Regular Writing Thread!

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Regular Writing Thread!

Regular Writing Thread!

So after some asking around on Random Thoughts/Things, I've decided to create a Regular Writing Thread! Basically, it's like the Regular Poetry Thread, but for writing in a more general term.

Have a scene you think needs feedback? Want to write down an idea that came to mind so you don't forget it? Having writer's block and need a place to get back into the feel of writing? Here's the place to do all that! 

Anyway, can't wait to see what kind of creative stuff you all come up with :)

submitted by Silver Crystal, age She/her, Milky Way
(August 23, 2021 - 7:35 am)

I've been busy and didn't see this, I'm so sorry! I don't have time to say much at the moment, but I would love to work with you moving forward. You're such a great writer and having you appreciate my feedback is incredible. I'll get back to you as soon as possible (hopefully in a reasonable amount of time).  

My CAPTCHA says "emage". Electronic mage? *immediately starts thinking about how to work this into a story* 

submitted by Bobcat@Jaybells
(February 18, 2022 - 6:22 pm)

All's well! Yay~ <3 

 

Also, can I just say that is literally always my brain, trying to turn everything into stories? XD

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in Night
(February 20, 2022 - 3:46 am)

William's dark eyes reflected back the universe in its entirety at they stared up together. They seemed to swallow up all they light as they looked on; it was honestly alluring.

Not that Cole would know, he repeated to himself in an attempt to convince himself, quickly flitting his attention away from his crush. He had just happened to see, and could understand how someone could come to that conclusion. It was... Impressive. Yeah. 

"How's it look?" Cole snuck a peek at his companion. He caught William right as he scrunched his nose up, seemingly unsure how to respond.

"Um. Blurry?" Cole would never get enough of his clipped voice, buttered with that fancy accent. It always felt so strange to hear such a casual response coming from a boy who sounded more like he belonged in a Victorian English mystery show than real life. He chuckled and handed the glasses back. 

"Aww... Here ya go, Will. I was over here hoping you could finally see the stars without lenses. It'd feel more magical that way, wouldn't it?" 

"Don't insult my specs!" William frowned, putting his hands in a defensive pose around them, "They look great and serve me just fine."

Cole grinned, "I know, I know, that's not what I was trying to say." 

"I'd just be way better without them, is all?" 

"Seriously, stop that. That's not at all what I said or meant."

"Well what did you mean?" Will's defenses lowered slightly. Cole glanced over, into those deep brown eyes. He quickly broke the eye contact.

"I just wish you didn't have to worry about them. Like when you get up in the morning, ''Oh, gotta grab my glasses' or if you drop them or get bumped into... Y'know? It seems like a pain. I wish you could just be able to see well on your own." 

William stayed silent for a moment, making the other boy shift uncomfortably. "Will?" 

"Was just thinking. I get what you mean. 'ts fine for me, though. 'int too much of a problem." 

"Yeah, sorry... I didn't mean to make it sound that way."

The two turned their eyes back to the sky, and silence comfortably draped itself in the space between and above them; one light speck and one dark -- one bespectacled with brown eyes, the other with plain pitch back ones. All at night was calm once more.

 

submitted by Jaybells, age Nebulous, Lost in a Story~
(February 12, 2022 - 9:31 pm)

Sometimes there are moments where things just click. It feels awesome, some many-lettered hormone springs into action in your brain, and you feel like you might be on top of the world. It's amazing.

But sometimes those clicks get undone, somehow. It's the worst when it happens slow and drawn out -- not one huge eruption of passion and pain and firey energy -- but instead a lengthy unwinding, drifting apart at the speed of Celestial orbits erring from their paths, and reeking the faint twanging scent of entropy seeping into every last interaction, each final firing of neurons, before the click is completely lost in all but memory.

