 pm)
Music coarses through the air,
With the clatter of point-shoes
Against the hollow, foreboding stage,
Brightly illuminated by higher beings;
I watch, apprehensive, biting my lip;
Nervousness winding itself into a knot,
As I look in from rippling, ebony wings,
Rolling waves of lavender, my hand now wringing;
Before suddenly spinned, then stiff; 
a careful arm around the waist;
That warm, endearing smile, and
gentle pumpkinseed-shaped eyes I face;
"It's alright," you assure me, softly;
lightly taking my frozen hand,
My dark blue eyes only widen,
But your concern I understand;
The lights soon fade, extinguished;
And with a slight breeze,
I'm rushing to take my place, at the centre of 
The now darkened, all-encompassing stage;
As light pours in, my form is revealed;
Hand extended upwards, greeted
By yours, quickly encasing it, as soon as the
music starts, replacing a ringing silence;
A series of spins and twirls, 
Then a leap and a lift; 
Feet striking the ground like piano
Keys in Chopin's Fantasie Impromptu;
Then, drawing to a close, the music
Stopping on a high, piercing note; 
My flowing lavender dress billows,
Hand still in yours, facing the audience;
Again, you flash a warm smile, 
Before bowing, and I cursty;
Then we melt away, along with the stage,
Until reappearing in the grande finalé.
submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(July 29, 2019 - 2:09 pm)

Wow, the spacing is just not loving me today, this was also supposed to be four lines per stanza.

I could try to fix it for you if you tell me to which poem you are referring.

Admin

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(July 29, 2019 - 5:49 pm)

I finally wrote something, look at that. 

unfinished poems

 

i. broken lines and

scattered thoughts

fleeting explanations,

frustrating similes

half-formed ideas that stayed

half-formed

because you didn’t remember 

how to finish them

 

ii.the ruins of the things that go through your head

in the night

the remnants of the feelings that follow you 

into morning

the ideas that got lost in the middle of your mind 

and cannot be retrieved

 

iii. fleeting glances

darkened echoes

fractured reflections

forgotten song

 

vi. blurry edges

teary eyes

clumsy fingers

cloven heart

 

v. later is the only time to finish anything

procrastination finds its culmination as

midnight skies shine in drooping eyes

the last words on the page were never

 

written


submitted by Leeli
(August 4, 2019 - 9:20 pm)

Ooh, I like that! That's pretty much my writing process :P I really like the fifth verse, especially the rythm between "procrastination finds its culmination as/midnight skies shine in drooping eyes".

submitted by Leafy, age No, not a cat
(August 5, 2019 - 3:34 pm)

Thanks! Same—I drew inspiration from all the random half-written poems floating around my poetry doc. XP 

Also, the “written” line at the end was supposed to be in strike-through font (to represent the unfinished-ness), but copy/paste cut it out. I thought it looked cool and added to the poem, though, so here’s a screenshot. 

 

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submitted by Leeli
(August 5, 2019 - 6:35 pm)

Oh yeah, that's cool!

submitted by Leafy, age No, not a cat
(August 6, 2019 - 8:00 am)

Shadow

~~~~~

Silent steps,

Invisible tears,

Darkness cast

By brighter twin;

 

Broken glass,

Shattered being,

Gone, consumed

Until light returns;

 

Feared most

When safest;

Always tread upon,

Constantly changing. 

submitted by Jaybells, age Classified, Lost in the Universe
(August 9, 2019 - 10:03 pm)

Poetry dump! 

This first one is from the Poetry Challenge for the prompt "Outfit of the Day":

Photographic Memory

i. when i first saw you you were wearing tight jeans that were stretched tight around your knees like they were ready to rip and a white shirt old and tattered like it had gone through the wash one time too many and your shoes these black ankle boots with heels and the wind was a child the way it tossed your hair all over the place and your sunglasses flashed mouth wide open

you wore happiness and it was beautiful

ii. when i first talked to you you were wearing winter like it was the most stunning fashion statement your scarf was bigger than your whole head it bunched all around your shoulders and your sweater was thick and cream-colored and you had these fluffy boots bursting with warmth and your hair was a gold fountain that sparkled with snowflakes lips lose smile

you wore wintry kindness and it was beautiful

iii. when i took you to a movie you were wearing cottom black leggings crossed legs and grey sneakers clean shoelaces bouncing rhythmically and a grey cardigan so soft and your hair was in a shiny ponytail straight but playfully bouncy vanilla lip balm lips open showing me teeth

you wore excitement and it was beautiful

iv. on the day you broke my heart you were wearing something so ordinary it didn't fit because shouldnt it have mirrored the words you were saying but it was just jean shorts and a t-shirt from a concert you saw before i knew you and you got your hair cut but it was still giving you a billowy halo feet exposed lips shut tight turning away

you wore independence and it was beautifully heartbreaking 

 

This next one is based on something I wrote in a novella that I really loved:

Fountain

i. i look up and the sky is just so blue and the clouds could be kingdoms and the sun is smiling but not at me and it’s just so insane and i’m in awe that something can still be beautiful even through pain and if i could climb into the sky’s lap and just stay there forever i would i would i would

ii. i look down and the grass is just so green and the blades could be tiny swords and the soil is rich but not with the material wealthiness i so desperately need and it's just so perfect and i’m confused why something this trivial is given this much attention and if i could bury myself under the ground and stay there forever i would i would i would

iii. i look behind me and everything is just so dark and the shadows could be ghosts and undefined shapes tantalize me even though they never existed and it’s just so horrifying and i’m scared that when i look forward this is what i’ll see and if i could close my eyes and hide from it forever i would i would i would

iv. i look ahead and the possibilities are just so endless and the sidewalks could be clouds and the leaves on the trees beckon me closer with green-spun hands and it’s just so empowering and i’m just so surprised that something this ordinary could fill me with so much hope and i could keep moving forward I will I will

I will

 

 

And I got this book of poetry prompts a few weeks ago, and I've written maybe six or seven. This was one of my favorites, for the prompt "A River":

what if i just sat here, with the

waving cattails brushing my hair and the

silver-crested water holding my

hand? what if i laughed with the

sky so blue and

made friends with the jewel-backed

dragonflies? what if i

stayed here by the riverside so long that the

grasses wove into my skin and the

soil snuck into my

veins and i could stay here and

laugh with the sky and hold the water's hand

forever? 

And I have a few more, but eh this post is already long (thanks for reading it, Admins!). 

submitted by Luna-Starr, age 27 eons, Existential Ponderment
(August 13, 2019 - 1:43 pm)