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Write some poems and I will give you feedback.
Exactly what it sounds like. Post some poems here if you want feedback. Do not post poems here if you don't want feedback, because I am going to give you feedback.
submitted by WordSong, age Forever, My bed
(November 4, 2020 - 12:32 pm)
(November 4, 2020 - 12:32 pm)
Rain Haiku
Drip drop. Drip drop drip.
Rain patters against window.
A drizzle outside.
(November 8, 2020 - 2:04 pm)
(November 9, 2020 - 8:34 am)
Wow! I always thought haikus were just like . . . I don't know. Funny, and silly. But somehow this one really illustates rain so well. I can just picture the rain hitting the glass. How did you do that? I always admire people who can convey their ideas so well in few words/within a guideline such as rhyme or a particualar type of poem. For me, people seem to like my long, freestyle poems the best.
So yeah! I love your poem.
(November 9, 2020 - 2:07 pm)
Thank you!
(November 10, 2020 - 9:00 am)
Thank you!
(November 10, 2020 - 9:05 am)
Dragonfly Haiku
Buzzing wings outside
Fly now, beautiful insect
Land gently on leaf
Ocean Haiku
Waves crash onto land
Sea creatures twirling under
Soft sea foam swirling
(November 10, 2020 - 9:05 am)