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ClaawsParticipantSorry, I answered twice. I didn't know if it saved it or not because the poll was back up when I went back into the Power Ideas one. Combining mine and Moonshadows? (Also, I thought no one would vote for mine! Second place! Wow!) Ours are very similar. Moonshadow, can you post yours again? I don't know if we should combine them. I like the adding on. But how will we get the final one? Another vote? Moonshadow, what do you think? And lastly, Icy the Powerfriend. Can I help make the background story? You can say no. And Moonshadow, do you get to decide how they die too? I think we have all agreed on Catastrophe. But what happens and how Catastrophe kills them. Also about the Powers of the Powers, you said they give them the ability to walk sing swim fly etc., and I was wondering if that is final too. If not, I've been talking about this;
When the powers are conquered, not all of their power could fit into a small instrument. So some went into the air, and searched the earth for more living things to cling to and give their power too. So they found living things, giving them a weak version of the powers skills. Some you might find are shape shifting, the ability to read minds, breathing fire, the ability to make things grow, or grow faster, or saving a dieing person, bringing people back from the dead, the ability to bend or make magic, and many more. But there is the poison, and the formula, hidden in a small vilage, just in case the Powers come back. Yes this is the posion that killed the Powers. But now it's a poison to all who have interpreted the Powers. Most humans haven't…
(For the Powerfreind) one may have gotten all of the types weak powers, and this is known as (whoever you want the name to be), soon to be called Powerfriend. The poor Powerfriend family, most of them killed for being powerful. Yet a small generation still lives, after so many centuries, with weak powers. Two sisters. And a bright future.
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MoonshadowParticipantI'm just so happy that so many people liked my story! Yes, Claaws, I will post it once more, and Ronan, what do you mean? If you mean your subplot of catastrophe, yes! I have incorporated that into my story as a vital part! @ Admins, I can't believe you would want my Power Origin story to be the one!! I'm just so happy and so grateful to everyone who voted for me! Tears are about to fill up my eyes!! Would everyone mind telling me if you voted for me so I can give you a virtual hug? I do know Icy voted for me, as she posted before, so *hugs!* anyway, I would LOVE to have mine as the main Power Origin Story, but I am open to new ideas as well! I like your Ideas for the powers and PowerFriend, Claaws! I am re-posting my story, and I will credit all the ideas I used at the end!
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MoonshadowParticipantEveryone knows about the Kyngdom Powers, but how much do they know? Everyone has a theory, or a rumor that they heard, but is it true? I will tell you the true story of the powers. Yes, this is the story of the Origin of Kyngdom, and the Origin of the Kyngdom Powers.
Once, there was a dark planet. There was nothing, not even light. But on that planet, something happened. No one knows why or how, and no one may ever know, but a flower bloomed. At first it was small, just a bud, but it grew, and gave a beautiful light. It gave life, too. And the life it gave was the life that would make Kyngdom. And out of the flower came a tiny animal. Just a kitten, with the wings and the head of a chick. This was the to be Caelani, the great ruler of the sky. Next, a tiny sea serpent came out, with measly useless fins. This was to be Ecio/Ayearth (I think his name should be Ecio. Tell me if you disagree.) great ruler of the sea. Next bloomed a tiny garter snake, with tiny mouse claws. This was to be Terralay (does everyone like this name? Terra like earth.) great ruler of the land. Then a tiny horse, only a foal, with a small shiny horn. She was to be Sylvia, ruler of life and good magic. Next a tiny wolf pup was born, with the same useless wings as Caelani. She was Lunee, ruler of the stars, moon, beauty and light itself. Then, lastly, a little dragon, merely a lizard with wings was born. She was Claaws, ruler of darkness, evil, greed, and fire. Inside and out. These were the Powers that ruled Kyngdom. Kyngdom was happy and peaceful, with the Powers ruling, and it remained so for a long time. But then, the humans came. No one is sure where they came from, maybe another planet, maybe not. And at first they were good, but one human, named Catastrophe, wanted revenge. For Caelani had killed a dear friend of his. And the boy was evil. He set out to kill the powers. Once he killed Caelani, they blamed it on Claaws. Because Claaws ruled the fire inside. It had gotten to everyone at some point, and they banished Claaws. Lunee made the decision, for she was partly the ruler of light, meaning darkness never got to her. Claaws' power was changed instead of the power of tooth as it had been, it was the Power of Darkness. And the darkness and evil and greed grew inside