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CalifornaI will post tommrrow or later tonight. I promise.
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant11
CalifornaOkay I have a idea.Starting from when Evergreen sat with MJ [that would be called sitting with her crush part 1 and 2] the post would be called Mj mistake, like a chapter name except I woud break up into 4 parts. Hope that makes sense, becaus I'm going to start doing that right now.
MJ mistake part 3
It was lunch. MJ had gotten nothing but anger from the teacher's. They didn't believe she han't robb the bank the day before last night, despite the police's invistagat of her house. She was innoccent wasn't she? Npt truly innoccent, but to the police which should count for something.
Mj sighed. Everyone at her school seemed to hate her. She could hear them whispering about her behind her back. They thought Mj couldn't hear but she could, and it stung. She would of gladly told them about being a robber, but she had to keeep her friendships safe from the truth. She couldn't lose her friends, espically Evergreen. She couldn't lose her crush.
She hadn't seen her friends all day. Had they stayed home in bed, already making up ther mind that MJ was a bad person. One they should hate? Or did they hate her to much to talk to her? Mj shruddered, hopefully that didn't hate her too much, at least not to much to not want to talk to her. It made sense if they did hate her though. In their minds she was a crimnal, in everyone's mind, even in MJ mind, and that was the thruth.
She sighed. Hopefully, they would listen to her lies if they ever showed up.
MJ grabbed a platter. The lunhc lady glared at her. MJ heart craked a little. Usually the luch lady was fond of MJ, and would ask her about how school was going and all that stuff. She like the Lucnh lady when she wasn't glaring at her, but she doubted that would ever change. "I did not robb the bank" she said in a low voice, innoccent voice.
The luch lady shook her head. "I don't believe you"
"But you saw the news last night. My name was cleared!" said Mj, desprate for someone to believe her.
The lunch lady leaned foward, looking MJ in the eye ''Every villain has a sercert hiding place. Who's to say you don't? Whos to say you didn't hid in there? You were at a deance party according to your dad, but whos to say you weren't hiding?' she spat.
MJ faked anger in her eyes. "I was at a dance party! it was awesoeme!" she lied, begging inside for the lunhc lady to believe her.
She looked away "Your the only MJ in town."
""whos to say the robber wasn't from out of town" Sh siad, idingantly.
The lunch lady shook her head "What food do you want?"
Sad, Mj told her what she wanted. She had had a bond with thoi lady but it seems it has been destroyed. It was all her fault to!
When she was done she sat at her usuall table. Her firends weren't there. Fear double inside her, but suddenly they came. She smiled up at them. They glared at her. MJ worry doubled.
They sat down, slaming their platters on the table [MJ cringed] and glaring at MJ.
They were mad, so very, very made. They though i'v betrayed them MJ realized, fearfully.
"What do you have to say fro yourself MJ?" asked Mal, menace in her vioce.
MJ shrank a little. It would be hard to convince them she wasn't a robbeer, harder than she had pephared for.
Would she be able to lie her way after this or would she lose her friends altogether?….
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant11
CalifornaIt was lunch. MJ had gotten nothing but anger from the teacher's. They didn't believe she han't robb the bank the day before last night, despite the police's invistagat of her house. She was innoccent wasn't she? Npt truly innoccent, but to the police which should count for something.
Mj sighed. Everyone at her school seemed to hate her. She could hear them whispering about her behind her back. They thought Mj couldn't hear but she could, and it stung. She would of gladly told them about being a robber, but she had to keeep her friendships safe from the truth. She couldn't lose her friends, espically Evergreen. She couldn't lose her crush.
She hadn't seen her friends all day. Had they stayed home in bed, already making up ther mind that MJ was a bad person. One they should hate? Or did they hate her to much to talk to her? Mj shruddered, hopefully that didn't hate her too much, at least not to much to not want to talk to her. It made sense if they did hate her though. In their minds she was a crimnal, in everyone's mind, even in MJ mind, and that was the thruth.