That is when true tragedy spindles its way into a relationship and eats it alive, one miniscule bite at a time until all is lost. Then, only the relics of the past can stand as final connecting threads; soon to be chipped away -- devoured wholly -- by the moths of time.

~~~~~~~~~~

Yes, I had a mini existential crisis writing this. :/ 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost at Sea
(February 21, 2022 - 1:42 pm)

Rina's honey-tanned skin is tinted with the gold of yet another never-ending day. The sun beats down on the scowling outsider as they haul up a load of bags. The bags aren't their own – a small leather suitcase and the clothes on their back is all they have to their name, but the grumbling stay locked away inside until after-hours.

It is in those darkening times, sun waning nostalgically, that Rina can finally relax beneath a tree, mutter about how everything sucks, and then laugh that at least the sun will be forced to its knees for a good couple of hours. This happens every time. Rina never wants it – in fact, it would be safe to say once upon a time young-Rina would beg upon arrival for things to stop moving, for everything to stop constantly changing – but it always happens nonetheless. 

This time is a little different, though.

As Rina carelessly plops down onto the ground beneath a tree that lies behind a towering stone building, legs slam into the hard roots, hardly visibly in the dim of twilight's shadow, and the teen yelps in partial pain and otherwise surprise. Brown eyes tiredly skim the bleeding neon-orange horizon for potential witnesses to the embarrassing incident when a soft laugh unexpectedly wafts down from above. 

Startled, Rina jumps slightly, eyes widening with the scene painted in the last fleeting rays of day. A young woman about her own age, fair as the moon above them, leans her chin on her palm, peering right back at Rina. Her eyes are a glowing light violet stones, and the waves of golden-brown locks cascading down and framing her face make her look like a goddess.

Rina's chest squeezes with something akin to a pure heart attack when their eyes meet. The walnut orbs flick away first, embarrassed and unsure of what to say. Who is this girl? Why is she looking out the window at this hour? She totally saw what just happened, didn't she? Ugh. The deep brown eyes flip back to the fairy-like girl, one last thought fluttering around their owner's head. …think she would ever marry me if I asked? That twinkling laughter spills from the window again, and Rina scowls up, indignant. However, before the traveller can speak up(and most likely say something insulting), the girl on the sill steals the chance to do so.

"Hi, what's your name?" Rina eyes the stranger warily, but the amethyst orbs only shine a shade brighter in amusement. "Are you alright?"

"I'm fine. The name's Rina." A slight pause, deep breath, "They/them." Rina explains further at the twinge of confusion in their inquirer's gaze. "My pronouns."

"Oh, cool." An awkward silence simmers between them.

"So, what about you?"

"Oh, um, she/her." The girl scrambles, seemingly taken off-guard.

"No... I mean your name."

"Ah," she laughs that magical laugh, and Rina has to force themselves not to stare for too long, "You can call me 'Baby.'" The latter squints at their companion, staring at her for a moment without a response.

"... Are you… serious?" 

Baby scrambled a reply together again, "I mean, my name is Babylonia, but it's weird and long and I don't really like it, so," She glances at Rina, "Um, you can call me something else if you want to."

"How about… Lonnie, then?"

Lonnie painted on a smile, "Sure."

And thus, the strange acquaintanceship began.

~~~~~~~~~~~

I do plan on continuing, but this also took a lot of will-power to write out, despite me having a solid plan and loving the direction it's going in. So just don't be too surprised if it takes a while, sorry! 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost in the Universe
(March 19, 2022 - 9:00 pm)

Dark pulsed around his periphery. Hot licked at his neck, but there was no one there. He was alone, in a dimly lit place, on his back; everything was vague grey silhouettes, turning darker grey.

His head hurt. It really hurt. But at the same time, the stinging prickly feeling in the front of his neck distracted him. Even that wasn't really the first thing on his mind. It was all kind of hazy now, just like his sight. There was a buzzing sound that wasn't really a sound. His right eye kinda felt wierd. He'd been slipped into kind of dizziness, pounding coming from somewhere in the background of his head-space, maybe from the other side of the gates of death.

His breaths were turning shallow. It was alright, he assured himself.

Only minutes later, his sister would burst in, panting. Not a breath stirred the air in the abandoned warehouse by then. Indeed, not a soul was left alive that day. No one but her. She was too late.

submitted by Jaybells, age of Misery, Lost in the Void
(March 26, 2022 - 4:13 pm)

Some experimentalizing, may or may not relate to my ski lodge Wink

 

Sergei awoke to a picture of grey, storm-addled skies, both muddied and muddled in mind. He squeezed his eyes shut. This was just a dream. Definitely. There's no way this situation was real.

The Fäul-essers squawking above his head, frigid ice water lapping at his sides and the pain emanating from the gash in his left leg begged to differ. Groaning, he pulled himself up. Nope, this was apparently just as real as himself. He looked around. Night was bound to come soon, so the sooner he could find shelter, the better.