her, until she wasn't like the powers anymore. Instead of the clear blue or white eyes of the powers, hers were blood red. But she met with the powers, and Lunee decided that Claaws could come out of exile. For they needed all the powers to conquer catastrophe. But there was also one good human. And she was PowerFriend. After the great flower had wilted, she was born. To protect the powers when they were small, and always. And she tried to protect them now, but couldn't. She was the descendent of a PowerFriend, and had weaker magic. Catastrophe eventually killed all of the Powers, one by one. But their spirit went into an instrument that when played, would summon them back. But they were so powerful, that not all their power could fit. So Caelani's power went into the sky, causing sone birds to have greater magic. And Ecio's power went into the sea, causing some fish and other creatures to have more power. And Terralay's power went into the very earth, causing some land animals to posses more magic. And Lunee's power went into the air, and caused some animals to be more good. And Sylvia's power went into the air too causing animals to have more magic and shape shifting abilities, and Claaws' power also went into the air, causing some to be evil. They gave power while they were alive, too. Caelani made animals like birds be able to fly, Ecio gave animals like fish the power to swim, Terralay gave animals on land the ability to dig and scratch, Sylvia gave animals everywhere the ability to walk, Lunee gave animals everywhere the ability to howl, squeak, or talk, and Claaws gave animals the fire inside. Hence the names of the powers. The Power of Wing, The Power of Fin, The Power of Claw, The Power of Hoof, The Power of Howl, and The Power of Darkness.
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well, there it is! Thanks to Lucy/Xiolong for the flower, thanks to Claaws for the animals blooming out, thanks to someone's CAPTCHA for the name Ecio, thanks to Scylla for Sylvia, thanks to Ronan and Claaws for Catastrophe and his story, thanks to Lucy/Xiolong again for the name and part of the story of Lunee, thank you to Icy, Anwen, and Claaws for the PowerFriend, Thank you Admins for the poll and the power of wing and claw, thank you Claire for helping with the power of howl, thank you Claaws for the power of darkness, thank you Scylla for the power of hoof,and thank you to everyone else who worked on the stories and voted for me! Thank you all! *hugs*
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IcyParticipant11
The Forest*hugs back* *remembers that MoonShadow is a boy in Kyngdom* *lets go very quickly*
Wow, I just made that akward.
But that story..it's just so so so perfect…..
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MoonshadowParticipanthaha! That's actually kind of funny! I am a wolf, so I guess that makes it a little less awkward. It's always a little less awkward when your hugging something with fur 😉
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MoonshadowParticipantAaahhh! And how could I forget Thimble, who came up with the midnight-evil blob thingy in Claaws' exile! Thank you Thimble!
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Viola?ParticipantSecret
SecretI don't like how everything is always special. I know that it has to be special, that's just the way it works, but what if it isn't? What if it was a mistake?
In the beginning-not the beginning of the universe or the world or life, just the beginning of this fragment of the story-there were flowers. Some of them were big, some small, some different colors or with different petals and stems and things. Some were loved, others were not. Everything was normal, even though normalcy is an illusion.
The flowers started to die. Most of them withered away. They were nearly gone when someone made a mistake. They were trying to do something, cross-pollination perhaps, and it didn't turn out the way they expected. They didn't notice at first. The new flowers were the same as the old ones. There were more of some than others, and lots of them were different sizes and shapes and such. Eventually, though, someone noticed that they didn't die.
Maybe that person was the Flower-Bearer. Maybe the Flower-Bearer has more than one flower. Maybe she's not perfect and gets restless and goes out with her immortal flowers. Maybe she drops one now and then. Maybe they become different things, like animals and humans and Powers. Maybe some are more loved than others.
That's my story. I don't think it's the whole story, but it's a start. Is it okay? I didn't read all the other comments so this might be unwelcome, the story might have been decided already, but this is what mine is.
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MoonshadowParticipantIt's an interesting story, Viola?, but I'm sorry. The poll has already happened and I won. You can still write stories, but they won't be THE story.
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Viola?ParticipantSecret
SecretYeah, sorry. I posted that before I read everything up to here. And I'm sorry again, but I need to say that your reply is a little braggy and almost kind of mean. I get it though.
