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EarthGirlParticipantHaunted HouseSkye~ "We have to figure out how to change ourselves back," I squeaked. Bradey meowed. "Let's go farther into the house," said Tara. We all followed, Bradey weaving in between our legs. We headed down a long, dark hallway. The pictures on the walls were of well-dressed people from long ago. Their eyes seemed to follow us as we made our way down the long hallway. Soon, I pointed into the room at the end of the hall. We walked in and gasped. A see-through person hovered a few feet above the ground. Her head leaned at an odd angle. "You must find the center of the house," she murmered. "Must find center by midnight……. or you will become your disguise forever…." Then the ghost disintegrated into nothing.
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BrookeiraParticipantAqua ran down the hall, leaving a trail of ice in her wake. HOW was this happening?
She suddenly tripped over a cat………
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Winter FireflyParticipant*unsuspiciously raises Aria's age to 15 1/2* (However her birthday falls so she's in 11 grade)Aria~I
walked down the street, slowly, I wanted to stay home, but I love
spooky stuff. Plus I heard there was a hunted house! I walked down the
street, and saw a boy, Renny, a cute guy from my English class- and as
unusual Benson and his gang, was hassling him. 'Stop!' I wanted to
scream, but all that came out was a squeak, that sounded somewhat like;
"Sttp!" they ignored me and carried on "If you go through the haunted
house, I will not punch you in the face,"
"Fine. I will do it," Renny finely answers,My
eyes widen, that house was not for the week of heart, he wasn't into
the whole 'Scary Halloween' thing. I just walked on, to the Haunted
House! I walked to it, it was pretty creepy, last year, I was to scared
to go in. I looked back, Renny was right behind me! I dashed inside, and
hid behind a chair- which he just had to sit in! I saw before my eyes,
Renny turned into a cat! I felt my face, tried to rub of my makeup- but
it wouldn't come off! I blacked out.When I woke up Renny
and a Creepy Clown, AND a Vampire, were all talking, I jumped up and
asked in a timid stutter, "Um, hi, I, uhh, whats, um, going, on? Is
this, some kind of, um, um, um, clever trick, or, or, or,
s-s-something?"~~~
Sorry I've been so busy Nano-ing, I forgot about this!
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DanieParticipantRenny~
I hissed after the ghost disappeared, and I curled around the Skye's leg. I hear footsteps, and meowed in frustration. A creepy circus chick peeked out of the chair, her frightened look clearly showing on her face.
"What's–um– going on? Is… Is this… A mean trick or.. or.. or something?" she stuttered, her wide eyes looking at me. I hiss again, glaring at her.
"Nope. We all went through the same process. Name's Tara," Tara introduced, looking at the girl and smiling.
"My.. My name is Ari,." Aria whispered. Hey, she's from my Engilsh class. I meow in greeting.
"Skye. Skye Blu. And this here is Renny," Skye replied. I nod.
"Renny Darkhall? RENNY DARKHALL?" She looked at me with awe. I hissed louder.
"What, are you guys girl friend and boy friend or something? You both are in high school?" Skye jokes. I hiss once more and she quiets down. Aria keeps looking at me like I'm the cutest boy in the world, which is probably how she sees me. Most chicks look at me like that. I hate it. Aria blushes when she sees my reaction, but doesn't stop looking at me with awe.
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Also guys, I meant to say 17 instead of 16 for Renny's age. Actually… Never mind. Renny, you are still 16!
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DanieParticipantUm, Squeak? You wrote as me.
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SqueaksParticipantOOps. Wrote as my sis. 😛
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WatermelonParticipantHi! I like the story! Is it too late to join? If not, here is my character:
name- Anistasia
age- 14
appearance- semi long blonde hair with a blue streak. Wears converse, dark jeans, and black tee shirt with an army green jacket.
personality- somewhat shy, but has a few close friends
other- This Halloween she isn't dressing up because she thinks it's "lame" (I don't think that, just my character does), but she's going to the haunted house anyway.
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SAVVY44xParticipantYou can join. We just started.
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WatermelonParticipantNice! Thank you!
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Little SisterParticipantWhatever!!
Here LandiaSorry I forgot about this! Glad 'yall like my idea!
Mariette~
The door makes a high-pitched, gleeful noise as I shove it open. A plume of dust poofs in my face, making me jerk back. I cough, cough again, and step inside. The entryway is dark and dusty, making me shiver in my thin pink dress. I take a step forward, taking in my surroundings while adjusting to the darkness of the room. I try to step again, but my leg seizes up, and I only have time to utter a high gurgling noise before I plop down into a sitting position, frozen and motionless, unable to move. I watch in terror as the room around me grows to a size so huge it could be a giant's castle. A black cat comes towards me, sending dust into the already thick air with every step. More people emerge, tall as trees, it seems, and one groans in sympathy at my …how should I say it?… inconvenient costume. Will I be a doll forever?
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SqueakParticipantGah, I know. Writing way to much.
Renny~
I relax on a chair as the others talk about what to do. Eh, being a cat isn't so bad. I look at the ground, frowning at a doll near the door that wasn't there when I got there. I jump off the chair to investigate. The doll looks slightly creepy, and I hiss despite myself. Oh brother. This poor kid probably dressed as a doll. I meow to get the girls' attentions (Renny is the only boy here. Gee.) and they look at me. I point toward the doll, and meow again. Skye realizes almost immediatly and tells the others what happened to the doll kid. I sighed and shrugged the doll onto my back, and moved to the rest of the kids.
