Regular poetry thread
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Regular poetry thread
Regular poetry thread (because I'm tired of not editing my poems)
This is exactly what it sounds like! A thread to post poetry. I'm excited to read all of your work!
submitted by Bluebird
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
(April 30, 2017 - 8:51 pm)
Oh gosh, same.
(January 14, 2021 - 8:48 am)
iliotropio: Sunflower
~~~~~~~~~~~
Sometimes I watch you
With your vibrant, lively colours,
Chasing that wildly unattainable dream.
Why give your all
To someone who'll never look at you
For what you are, only to trample
You beneath his feet?
Someone who'll outshine you
When you try to stand by his side
And suck the life from you
'til you're gone and shrivelled.
Why do you seem to glow
when he shows up every day
Beaming, face following him
No matter what the world'll say?
Why won't you listen when others
Could give you so much better?
You pitiful fool, chasing the sun itself
In an endless, predestined-to-fail quest...
Should I despise you for your naïvety
Or admire you for that zealous zest?
(January 13, 2021 - 8:20 pm)
IT RHYMES AHHHHH IT'S A MIRACLE
Sometimes when night’s
As dark as night
Can be,
I forge a path
Through dark,
And me,
I cry out to the night.
Says he,
I shall not stop,
I shall not go,
Night is a-swinging,
To and fro,
For when I come,
And when I came,
And when,
In future times,
Will come,
Night smiles at me
And holds me tight
And we go rocking
Through the night,
As one.
(January 13, 2021 - 9:07 pm)
Through the stinging rain
He stands
Paved streets kicking up
Lost drops
Throwing them back
to the sky
From which they came--
Or at least trying
He feels not cold nor sad
At the shower
That peeks through the leaves
And gloom-
Filled sky, laced with silver--
Only peace.
Yes, the rhythm drives down
On him
And he is filled with unimaginable
peace.
(January 13, 2021 - 9:28 pm)
Ooooooooooh yeeeees. I've always wondered why the world doesn't like rain, when rain is so beautiful. You've managed to capture it's peace and beauty perfectly.
(January 14, 2021 - 7:14 pm)
This is so relatable for some reason.
(January 16, 2021 - 11:10 am)
aurora borealis
there's a girl that i seek
on the highest, dark peak
her name is aurora
though we never will speak.
her dress is that of shining
rich green, lining
the twilight sky's frayed ends.
her crown is wrought of stars,
cold as hard metal bars
or her wounds that she always tends.
ever-shifting; only the wind understands
a shimmering jade mirage above bleached white lands.
i spin and glide through the snow
my face frostbitten and burned with the glow
of her lunimescent emerald light drenching the dark
the ground below me, cold and stark.
i dance as she does, wild and free
though i'll never be as beautifully dangerous as she.
and yet we move in perfect sync, she and i
my feet in the snow and hers up high
maybe i'll meet her one day if i learn to fly.
her name is aurora
and her misty green flora
bursts through the winter's night sky.
(January 15, 2021 - 11:14 pm)
*applauds wildly* That was really good, Silver!! I loved the line "a shimmering jade mirage above bleached white lands.". :)
(January 16, 2021 - 12:09 pm)
Yesss! I totally agree, this is absolutely stunning in imagery; there are just so many great lines from here! (Also, is it just me or is there a subtly dark undercurrent?)
(January 17, 2021 - 10:06 pm)
Thanks Pepper and Jaybells :) Also, @Jaybells, I guess I always do write with an undertone of darkness for some reason, but this one was one of my happier ones XD
(January 18, 2021 - 7:14 am)
there are some born with their eyes gazing at the sky.
their stardust-hewn fingers grasp at the hope of touching the void above them
and their galactical minds are filled with small wisdoms, like
how many of the stars they see have died long ago;
and i am mystified by their sorrow at the fact.
because when i look upon the dead stars, i only feel comfort
that such ethereal, hope-bound bodies still glow for us long after they are gone.
(January 16, 2021 - 1:23 pm)
So foreboding and yet intriguing! I love that focus on beautiful imagery, and perspective, of course!
(January 16, 2021 - 6:04 pm)
thank you! :)
(January 17, 2021 - 3:45 pm)
The cold air
Envelopes me, punctures my skin,
Leaves me thrilled breathless.
I forgot my coat,
But maybe that was on purpose,
I suppose
I should savor the cold.
Maybe one day it will be no more.
And on the rough tree branch
Blood rushed to my head
Leaves me with a burst of
Childish happiness,
The kind that makes you want
To laugh for no reason
And gallop among the fields
And believe in fairies
And not worry about forever.
But my hands hurt from the bark and I'm really cold now,
And I can tell
this tree branch won't be here
by the time
I grow up for real.
Maybe I should
Laugh for no reason
believe in fairies
Gallop through the fields again.
Because maybe one day I will be no more.
(January 16, 2021 - 1:38 pm)
Wowwww that painted this really beautoful picture in my head. That poem really connected woth me somehow, I love the rythm and the mood....
(January 16, 2021 - 3:59 pm)