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MoonshadowParticipantWhich post? If it's the one before this one, Ya I see how you would think that. I really was trying not to be braggy when I said that I won, and I was just trying to give information really. When I said that you could write stories and they just wouldn't be THE story, I was just trying to say that you can still write stories. I'm sorry you misinterpreted my post. I hate it when people are mean and braggy (especially both at once) so I would never purposely post something that was mean and braggy. Usually, I put a smiley face on those kind of posts so people know what I mean. It's hard to know how someone is saying things in typing unless you put an emoji 😉
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Viola?ParticipantSecret
SecretThanks so much for understanding. I want to say something else too, but like you said, it can only be expressed in emoji.
The only problem is, they don't have the right emoji.
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MoonshadowParticipantyes. That happens to me a lot. Not the right emoji.
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ChinchillaParticipantyay...
yay....Congratulations, everyone!!!!! Awesome Icy, second place, WOW!!! AND WHOEVER GOT FIRST PLACE BECAUSE I JUST FORGOT THEIR NAME!! AND EVERYONE ELSE!!!
Yay! Heh. :] Yay…. kinda unhappy that I wasn't on the list but really, I mean, my ideas weren't fully formed and my Eeyes thing wasn't the best, so I can see why it wasn't shown! 🙂 Awesome work Admins and everyone else!
"ezxt." Et cetara, etc. Thank you, Frederic! He just reminded me that there was like, etc., AKA a lot of other people competing! Aaaw. *Hugs.*
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The Editors!ParticipantHere are the other rankings:
Power Origin Story
6. Luxy/Xiaolong – 9 votes
7. Avery – 8 votes
8. Kathleen M. – 7 votes
9. Magnus B. – 4 votes
10. Neminem – 3 votes
Power Origin Subplots
6. Chinchilla/Ivy (Power of Eye) – 14 votes
7. Storm Windwhisperer (Power of Brain) – 12 votes
8. Thimble (origin of Evil: midnight-colored blob) – 10 votes
9. Chinchilla/Ivy (Power of Fin) – 8 votes
10. Pheonix C. (addition to Info chan's story) – 6 votes
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Lucy/XiǎolóngParticipant@Moonshadow:
I can't believe you're Leeli! Sorry, just wanted to say that. I'm Mei-xue, and I was in your Wingfeather Saga thread.
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MoonshadowParticipantThat's right! It's just so crazy to imagine someone you've always known as Lucy/Xiâolóng is someone else!!
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Annalise WestbrookParticipant(Bibliophile)Wait, you're Leeli?
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MoonshadowParticipantYep. Wouldn't have guessed that, huh? 😉
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Page P.Participant9
B.I.G. H.Q.Soooo, now that we have this… what are we supossed to do with it?
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The Editors!ParticipantGood question! It doesn't necessarily change anything that's happening in the present day. But we'll add it to the Story So Far thread soon, and it might help you come up with ideas for the RP or Group threads.
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ThimbleParticipantWaaaiit a minute…Isn't my story now a part of Moonshadow's? Does that mean my story also sort of won? Or…I'm a bit confused. Does anybody know? 😐
[Also: Leeli, you are Moonshadow?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I had NO IDEA! That's so cool!]
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MoonshadowParticipantThanks, Thimble! And yes, even though my story won, I incorporated, used, and modified other people's ideas into mine. So, yes, you won too. Sort of… In a way :-). I used your story as part of mine, as I think I said in my earlier post.
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ThimbleParticipant*Realization dawns* So that means the evil dragon is real now…
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IcyParticipant11
The ForestI'm leaving for a week or so, due to vacation, and I wanted to post some speculation on the Powers here.
That gray hair is just so, Elf dear, completely mistic.
Sorry, I was talking to my picture of Celesti. I drew one, but my current computer has no memory, only internet, so I can’t show you. It might be better that I don’t show you, since I suck at drawing.
Inner Icy: Don’t say suck
Fine, moi pretty. I’m back for another lecture on Le Powers, and I think you’ll find it intresting. This talks a lot about the motives behind the different actions the Powers did.
Caelani- Gryphon. Let’s look at the charecteristics behind Caelani. He’s part Eagle. Eagles are pretty high up on the food chain-what eats Eagles? They’re also a symbol of America; very Patriotic. Part Lion-pretty high up on the food chain again, symblofying Bravery and Chivalry.
