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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVThe wind slammed Mari against a broken bucket, hard. She bent over, gasping, trying to catch her breath. The leaf spun away in a whirlwind of dancing debris, but the small figure was left behind. Mari bent her head against the wind and trudged forward, her makeshift umbrella forgotten. A newspaper blowing wildly in the wind whoshed over her head draped over the bucket behind her, and a corner slapped her back, soggy from the rain and surprisingly heavy. She stumbled and almost fell, only to find that she was right in front of the motionless fairy.
It was a fairy. There was no doubt about that – it was too small to be anything else. But Mari couldn't even tell if it was male or female, much less alive. Its hair was cut short and ragged, its face tanned and hard from exposure to the elements. Birch-bark trousers and a shirt made from a kind of leaf she didn't even recognize were its only clothing – no shoes, no head covering, not even a jacket for protection against the bitter weather. It didn't stir when Mari touched its shoulder. "Well then, I guess you're coming back with me, whoever you are," she muttered under her breath. The wind was with her now, a good thing, because carrying the limp fairy and trying to stay upright was all she could do. The wind all but moved her itself. In seconds she was at her front door, noting with satisfaction that a sheet from the newspaper was caught against the milk bottle. It sheltered the front door, so she should be able to get herself and her guest inside without soaking and ruining everything. The door slammed behind her, sealing itself well, and the newspaper blew off, shaking the bottle, but Mari's home held fast between the bricks she had braced it with.
Jacob stirred, light breaking through the darkness that had enveloped him for so long. Where?…. What?…. He sat up, amazed that he could. The last thing he remembered was pain – mind-numbing, dulling pain, and crawling under a leaf for shelter while he still had some vestiges of consciousness left. So where…..
He glanced around, mind still fuzzy and slow. Glass walls, ceiling, floor. All round. Blurred, like they were wet. He was in…. well, it looked like a ((what? bottlecap? matchbox? I don't know really how big the fairies are… I'll go with bottlecap, but if you see them differently, let me know. Then again, a matchbox wouldn't fit in a milk bottle. :P)) bottlecap, padded with bits of cloth, scraps of yarn, and a few bits of feather. There as a wall in front of him; more of a curtain, really, bits of everything from canvas to silk patched together. He, living far from civilization as he did, didn't recognize most of the fabrics. Even just the sight of a leaf would have cheered him trememdously.
((Sorry that's so long. I wrote two paragraphs and then really wanted to introduce Jacob. I know that's a name from Twilight, but I've never read the books
and I like the name. If you've read Twilight, please don't make any mental connections, because, as I've never read the books, I can't be basing this Jacob off the character 😛 And I don't want to monopolize the story, so I'm not writing a word until you've done at least four paragraphs. 😀 I love to write, so if I start writing a bigger percentage than you wish I would, please (pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease) let me know because it's very possible that I won't realize it. I'm very hard to offend, I assure you, as long as you're not doing something like swearing at me (that does tick me off), and I'm pretty sure that Admins wouldn't let that on the site. Thanks for that, Admins!))-EH
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EmaParticipant11
NYJacob stretched his arms, and immediately regretted it. He winced; he must've broken some bones in the accident. Feebly, Jacob took his legs out the bottlecap and slowly rested his back on a clear, rounded wall. Clear? Rounded? How could that be? Jacob thought. And where am I? How did I get here? All Jacob remebered was that he was walking in an unfamiliar town and rain started falling. He had slipped on a leaf and it had skid down the road. All of a sudden, an object had loomed over him and he crashed into the brick, headfirst. I'm lucky I'm still alive. I could've suffered major head injuries.
Jacob gazed around the shelter. There was a female fairy at the far end of it. She was chopping up berries with a sharpened stick and pouring the remaining juices into a small container. The fairy stuffed the container into a lopsided shelf and started frying the berries in a piece of scrap metal. He sniffed; the food sure didn't smell very good. Jacob softened. Maybe this fairy was trying to prepare a meal for him, even if she didn't have very much food. The food might actually taste good, she just needed to add some seasonings to the berries. Wonder what it's called, he thought. I could've had it before in the country. At least he knew that these fairies had growing plants and they didn't eat any fabrics or animals.
