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ClaawsParticipantAlrighty ive done it! Here is a majestic unicorn fur u!
I can do a better quality photo too, my phone was just the only thing i had to take the pic with right now. If u catch me tomorrow i can use my moms phone, which has a better camra.
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@ClaawsParticipantYeah, could you take another picture? Just so I can see it better. It looks cool, though.
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ClaawsParticipantOkay here it is with my mom's phone. Tell me if u want any changes, Mei, and I'll try my best.
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Mei-xue (May-shreh)ParticipantFairylandLooks great, Claaws! I like how the swirls make it more fantasy-looking.
By the way, since no one guessed: The unicorn symbolizes imagination and the light represents creativity. I wrote this story in protest of the school system, because I think it kills creativity. There are statistics, too: Kindergarteners scored an average of 98% on a creativity test, while fifth graders scored around 50% (I think). Or was it 40%? Anyways, the trees and other natural elements represent the fact that cramming a bunch of kids into a building and forcing them to memorize things (notice how I didn't say learn) is not the natural way our brain works, and that natural is best. The unicorn sees her visions in something clear, like a pond or a clear sky. I wrote that to symbolize how we need to clear up misconceptions, tell people that the school system isn't working.
I love symbolism, if you couldn't tell.
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Mei-xue (May-shreh)ParticipantFairylandOh! And I forgot! The eyes opening and closing represent how inspiration is born when we're young, but it's gone by the time we finish school.
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LeafpoolParticipantWill judge soon!
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Top!ParticipantMei
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Mei-xue (May-shreh)ParticipantFairylandLeafpool, when are you judging it?
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LeafpoolParticipant*Arrives, panting, from DtE* Sorry! I'll do it sometime this week. Not today, but sometime before next Sunday! Sorry for the wait.
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RESULTS!ParticipantThis is Leafpool.Okay, sorry it took me so long!
For this round:
In first place is St. and Katydid. Amazing job, both of you! I especially loved the way you wrote the story, St., and the mountains in your picture, Katydid.
Second place is Mei and Claaws. I really liked the symbolism in your story, Mei. And the unicorn in your drawing, Claaws!
Third place is Inktail. Good work, Inktail! You managed to make it even without September. That story was so beautiful.
…And eliminated is Booksy and Esquire, mostly because they didn't ever post their pieces.
The 3rd round will be the last round. One team will win. I'll make a thread for it soon.
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Mei-xue (May-shreh)ParticipantFairylandYay, we're still in! High five, Claaws!
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ClaawsParticipantYay high five!
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Sept @ Inky ParticipantCongratulations!!! I'm sorry bout that last round, but I'm definitely in for the next one!!
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