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Well done, Koffee. Very well done. It isn't broken up into lines – was that on purpose? Hard to tell what's intentional and what's error, sometimes. 😛 But it is sufficiently poetic that it doesn't sound like mere prose. Good title, too. When I have a lot of criticism, I don't hesitate from giving it, but I don't have any. I can flatter shamelessly at any time, too, but this isn't flattery. Good!
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Why thank you :D:D:D:D I still think that it's missing something, though I can't pinpoint it…this will drive me crazy until i figure it out 😀
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Wow… That was a magnificent poem, Koffee.
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