The fairy whirled around and looked at Jacob. He lowered his head guiltily, as if he had done something wrong. She smiled happily. "Hi, I'm Mari! You crashed into a brick and you were knocked unconsious. I brought you into my milk bottle so you didn't die. Luckily for you, I have a surplus of berries- I was treated to dinner last night by a friend. We can have a nice meal." Her braids bounced in excitement. "Who are you? Where do you come from? Fairies around here don't wear your kind of clothes." Mari motioned to his leaf shirt and birch-bark trousers. "And any fairy with a brain would've worn some protection from the weather; didn't you know it was rainy today?" She blushed suddenly. " I'm talking too much, aren't I? Go ahead, your turn."
Jacob replied gruffly, "Um, I'm uh, Jacob. I live out in the country, where I see other fairies only about once every other month at marketday. Yeah, I remember slightly being lifted up. I thought I was dying." He paused, trying desperately to remember Mari's other questions. "I'm wearing a maple leaf shirt and softened birch bark pants. Where I live, it wasn't supposed to rain today. I was just bored and decided to fly to another town. I ended up here. Then poof! Rain came poring down on me. I didn't know what had happened when I fell onto a slippery leaf." Jacob decided to tell Mari that he had no idea where he was. "Where are we? And why are we in this thingy?" He pointed his eyes around the walls.
(((((I have to go now. I would've written more, though. Have you watched the movie Twilight? I hope I'm not making Jacob too much like the Twilight saga Jacob, but I'll check in Breaking Dawn just to be sure. I've read the books, but I'm not obsessed like some people I know….*names a few silently* Yeah, I'm not going to start swearing at you… 1. because you're not writing too much and 2. because I don't like swearing at people and 3. because Admin wouldn't let me 🙂 *calls to Admins* Thanks for that!!! Okay, I'm going to let you write now unless you want me to write more. Bye!)))))
((((PS I previewed it and I'm hoping that I didn't write too much. 🙂 ))))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NV((No, you didn't write too much. And I haven't seen the movies or read the books, although I'm considering reading at least the first one just because it's generally a bad idea to form opinions about something you've never experienced.))
Mari laughed. "It's shelter, isn't it? And it works well enough for a house. Is your arm all right? I couldn't tell if you'd been hurt without you being awake."
Jacob winced as he lifted it a little. "I don't know. It hurts, that's for sure. Maybe broken. Can't tell. Let's see…." He trailed off into silence as he held his left hand over his sore right arm. His eyes narrowed in concentration and his forehead wrinkled. His left palm began to glow a little, then the golden, dancing light enveloped his right arm. The flesh of the arm began to turn transparent, the same bright hue as the light. Soon the bones showed through, shining like burnished gold, and sure enough, the translucent skin and muscle showed that they were both broken near the wrist. The larger was snapped clean through, the smaller chipped. Jacob began to murmer softly, and Mari joined in, chanting the healing verses from fairy lore. The glow slowly turned from gold to purple, and there was a blinding flash of green, and the light was gone. Jacob bent over his arm in agony for a moment, then straightened again and lifted it. "There, that's better. I think I'm all right otherwise."
Marie whirled back to the stove. "Good! These are almost done…." She began to flip the berries, one by one, like pancakes. Jacob had to admit that they did smell better after being cooked, and he was hungry. Now Mari began to slide them onto a rounded bit of glass shaped like a bowl. She drizzled the juice she had collected earlier onto them and sprinkled them with a handfull of raw flour from a bag to her left. They did look good. Jacob grinned.
"Like we do with pancakes, only opposite. We fry the flour and put berries on it. I'll try that sometime."
