A Poem I

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A Poem I

A Poem I Wrote titled Meesa OUT:

Meesa no have any idea what’s a-happenin!

First meesa have kids laughing at meesa

But then BOOM! Nobody like-a meesa!

Theysa say “Boo!” Theysa say “Yousa ruin Star Wars!”

Meesa was just trying to make be funny and make people like meesa!

Everyone be so serious all the time!

Meesa just don’t wanna hear it!

Meesa no more stinkable then medi-clorians

And you say I be ruinin everything!

Well, meesa had enough!

Meesa turning to the dark side

And yousa gonna be in

B I G  DOO-DOO NOW!

 

 

submitted by General Waffleson
(October 7, 2018 - 8:22 am)

back to the Pudding's Place

This moved me to tears.

submitted by Icy, age 14, Has no problem w/ Jar-Jar
(October 7, 2018 - 9:54 am)

Yousa is so misunderstood, Jar-Jar...

submitted by VyoTOPPE
(October 7, 2018 - 3:05 pm)

Ooh, I love it! Half of me wants to laugh, half of me wants to not because it seems pretty serious. You were going for Jar Jar Binks, right? If not...

Lol I love the last line and the whole thing so much! Great work!

submitted by artisticbirdie
(October 7, 2018 - 3:36 pm)

Is this something about one of the new movies? I haven't actually seen those, but I know there are theories about Jar-Jar being a Sith Lord.

submitted by Viola?, age Secret, Secret
(October 7, 2018 - 4:00 pm)

@artisticbirdie: Yes, it's meant to be Jar Jar.

 

@Viola?: No, this is just me having some fun with the prequels

submitted by General Waffleson
(October 8, 2018 - 3:21 pm)

HAHAHAHAHAHA I love this so much

submitted by Alizarine
(October 9, 2018 - 5:33 pm)

I giggle or chuckle out loud every time I read this and I just had to say something.

 

I guess that something is "hee hee." 

Good job.

submitted by Marigold, The State of Mind
(October 9, 2018 - 9:13 pm)

*Standing ovation*

Meesa is inspired. GW, that was the most beautiful poem I've ever read. 

submitted by Fidelity
(October 10, 2018 - 5:24 am)

That. That was beautiful. *applause* I love this.

submitted by Leeli
(October 10, 2018 - 1:25 pm)

*tears up* That was... touching.

Haha GW, you’re the best!!! My friend is a very, very serious SW fan, and is of the opinion that Jar Jar ruins it. I agree that he wasn’t the best character, but he doesn’t deserve to be hated. Also, he has great potential at being a Dark ruler...>:) 

submitted by Jwyn, age 13, Meesa strange...
(October 12, 2018 - 3:31 pm)