She sighed. Hopefully, they would listen to her lies if they ever showed up.
MJ grabbed a platter. The lunhc lady glared at her. MJ heart craked a little. Usually the luch lady was fond of MJ, and would ask her about how school was going and all that stuff. She like the Lucnh lady when she wasn't glaring at her, but she doubted that would ever change. "I did not robb the bank" she said in a low voice, innoccent voice.
The luch lady shook her head. "I don't believe you"
"But you saw the news last night. My name was cleared!" said Mj, desprate for someone to believe her.
The lunch lady leaned foward, looking MJ in the eye ''Every villain has a sercert hiding place. Whos to say you dont? Whos to say you didn't hid in there? You were at a deance party according to your dad, but whos to say you weren't hiding?' she spat.
MJ faked anger in her eyes. "I was at a dance party! it was awesoeme!" she lied, begging inside for the lunhc lady to believe her.
She looked away "Your the only MJ in town."
""whos to say the robber wasn't from out of town" Sh siad, idingantly.
The lunch lady shook her head "What food do you want?"
Sad, Mj told her what she wanted. She had had a bond with thoi lady but it seems it has been destroyed. It was all her fault to!
When she was done she sat at her usuall table. Her firends weren't there. Fear double inside her, but suddenly they came. She smiled up at them. They glared at her. MJ worry doubled.
They sat down, slaming their platters on the table [MJ cringed] and glaring at MJ.
They were mad, so very, very made. They though i'v betrayed them MJ realized, fearfully.
"What do you have to say fro yourself MJ?" asked Mal, menace in her vioce.
MJ shrank a little. It would be hard to convince them she wasn't a robbeer, harder than she had pephared for.
Would she be able to lie her way after this or would she lose her friends altogether?….
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant11
CalifornaStill thinking about how the its going to go with MJ's friends. I promise i will post tommorrow. there is a slight chance I might post tonight.
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant11
CalifornaI posted something and it has not come up yet. It will i know that, but i thought i should let anyone whose reading the story know.
Thanks for your patience with our vacation schedules this week, MJ's Friend and all you readers enjoying this suspenseful story!
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant11
CalifornaWhat do you have to say for yourself?" repeated al, menace in her voice.
MJ opened her mouth, then closed it. What did she have to say for herself other than denials? It had suddenly had gotten very hard to lie to her friends. She wondered why. Mj had always been very good at lying, but she couldn't lie right now when she most neeeded to to save what she loved.
She felt guilty too. For lying about the robbery's she had done in the past, for lying about what she really did on nights they had asked her over for a sleepover. She wanted to tell them. She needed to get it off her chest. She couldn't keep lying to them. They were her friends after all, and friends tell each other evrything.
As she opened her mouth to tell the truth, she realized she had chosen Evergreen in the fight in her mind for the Evergreen's attention or to forgot about Evergreen. She smiled. It would be good not to be arguing with herself. It would be good to not hear the tiny voice inside her telling her to forget about Evergreen.
"Well?" asked Evergreen, glaring at MJ.
"I did rob the bank the day before last night, but it's more complicated than-''
Her friends paled. They looked shocked and scared. "MJ!'' they cried together, shocked and angry. MJ had betrayed them.
MJ didn't care about their pale, angry, and scared faces. She felt free. She had told them, and now she was freee of the burden she had been keping her whole entire life. She felt like she was soaring, but then she fell to reality as she realized she may have just lost he friends. She would be free, but alone and sad if she didn't explain why she had to rob banks quick. "My dad if i don't rob the bank he'll beat me with a whip. It hurts so much, and thats why I have to rob the banks"
Fear muliptyed in MJ as she looked up at their cold faces. They didn't understand. Had she lost her friends already? before the fight had began? "Listen its a huge risk for me to even tell you this. I have a tacker on my shoe. My dad is hearing everything. He going to beaten me when I get home. Me telling you this should count for something"
Her former friends or maybe they were still her friends looked at each other, unsure what to do. "How long has the robbery been going on?"