Mari waved a hand at the table set against the wall with its chairs, half the legs longer than the others so that it would sit flat in the bottle. "Have a seat. Best to eat while they're hot." Jacob sat gratefully and they both dug in. The rain had long since stopped, and halfway through the meal, the bottle jerked a little to one side despite the bricks that supported it. Mari jumped up, alarmed. Then through the glass she caught a hint of greenish-orange sparkles in the air. Every fairy left a similar trail behind when it flew, although the color depended on the individual. And Mari knew that particular color all too well.
Kanti!
((Hehe. I wonder what you're going to do with that…. Kind of left you with a cliffhanger, didn't I? *laughs maliciously* You're welcome to do the same to me any time, of course. :D))
-EH
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EmaParticipant11
NYMari groaned. Not when she had company! Now, of all times, Kanti had to come bother her. She looked at Jacob. "It seems that we have visitors," she said through tightly pressed lips. Mari trudged to the door, but stood stock-still, wondering if she should actually open it. The bottle shook again, harder this time. She scrunched her forehead in frustration and reached out to grab the door handle.
It started to turn, all by itself. The door opened, and in flew Kanti. Her icy blue eyes and dark, pointed bangs implied that she was not a fairy people wanted to deal with. Kanti had on her usual clothing- a rose petal blouse trimmed with golden canvas and green dyed dress pants. Her "work" outfit, Mari thought. Some work she does. In a sugary voice, Kanti said, "Hello, Maaaaari. Long time, no see, yes? My, that Debate certainly was a nice one, although it was rather boring, the way your side dragged it out, always contradicting my team. Too bad you lost, kid." She tapped Mari lightly on the nose. "But of course, nobody could prove it. It might as well have been a tie." Kanti fake-brightened. "Guess what? The mayor has planned a "sequel", as you may call it, to today's Debate. You better try hard, Maaaaari. Maybe you'll beat me. But I think not."
Mari's eyes narrowed. "You know Kanti," she said sarcastically. "It does my heart good to have unwelcome neighbors drop in, right when I'm trying to relax after a terrific Debate. Maybe some people I know should do that more often. Mmm."
Kanti didn't reply, and glanced innocently around the room. She picked at the odds and ends of the insulating fabics. "Tacky little place you've got here." Her eyes rested on Jacob, leaning weakly on the wall, trying to hide, apparently intimidated. "Why, hello there! Who are you?" Without waiting for an answer, she turned back to Mari. "Oh, and who is this? A new boy?"
((((That's as much as a cliffhanger as I could manage. 🙂 ))))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVMari glanced at Jacob, mentally begging him not to back down. To stand up for himself. Maybe there was something in telepathy after all – he seemed to get the hint one way or another. He stood up straighter and said in the most sickeningly polite tone he could muster, with a saucy tilt of his head, "Well hello yourself! Mari, do hand your guest a towel. It appears a bird chose her face as an unfortunate target. Won't you, there's a dear."
His taunting tone acted like a whip on Kanti. Her face hardened and her eyes narrowed into stony slits of frost. She tried to match his syrupy tone but was sadly lacking in self-control. Her voice shook with anger. "Don't display your alarm so plainly, child." She lifted her arm, fingers stiffened, and all but shouted a holding spell at Jacob, her voice grating and gravelly with fury. He smiled condescendingly and flicked a single finger at her. In an instant the holding spell was gone and had been replaced by a much stronger one on Kanti. Jacob began walking grimly toward her, punctuating each slow, ponderous step with a scathing sentence.