So then why is Caelani so….rampaging? Well, we’ve learned from several stories that he goes with his emotions. I don’t know how to say this, but he’s…like bipolar. When he came out of the Power, to him, instants ago he was fighting Catastrophe. That might explain his rage, and anger towards humans.Next, we look back. Lion. Eagle. All that pride and bravery might go up to his head.
Lunee- I’m not really the one who should be writing this. Mooonshadoowwwww I need you!
Lunee is the Angel Wolf. Wolves stay in packs, showing they care for each other-there’s not really a such thing as a Lone Wolf. Wolves are also predators, but the puppies are ADORABLE! And Lunee knows when to hold her tongue-like any good dog. She’s not entirely tame though-howling when she wants to, and being a predator. And then we look at Angels-mystic. Pure. Light. Mm hm, girl, you got that Howl.
Ecio- Here’s some stuff proving that Ecio just might be one of the wickedest of the bunch-but we’re not really sure.
Warning: I’m going to make some Bible comparisons here. I’m SUPER sorry if this insults anyone’s religious belief.
In the Bible, it says that snakes once had legs, but they were taken away as, well, how do I say this? A curse to snakes. Ecio, however, has claws. Does this mean that Ecio is the oldest power? Does this mean that Ecio is actually one of the nicest powers? Hmm….
More coming soon! I'll write it in 2 parts, one shortly after this.
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IcyParticipant11
The ForestPart 2!!!
Ayearth- not much is known about Ayearth except he’s one of the kindest Powers, according to a post in the Book Of Myths & Legends. But Ayearth and Ecio are both depicted as Serpents. Does this hint to something about both of them, or a connection? Ecio basically represents earth. Ayearth represents water, basically.
And they both represent serpents with organisms added to them. Ayearth-fins. Ecio-claws. Is there a third serpent, representing air in this trio? Is it maybe a Chinese dragon, which is basically a serpent with wings? Do Ecio & Ayearth share a brotherly bond? Is Ayearth a girl or a boy? SO MANY QUESTIONS TO BE ANSWERED!!!!
Celesti- of course I couldn’t leave Celesti out, although she’s technically not a Power- I’ve been looking at stories, and Celesti came from the center of the golden flower of life. Does this mean Celesti was basically an inspiration for all of those pictures of fairies sitting on flowers, doing things with flowers, etc.?
DOES THAT MEAN SOMEONE WAS WATCHING WHILE THE POWERS WERE BORN!?
There must’ve been someone watching, due to the story being written down, but WHO?!
Sylvia- ahh, one of my favorites. I think I might have accidentally, from a passage I wrote on Celesti, made Sylvia and Celesti share a bond-meaning Celesti likes Sylvia more than the other powers. Fairies & Unicorns…. Excuse me whilst I throw up.
Sylvia was originally going to be the Power Of Light, which makes sense (kinda). But is Sylvia more powerful than the other Powers?
Just think-Sylvia is the Power Of Hoof, basically the founder of speed. She’s depicted with a horn and originally was going to be the Power Of Light before we changed the story! Does this mean that she has hidden powers none of us know of?
Claaws- okay, just ask Claaws herself.
Then theres Jaaws….But what really is Jaaws?
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Viola?ParticipantSecret
SecretHi Icy! I asked before if you wanted to merge your charrie with mine, Lycaella, but you didn't answer, and now I kind of want Lycaella to be in the Who's here? thread. If you want to merge, I want you to tell me soon.
Nice story, but I'm a little confused by it. We already chose a Power Origin story–is this another one, or are you just expanding on the Powers' personalities? Because they're also supposed to not be super nice anymore last I checked…
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IcyParticipant11
The ForestToday is the day that I leave for vacation, and I'm commenting like CRAZY before I leave…
That wasn't a story actually-and I know we chose a Power Origin story. I do NOT want to change my charrie in ANY WAY. I'm just expirimenting-looking at the Powers personalities and speculating. Some are nice, some aren't.
You sound a little confused on the powers, so I would suggest you talk to Moonshadow & Claws. Only three that we know of are absolute jerks.
I repeat, that was a speculation-I want to figure out more about the Powers by asking questions. It's pretty intresting.
I think the main reason why you were confused is because I wrote about Celesti, the Blue Fairy, first PowerFriend-whoops, now I'm boasting. She's part of the official Power Origin, but the one we have here hasn't been updated by Moonshadow. Thanks!
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