MJ stucked in a deep breath. What she was about to tell them what not help her case. "Since before I meet you guys" She admitted, looking at her hands, ashamed.
Her friends? She wasn't sure what their currrent relationship status was, but it had to be pretty low. They gasped, upset and hurt.
"It might count if you had told us before" spat Mknazie.
"I couldn't tell you before. I was too scared of my dad, but now I'm not. I realized today i couldn't keep lying to you guys" said MJ, begging them to understand. They didn't.
Mal stood up, angry. "You could have stood up to your dad!"
Tears slipped dow MJ cheeks. She was losing her friends. "He would beat me up till I was almost dead. I wasn't ready to face that, but now i am. He will beat me up till i'm almost dead when i get home!"
Evergreen's experrssion softened. She understood. MJ was relived when she realized she had turned Evergreen over to her side.
Evergreen spoke up, just as MJ was about to speak up "Picture yourself in her shoes. If you didn't return every night to your house with the requested money you would be beaten up. And it would hurt, so, so much"
Mal, Mknaize, and Ariana turned towards her surprised. "So now you're on her side?" spat Mal, angrily.
Rednerss creeped up in Evergreen's face. "I'm not taking sides. I understand what MJ's going through. I have sympathy for her" She shot Mj a smpathic look.
"We have sympathy" said Arian, angry and upset.
MJ heart broke in two. She knew she had lost them. Evryone of them except Evergreen. At least she hadn't lost Evergreen. "Please understand. If you don't pease don't tell the teachers or the police. " MJ pleaded.
Mal leaned foward. "I hate you MJ. I'm done being friends with you. I won't tell the police. I have honor, and someones going to find out sooner or later and tell the police." Mal left, and the rest of MJ former Friends except Evergreen.
Tears of sadness dripped down her cheeks, and sadness swirled inside her. She hadn't been able to save most her friendships! She ran towards the bathroom. When she got there she sat in a corner and cried.
A while later Evergreen came into the bathroom. She was a bit sad she lost her friendships with Mal, mkanize, and Arian. She had know MJ the most, though. She saw MJ, and sympathy filled her. She walked over, and sat next to her. MJ leaned on her shoulder, comforted by Evergreen's presence.
"How about we call the police" whispered Evergreen, holding MJ's hand, and giving it a reasuring squeeze. Evergreen let go, but MJ asked her not to let go, an Evergreen kept holding MJ hand.
Evergreen's hand felt reasuring to MJ. Dread filled her suddenly though when Evergreen mentioned the police. "WE can't tell the police! I can't go to jail! I can't leave you Evergreen. Your my only friend, now."
Evergreen smiled. It felt nice to hear MJ say she was her friend, but what should they do to get her dad in trouble?
MJ looked at at Evergreen. She like it when Evergreen smiled. She had a pretty smile. What should they do though? She couldn't go back to her dad, and how should they get her dad in trouble.
Evergreen glanced down at MJ. "I don't know, but will figure it out"
Mj nodded, uncertain inside though.
They sat in the bathroom, thinking about what they should about MJ's dad.
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MirrorParticipantHmm. The story's AWESOME! Absolutely fudgyreffic fantasticfully awesome! I'm thinking of joining …
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Okay, so my name'll be Silene (yes, that's how I decided to spell it, it's not a typo), and I guess I'll be a 12 year-old girl, from out west. I'm the eccentric type, and usually happy. That's about all I can think of now.
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MirrorParticipantSilene –
I skip down the hallway. It's m' first day at this school, and the people are looking at me like I'm considered insane. I am a bit eccentric, but maybe it's the western accent wi' a hint o' Yorkshire in it? It does sound rather strange, m' dialect.