"Child, you said? Child? Well, consider your position, Kanti. You know nothing about me. You don't know my name or my age or where I come from. For all you know, I could be one of the NINE!" Here his voice thundered through the bottle and Mari shrank against the wall, suddenly conscious that her guest had greater powers than she had suspected, whether or not his threat was true. She didn't think it was – he looked too young. "But you didn't consider that, did you? No, you felt it necessary to insult a guest the way no proper fairy would to regain your sense of self esteem. Congratualtions. You've just made a complete and utter fool of yourself." By now he was right in front of Kanti, and she was backed against the door of the bottle, trembling like a frail leaf. He smiled contemptuously and turned away, scorn packed into every fiber of his bearing. "Fortunately for you, I'm not one of the Nine. But…." Here he let the silence hang ominously and stood with his back to Kanti, his hands clasped behind him, bearing regal. He spoke without turning around, each word ringing like a peal of doom. "But my father is!" Kanti and Mari let out simultanious gasps, Kanti's of horror, Mari's of awe that she had entertained the successor to the Council in her own home unawares. There was no doubt that what he said was true. When fairies lied, their wings fluttered and they couldn't stand still, and Jacob looked like he had been carved of granite just now. He spun around and glared fiercely at Kanti, a shrinking coward with all her false bravado gone. His voice was quiet and threatening, layered richly with scorn. "You're a liar and a bully, you who call yourself Kanti. I would suggest you leave. NOW!" She turned and fled through the door in terror, regardless of the rain that had turned to hail. In an instant, she was gone.
Mari raised one eyebrow at Jacob. "And why, pray tell, didn't you tell me that before?" She was a little annoyed, even if he was the son of on of the Nine.
He raised an eyebrow back. "I don't like how people walk on eggshells when they're near me and treat me like I'm made of glass and might explode. I do blow up now and then, like when there's a bully like that one. I should have done something more – she's of the sort that will be bent on revenge now." He wrinkled his nose in an amazingly ordinary way. "It really doesn't make me different from other fairies, you know. Sure, I'm stronger in magic than most, but I can't help that – it's hereditery. Please don't be mad that I didn't tell you, Mari.
((Admins, is the spellcheck thing new? Whether or not it is, thanks for putting it in! I was actually about to start a thread to ask for that. Very nice! Thanks! And Ema, my dialogue is usually pretty bad. Sorry if it is here – I'm still having a hard time reading objectively 'cause I just wrote it. 😛 Dialogue is one of my weakest points. Anywho, that was fun! I like cliffhangers where you can do fun things. Thanks! I just realized that this is getting a bit long for a short story. Maybe for revenge Kanti should go to the king regardless of the Nine or the council deciding the debates. From my point of view, the Nine are the most powerful magicians, and they're a strong force in the fairy government for that reason. I didn't say so, though, so you can change it if you want. My opinions are flexible. 😀 It's getting late, so I'd better stop before I start to ramble.))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVEma? Maybe I'm getting paranoid about disappearances, just like the rest of the Chatterbox, but where are you? Please?
-A worried EH
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EmaParticipant11
NYI'm sorry, but I just wrote four or five really long paragraphs and then my computer froze and erased it all!!!!!!!!!!!
Noooo! I don't have time to re-type it but I'll try again later. 🙁 And I had finished it all too!!!!!-
Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVOh, I'm sorry! Rats! Argh….
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EmaParticipant11
NYI went to 6 Flags up in the Adirondacks, so if you were wondering where I was, then….. yeah. I have to go eat dinner soon but I'll try to start my paragraphs.
"Of course I'm not angry with you, Jacob! I would've done the same in your position. You didn't want to attract attention and make me all fluttery and anxious or anything," Mari said.
Darn, I have to leave. I'll type more later.
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVI was getting a little concerned, but it's not like I was going to call the police and file a missing person report. 😀 Take your time – this thread isn't going anywhere. I mean, like, past the second page. 😀 I'm glad you're not abandoning us, that's all. And I was wondering, could I show this to some people? (Ok, so my brother would say that's going over the edge with asking permission, but I'd rather be on the safe side. :P) And could I take our concept and maybe rewrite it? Just take more time, you know? And if I did that, could I enter the finished product in some contests if I gave you credit? (It stinks that I can't really give you credit cause I don't know your full name, but with what I do know. First name, age, state….) Just wondering….