And so, limping, the boy with no memories other than the vague feeling his name was Sergei, disappeared into the darkness of the woods. Would this be the beginning of a winding epic, or the end?

submitted by Vortex
(April 9, 2022 - 3:22 pm)

Anskqldkwkdj dudeee this is so cool?? What in the world is a fäul-esser?? I have no idea but I want to find out! Anyway your ski lodge is going to be great I can already tell :D

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(April 12, 2022 - 3:52 pm)

It's a part made up word from the German words "decay" and "eaters" which sorta connect to a vulture kind of creatures, ecept I didn't want to call them that for the sake of the * illusion! *

submitted by Vortex
(April 12, 2022 - 6:56 pm)
submitted by VorTOP!
(April 10, 2022 - 11:23 am)

Something should have happened that day.

All that happened was me breaking. 

Under the fireworks: Full of life and life and motion and noise; something beautiful should've happened that night. 

But instead my heart was turned to olivine; something destined to chip and crack and tear and flake away -- something meant to break and disappear.

Like the fireworks, my happiness blown to bits, whisked away in the night sky; faint clouds of green dust, invisible against the dark sky.

Indeed, the shock of lights and thunder, bursting -- blooming -- as you looked into her eyes.

I knew I had no chance. 

So blinded by pink and shining adoration that'd never be directed at me, I shattered into the dark. Under the fireworks that day.

submitted by Jaybells, age Nebulous, Lost in the Nowhere-lands
(April 11, 2022 - 9:42 pm)

Oh. My. Cod. Jaybells, that's...stunning. It literally sent a shiver up my spine - what you wrote, it is actually kind of my worst fear, but how you put it to words is beautiful, poignant, and just amazing. You are an Amazing writer.

~~~

The flashback hit me like a bolt of lightning. I was back in that tiny, stark white room all over again. The walls were lined with light blue cabinets, and a big computer sat pointing at me. Its image was so disturbing, I couldn't bare to look. Because I knew what it meant. There were two uncomfortable chairs off to the side of the room, and I was squished into one of them, eyes wide with fear. The lights embedded into the ceiling were flickering in time with the beat of my heart, failing with old age. Their glare fell down not on me, though, but on the operating chair in the middle of the room. On the so unfortunately full operating chair. I closed my eyes, no longer could I look at them. It was my fault they were here, and it was my fault that…that this was going to happen to them. I was sick with regret. I buried my face in my hands. That is when the doctor walked in. And the lights went out completely. I heard you scream, but I myself was too stunned with fear to make any noise at all. Suddenly, the backup generator buzzed to life, plunging the room into an eerie shade of pale gray. I saw your pained face, and I saw him. I reached out, but felt nothing. I was too late. You were gone. Because of me.  

submitted by Neverseen , age Umpteen , Traveling the Triangulum
(April 15, 2022 - 4:05 pm)

Thank you so much!

I set out with a very strong idea of what I wanted to write when I started this, but it ended up twisting into this final product without me being able to weave in the phrase I was originally inspired by... The wording was "lifeless fireworks," which just kinda struck a chord with me, and piqued my imagination. :)

Your snippet is also pretty harrowing. In a good way, if not sorta tragic, of course! I like that sterile, pristine horror setting, it resonates pretty strongly with me as a sicklier person, especially as a child, where it all feels/felt so unnatural and lifeless -- really quite sinister.

submitted by Jaybells, Lost, somewhere
(April 16, 2022 - 10:15 pm)

I love the Sea

But I have to sometimes wonder,

Does she love me? 

 

'Cause she tosses me around,

Messes me all up,

Then spits me back up like trash before her. 

 

I know I'll never be enough

But it still hurt when her actions too

Simply reaffirm what the whole World's been sayin'. 

submitted by Jaybells, Lost deep within the Void
(April 16, 2022 - 10:26 pm)

I've been staying on the coast for the past week so I've been seeing the ocean a lot more than I usually would and this makes so much sense. It's hard to make sense of the sea but this does a good job of capturing it. Like 'oh, you love the sea? cool, cause it doesn't even notice you there'

submitted by Silver Crystal, age Infinity, Milky Way
(April 17, 2022 - 10:10 am)