My papers are flying everywhere, so I toss my books, barely catching them for good measure. I hear a lot of "Hey!" and "Watch yourself!"s from the other students. I yell, "Sorry'!" back at them and continue my tornado. They have no sense of fun.
I slam into a locker, and since my books and papers were in the air, I fall down, and catch them. People are staring at me. "Howdy! No harm done!" I wave cheerfully back at them. Such cynics. Suddenly, a girl taps my shoulder.
"Um, that's my locker," she says nervously.
"Oh, well, th' lockers compl'tely fine, and you'll be getting to it anyway, so why tap on m' shoulder?" I say, turning around.
The girl looks completely flustered. "Uh . . ." she starts.
"I know, people call me eccentric all the time!" I tell her.
Instead of being at a loss for words, she continues, "Thank you for not giving me dirty glares, because I was accused of robbing the bank."
"Ah," I say, "well, m' great-grand uncl's staged a whole lot o' stickups, back in the days wi' sherrifs 'n all. Th' deputy lopp'd of their ears fur that."
Now the girl looked plain sick.
"Are you all righ'?" I ask, "Oh, and what you gal's name? M'ns Silene."
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I know, weird accent. I tried mixing outback, western, and yorkshire together. That was what I turned out with.
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant14
CalifornaI promise. I'll post soon. Its just with school its hard to find a time to post.
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MJ'S FRIENDParticipant11
CalifornaMJ fiddled with her shirt, nervously. She wondered how the girl could possiblty ask that question? Of course she wasn't okay! She had lost all her friends, except Evergreen and everyone hated her. She had never been popular, but atleast she hadn't been known for robbery.
She had been filled with sadness all day, and from the hour she had spent in the bathroom with Evergreen they had not come up with a plan to rebel against her father. Her stupid father, the absurer, the crimnal. The real crimnal. She had the one to commite robbery, but her dad had forced her too. She wasn't the enemy. Her dad was. She wish mal and the others could see that.
She felt sick. From the sadness,and from the hatered that was coming at her from evreywhere. If she was a ordinary girl she would of went to the offfice, but she couldn't face her father. He would beat her up till she was almost dead. She dreaded the moment when the bell rang, the signal for the end of school.
And why had she have to lose that barcelt? Thats what had started all of this, but if she hadn't told the truth to her friends even though it had felt good she probably woukdn't of lost them. She hated herself for that. She was a distater. A walking distater.
MJ shook her head. "I'm MJ. I'm not ok…..you probaly can guess why"
Silene looked at her puzzled. Mj could tell she waa a newbie. She had never seen this girl before, and she had been to caught up in the excitment of the first day of school [ at least her first day of school. School had started a few days before.] to notice the dirty looks MJ got. She hadn't heard the gossipe about MJ, either. Newbies never seeemed to know that tpye of stuff. As the girl was about to speak Evergreen walked over.
MJ was grateful. Evergreen was the only bright spot today. "We need to talk. Meet me in the girl's bathroom. OK?"
MJ nodded. "I gotta go" She told Silene as she ran up to Evergreen. She looked back at the girl. "Hope you find your locker"
Evergreen looked back at the girl, smirking. "Newbie?"
MJ looked at Evergreen. She was so pretty and understanding. She was grateful that Evergreen had dicuieded to stay with her, and help her. "Yup"
"I thought so. Will she prove a good asset?"
Mj was confused. "Why? I thought we wwre going to keep this between us?"
Evergreen smiled. "I may have a plan, not a very detailed one, but still a plan.
Relief coursed through MJ. Any plan would do. She needed to do something. Anything. "What's thge plan yoy came up with."
Evergreen smiled. "You'll see" Evergreen laughed.
MJ groaned. She hated waiting, espically when it was waiting to be a told a plan to rebel against her father. Evergreen laughed.
MJ Laughed. Something about her crush's laugh was cautsigus. Evergreen laugh was beatuful.
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