-EH the Inquisitive
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EmaParticipant11
NYYeah, that would be fine with me! And it would be cool if you won! (As long as I had some credit :D)
Mari paused for a minute, then added, "Not that I would be. I'd be acting the same as I am now even if the king was here." Not waiting for a response, Mari scooped the berries onto a plate and poured a little extra juice on them. Then she reached into the cabinet again and pulled out a large cheese curd and a roll. Mari took a piece of metal and sliced each in half. She put it on the plates. "Here we are," she said as she picked up the plates. "Ahk!" Mari buckled under the weight. It was all she could do to stand up. She staggered over to Jacob and set his plate down. She pulled over another bottlecap and sat down, putting her feet up on a feather. "Ahhh." Mari looked at Jacob and gestured to the food. "Eat," she commanded. "Or else I'll eat it for you."
Jacob wholeheartedly grabbed the roll and began stuffing it in his mouth. "Mmm. Dish ish really good, Mari." He finished the roll and began on the berry. It tasted better than it looked. "What'sh dish called?" he asked with his mouth full of berry. "I've gotta recommend dish to my fasher." After he finished the berry, he gulped down the cheese curd. Realizing that Mari was still chewing her roll, he blushed and looked at his hands, embarassed. "I guess I need a little training to become one of the Nine," he said quietly. He tried to defend himself before Mari could say a word. "I was really hungry. Hitting your head does something to your stomach."
"I guess," Mari giggled, amused. She stood up and dusted her skirt, scattering bread crumbs all over the floor. "Whoops!" She mumbled a few words and the crumbs flew into the garbage. "There we go. All better."
(((Looks like all this food is making me hungry. Time to go eat lunch! I had my finals today. Or rather, my Social Studies final. It was pretty easy. All we had to do was answer 100 multiple-choice questions, add details about how Stone Age people advanced/ Greek roots/ whatever. Then we had to say what our favorite part and least favorite part of SS was, add suggestions, write about what we're doing over the summer and write an essay (which we got to take home because it didn't count) on the year. Pretty boring. Tomorrow I'm having my math final which is just like a state math test. Whew. )))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NvJacob yawned suddenly, hugely. Mari slapped her forehead. "I'm sorry, Jacob! You've got to be tired. Not to mention sore. Go all the way back and take the bottlecape at the end of the bottle. I'll make myself a bed up front here." She tossed him a towel and walked back with him, carrying an acorn cup of steaming water. When she set it down on a chair in the back room, she spoke quietly to him. "And don't be surprised if Kanti tries something tonight. She's petty and vengeful. I just hope she doesn't do anything really stupid. Last time she almost burned down half of Paris. Neimu and his following all had to cast a damping spell." She blushed. "And, well, Kanti was trying to melt the glass of my bottle, so it was getting pretty hot in here. It was all I could do to keep myself cool enough to stay alive." She straightened and walked to the doorway. "All that to say that Kanti will try to get back at me, and you too. You especially, really. Just be warned." She pulled aside the light, silky curtain that formed the door and disappeared behind it.
((I've got to stop and go practice piano and make dinner cause my mom's out of town. Sorry it's short. :P))
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EmaParticipant11
NYOh no! A cliffhanger!!!! I have to think about this one. I don't have time to write anything tonight, but I'll do something soon. I just wanted to check in so you knew I didn't get abducted by aliens or anything. 🙂
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EmaParticipant11
NYJacob sat still for a while, thinking about what Mari said. "Oh, I'll be ready, Mari. I'll be ready," he murmured. "Kanti might actually be sorry after she deals with me." He cracked his knuckles and laughed. "Jacob," he said to himself. "You are being silly. Kanti is just a small troublemaker who doesn't have the guts to fight against the succesor of one of the Nine. Besides, you don't like to fight. Kanti won't even bother us. I'll sleep very nice and then I'll wake up in the morning with the same color hair in the same place. Don't you worry." He paused. "Ok, I need to stop trying to reassure myself. Nothing is going to happen, I'm just rambling on like I usually do." He curled up in a little ball, closed his eyes and fell asleep.