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Winter FireflyParticipantPosting
In THE Hounted HouseAria~I looked at Renny, he was sooooo cute, to
begin with! Now, he's a CAT! I love cats! I have five of my own at home.
I reach to pick Renny up, then it hits me I am picking up Renny Darkhall, how embarrassing!
I think, dropping him quickly. He hisses at me, no cat likes to be
dropped, even if they are human. I slowly walk to the chair, wail they
are talking, nobody sees me, I shrink, and turn invisible (just a metaphor... or so she thinks…) just like every day at school. Then, Renny jumps up onto the chair. Does he see me, I thought, or am I really invisible? I
look at my hands, I could see right through them! I could see the
outline, but nothing else. Renny didn't realize, but he was on my lap.
Then he jumped down, and picked something up… a doll? A MOVING,
BREATHING, CREEPY DOLL! Then I think; oh my gosh! She's like us! Whoa, she's got cracks and everything!Here I end you… do you like?
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WatermelonParticipantAnistasia:
"Anastasia! I thought you were going to dress up!" Mom called to me from the top of the stairs.
"No, Mom. It's lame. I'm not a baby," I replied in a sassy voice.
"Hey, I don't like your tone!" Mom started to say, but I had already slammed the door.
I breathed in the cool night air as I walked down the street. I haunted house was only a block away and my friends and I had a bet that whoever stayed the longest got all our candy. Lucky for me I wasn't going trick-or-treating this year so I had nothing to lose. I looked at the house, it was the perfect haunted house, dark, shutters flapping in the breeze, broken windows, and strange creaks and moans. I hesitated before going inside, I looked at my watch, 7:30. They should be here by now. Oh, well. As I stepped over the threshhold of the door, I felt tingley all over. Somthing was wrong. I looked at my feet, still the same, my hands, my arms, my legs. There was a small, Victorian style mirror hanging in the corner, I stepped over to it and was shocked at what I saw. In big bold letters the word LOSER was on my forhead as if someone had written it in sharpie.
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BrookeiraParticipantAqua ran down the hall, leaving a trail of ice in her wake. HOW was this happening?
She suddenly tripped over a cat………
It was Renny. She could tell. She stepped back as she realized her druid powers must have been kicking in. The cat-Renny-person said, "Great. Another girl to fawn all over me." Aqua scowled. "For your information, Renny," Aqua said, "you are a spineless, mean, cowardly, punkish jock and you should be brought down a peg."
"Wait…. you can understand me?" asked Renny, forgetting that Aqua had just insulted him. Aqua sighed. "I dressed as a druid. Animals and elements are characteristic of druids.."
Aqua saw the other girls-things-looking at her strangely, and she said in perfect deadpan, "Hullo, I'm Aqua, and I'm magical, I suppose."
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SqueakParticipantKeep changing tenses. Bah!
Renny~
I look again at the door, seeing it open. I meow in surprise and jump onto the chair, making the doll slide onto the floor. I look at her, sighing with relief she didn't break. Skye, Tara, and Aria all look at the door, groaning. I chuckle slightly and shift my attention toward the newcomer. She doesn't have a costume… Wonder what's gonna happen to her… She looks at the mirror and then touches her forehead. The girl doesn't seem to notice us, most likely too intent in her forehead. I shift closer, and laugh (which sounds like a joyful meow) despite myself. 'LOSER' is written on her head, as if with sharpie. I laugh even more, smiling. Gee, glad that didn't happen to me. Skye, Tara, and Aria finally see what's so funny, and they manage to stuffle their giggles. Aria gives up all together and laughs happily. The girl turns around, finally realizing we are here.
"Who… Who are you people?" she whispers, her eyes glancing at the three of them. I hiss and jump onto the girl's leg. She looks at me in surprise.
"That's Renny. He use to be a human, but got transformed like the rest of us," Tara interrupts, looking at me and frowning. I smirk.
"So.. So this is you guys' costumes?.. Okay… I'm… I'm Anastasia," she mumbles, looking at us all. Another kid. This is going great.
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BrookeiraParticipantAngrySQUEAK, WHY DID YOU JUST IGNORE MY POST?????? AGAIN???????
Pie says Mahi, he wants fish!
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SqueakParticipantI would have liked it if you had said that a bit more politely, but fine. Use your brain and think about this situation. We posted at the same time. Conflicting posts. Got that?
Also, Renny's not snobby. He can get angry easily, but only if something bad happens to his friends. He won't go on rage or something. Read is personality a bit more and you'll see he's not popular, and good looking.
Thanks! 🙂
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BrookeiraParticipant(cools down)
Really sorry, I had just been woken up at dawn by my dog (NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO) and was not feeling good. Also, Aqua doesn't know you very well. She was just making a random insult. Bleh. I'm sorry.
In my defense, I posted quite a while before you and my post was about to appear. I'm just going to continue from where I left off, but with Anastasia in there too.
Aqua looked at Anastasia's forehead. "That's unfortunate," she said.
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SqueakParticipantI think we can make my post happen first, and then yours. So like
"So… So this is your guys' costumes?… Okay… I'm.. I'm Anastasia," she mumbles, looking at us all. Another kid. This is going great. My comment.
And then yours. Does that work?
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BrookeiraParticipantEh, sure. SOMEONE ELSE POST PLZ!!!!!!!!!
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BrookeiraParticipantEh, sure. SOMEONE ELSE POST PLZ!!!!!!!!!
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