The door of the milk bottle creaked as a fairy tiptoed into the house. All was dark except for the light glow that surrounded the fairy. She looked around. No movement- Mari and Jacob were both deeply asleep. The fairy sneaked over to the wall and began ripping all the cloth down which served as insulation. She muttered a spell and clumped the cloth together in a ball which she squeezed out of the door. The fairy shivered as the room grew icy. "There you go, Mari. Here's a small gift." The fairy flew out of the door and shut it tightly, sealing it with another spell.
A few hours later, Mari woke up and shivered, knocking icicles to the ground. Icicles? It's summer. That can't be right. I must be dreaming. She pinched herself and looked around the house. It was covered with frost and must've been very far below freezing. Mari narrowed her eyes when she realized what had happened. Oh, Kanti. It's on.
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVEma, I probably won't be able to get on again today and I'll be at engineering camp the rest of the week, so don't be surprised if my posts are much less frequent. I'll try to get on some still, though.
-EH the departing
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EmaParticipant11
NYJust to bring it up to the top of the queue…..


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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVI'm back. I'll continue tomorrow – it's past ten here. 😛
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NV((Ok, so I'm a little later than "tomorrow" as I said in my last post. Sorry.))
Jacob opened his eyes, his vision still bleary. Someone was shaking him, and he was shaking himself. At least, that was the way it seemed. Then he realized that Mari was shaking him a little, and he was shivering so hard that between the two motions, he was practically rolling back and forth. A silvery light danced throught the room; then he saw that the light was reflections reflecting off reflections from ice crystals. He was awake in an instant.
He sat up and saw the full extent of the damage the cold had wrecked on the bottle. Without looking at Mari, he stood up and said in a voice grim and icy enough to match the room, "Kanti?" "Kanti," came the affirmation from his friend. He cast an opening spell on the door. Nothing. This can't be only Kanti. His mind raced, remembering the lessons his father had taught him. "Stand back. This might hurt." He raised his arm and began to chant methodically –
"Open door and open wide
Bring the outer world inside.
Open ice and open cold
Let your inner warmth unfold."
Over and over, again and again, first forwards, then last line first. Mari was confused. They sounded so… so… childish. Like a jump-rope rhyme. Then again, aren't the rhymes of lore the same way? The spells of healing? Of binding? Of light? They're all like this. In a vain hope, Mari began to whisper the lines with Jacob, adding what force she could. She could feel the power from Jacob, like a river, an elephant, an irrisitible gust of wind. It could do nothing. Hers was a stream, a mouse, the faintest summer breeze. What could it do?
Everything.
With the addition of her few drops, her pattering footsteps, her breath of wind, the door, against the will of some mighty binding-spell, began to force its way open. The cold air whoshed out, the ice began to melt. But before the ice melted, it obeyed the spell; that is, it opened. Every crystal unfolded like a blooming flower, a flower of such beauty and clarity it seemed to Mari she had never seen any other blossoms.
And the door was open.
((There was more to the freezing-spell and shutting-spell than just Kanti. They've won a major victory here. And you have to figure out how and why. 😀 But it has to be major. Really big. If you can't make it really big, can I? Por favor? Pretty please with cherries? And whipped cream? This next part has to be big. And sorry I wrote you into such a corner. I'm not sure what happened – that's just the way the story told itself. Sorry. Does that make sense? :P))
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EmaParticipant11
NY(((Before I write, can you give me a hint on the major victory? I'm not quite sure I'm getting it. :D)))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NV((Definitely. I'm just saying, first of all, we shouldn't spend so much time on something trivial. Hence it has to be made important. Second, Jacob has already demonstrated his ability to overwhelm Kanti easily – she wouldn't be so stupid as to assume that he couldn't this time. There's some other force behind the whole attack, some force that wants Jacob dead. Sorry, I know this wasn't in our plans, but I think there's something that has a vendeta against the fairies. Kanti is only its tool, and its immense power was what was fueling the closing-spell and freezing-spell. We just have to figure out what it is now. Sorry. My fault. If you want, we could just take out the part I just wrote. It's outside of what we had planned. But if we do, we've got to take out the rest of the encounter with Kanti too, or make it important some other way. In a short story we don't have room to waste on something that doesn't matter. Besides, my last addition will fuel Kanti's hatred of Jacob even more. I'm not sure my solution didn't just give us more problems, but it fixed the ones we already had, as far as I can tell. That make sense? Sorry it's so long and convoluted. And please let me know what you think – I don't want to take over the whole story, and this could be a big plot change.))
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EmaParticipant11
NY(((Ok, so before I write anything, I just want to make sure I've got the whole idea. Kanti is like "part" of the force that wants Jacob dead. The force made the freezing spell happen, right? But this time, Jacob was powerful enough to overwhelm the force, and sort of blasted it away? Now we just need to figure out what this force is exactly. Do you think we should replace the force with what we were planning to do before- using the circus? I think that would make sense, because since it is a short (long) story, it might make it confusing with two big things happening at once, right? Ok, now I think I have it, but I'm not sure if you want to plan more or just let the story go as it pleases….. *thinks about a river floating towards the sunset- my image of letting the story "go as it pleases."* Oh, and thanks for telling me what was happening, because it wasn't exactly clear before, as there wasn't any more story to read for more clues.)))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVLooks like you've got it. Yeah, maybe Kanti is trying to betray the fairies to this force…. whatever/whoever it is. Sounds good!
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EmaParticipant11
NY(((Sorry I haven't been on in a few days. I'll try to post soon, but this is a busy week. Next week, I'm going to the Fingerlakes for a week starting the 18th and coming back the 25th. I'm bringing the computer with me but I probably won't be posting as much.)))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVI won't be on much either, truth be told. My aunt and uncle and their five-year-old and three-year-old are here for a week, so not only will I be sleep-deprived (the kids are in my room :P) but I'll be busy. They're a ton of fun, though. So don't worry about being on less often. You can just wait till you get back if that'll help.
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVBack to the front page, now…. And Ema, I'm ready to start again whenever you are.
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EmaParticipant11
NY(((Okay, whew! Back on for a few days. I had to visit my grandma's house and was told right before I went to bed the day before, so sorry about that, not giving you any warning or anything. :/ I'll write something now, and I'll try to write again before Saturday. :D)))
Mari stood still, staring at Jacob, partially afraid of his powers. "What happened?" she asked, holding her head. "It feels like something…..flew out of me, like I'm weak." She leaned on the table and eventually sat down, head atop her folded hands.
Jacob though, seemed as strong as ever, stronger even. He stood straight and tall, shoulders back, staring at the opened door where the ice flew out. "I- I'm not sure," he stammered after a few moments of silence.
It wants you….wants you….you…dead….. An eerie voice echoed around the bottle, and seemed to travel out the door, leaving nothing but the sound of ice dripping from the ceiling. The sound grew fainter and fainter as it repeated what it said. Suddenly, it flew inside the bottle again and boomed so loudly it fractured the glass bottle, I want YOU dead! Black-colored winds swirled around Jacob, lifting him in the air. He floated there for a second, then the mists disappeared and dropped him down on the floor, hard.
Mari rushed over to Jacob and picked him up, dragging him over to the bottlecap bed. "That couldn't have been Kanti," she said, shaking and shivering at the same time.
"No," he agreed, clutching his leg in pain. He turned to face Mari. "But what was it, then?"
(((I'm not sure if you want to keep this part or not. I like it but I'm not sure if it works for you.
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NV((I do like it. I'll write more when I can – tomorrow morning, probably.))
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Sparks, NV((I need to think this over. Give me a while. :D))
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NY(((Ok I will. :D. Just like I needed to think it over for the big KABOOM! moment after the major victory. )))
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NY(((Just to bring it up to the top of the queue…… :D)))
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Emily H. :)Participant13
Sparks, NVAnd Kanti was there, laughing silently. "Wouldn't you like to know!" she said, exulting. "Wouldn't you just love to know!" She laughed again, a grating, malevolent laugh, and she disappeared.
Just disappeared.
No fairy could do that.
Something clicked in Jacob's mind, and he sat paralyzed for a moment, in dismay. Mari say his mouth moving silently, and his head began to shake, back and forth, with increasing vehemence as the true horror of their situation dawned on him. No, no no! And then in an agony of terror, "NO!!!!!!!!!"
Mari stayed kneeling by him for a moment, dumb with the realization that if Jacob was so frightened, chances were slim that she would survive if she stood by him.
Then again, from what she had seen, she definitely wouldn't survive if she stood agains him. There was really no choice, was there?
So she said, "Tell me." In a voice quiet, frightened, but firm, with a sort of desperation in it, "Tell me."
Jacob took a shuddering breath and whispered, "You remember in the Histories when King Aka turns traitor and almost destroys the fairy kingdom with his magic? And he was so strong that all the Nine together barely managed to hold him back and destroy him?"
"Of course I remember! It's the first thing you learn as a fairling."
His voice was getting a little stronger now. "Well, it's not true. That is, it's true, but that's not all of it. The Nine decided to keep the truth a secret, saying that it was too horrible for everyone to know." Mari, indignant, tried to say something, but Jacob plowed on. "The truth is that he made a trade with a being we know only as the Terror of the East, when we do talk about it, which isn't often. The trade was that Aka would be given immense power and magic by the Terror in return for giving the Terror bodily shape. He got his power and magic, all right – which the Terror, controlling his body, used to destroy his people. I don't know all of it, but apparently the Terror has no power unless embodied in a fairy, in which case it is the most powerful being alive. It's happened before – remember Slane? and Karteer? and….."
Mari cut in. "And every other fairy who has come dangerously close to destroying us all."
"Well, yes. And each time it's been by only the full power of the Nine that it was driven off. And now…." He shrugged helplessly. "Now they aren't all together. That is to say, their opinions are divided over this war, so they aren't all at the Hall. I've got to get a message to them…. Truth be told, Mari, I came here because I was sick of my father arguing with the HEad of the Council, who's staying at our house. And, well, I guess…." In a voice so quiet she could barely hear it, he said, "I don't think we have much of a chance, Mari, if Kanti has given the Terror form. I don't think we have much of a chance at all."
Suddenly there was a knock at the door, and Mari opened it. A young fairy stood there and said, "Pardon me, but is Jacob Aldenson here?"
Jacob pulled himself upright, standing on his uninjured leg. "Tristen! What are you doing here?"
Tristen licked his lips. "Jacob, your mother sent me to tell you that your father and the Head of the Council have disappeared. And when she tries to See them, all there is is orange."
Mari whispered under her breath, "Orange. The color of death."
"She thinks, she thinks that there aren't many things powerful enough to do away with both of them, and you'd better stay away. She thinks it may be….."
Jacob stiffened for a moment, then said, " It's the Terror. I already know that. And it's no use hiding. Tristen, assemble the Nine. No, the Seven, now. Tell them to hurry, Tristen!"
Jacob's friend looked him in the eye and said, "No, not the Seven. The Eight. You're one of them now, Jacob. You know that. I'll bring them here."
Jacob nodded dumbly, and Tristen left. Just before he shut the door softly, he said, "I'm sorry, Jacob."
((Wow, that was long. And Ema, somehow I now think it should end tragically. I want to snitch a line from Les Miserables and end the story with something like And the moment before she, too, fell, Mari whispered the last line of a song she had once heard – "Now life has killed the dream I dreamed." What do you think? For some reason most of my stories end tragically. 😛 And randomly, have you ever noticed that a lot of nursery rhymes are horribly tragic?))
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