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@ALLParticipantto several people, i have responded to your comments. please let me know if there's anything else i can do to help!
in the meantime, 4 spots left. 🙂
uriel of eden
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@CelineParticipanthi ~ just wanted to ask how many spots you were reserving. ^^
uriel of eden
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CelineBB bye! :)ParticipantOk, thank you! And just these 2 spots 🙂
NAME : CelineBurning Bright/Celine
PRONOUNS : she/her/they/them (random, alternate, just use one, whatever's fine 🙂 )
APPEARANCE : (note — please list one “casual” outfit and one “formal” outfit. the formal outfit must include a mask of some sort, otherwise entrance to the midnight masquerade will be denied.)
casual: green rainjacket with POCKETS, headband and hair in pigtails bc why not :), leggings, t-shirt with words
formal: flowy long turquoise dress, hair half up half down, turquoise pin in hair, a simple necklace with a ~vaquita~ on it (because I can), minimalistic yet elegant blue mask stretching over eyes
PERSONALITY : I'm too lazy to write it all out but if you need me to just tell me 🙂
LUGGAGE : booksss, my Statue of a Cat, snacks, necessities, miscellaneous
FAVORITE FLOWER : I think I had one but now I can't remember 🙂 let's go with.. uh.. jasmine! Or jacaranda? 🙂
EDEN OR OLYMPUS : I srsly don't know… Olympus? Eden? Ok let's go with the latter
AND LASTLY —
WHICH RING WILL YOU CHOOSE? 9? 🙂
NAME : Ember/Emb
PRONOUNS : they/them
APPEARANCE : (note — please list one “casual” outfit and one “formal” outfit. the formal outfit must include a mask of some sort, otherwise entrance to the midnight masquerade will be denied.)
casual: paint-splattered overalls, combat boots, camo backpack (also with pockets!), messy ponytail
PERSONALITY : understanding, always willing to speak up, sarcastic, loves to hike and be in nature, is a bit paranoid and is always prepared, can be lazy (with chores), but always very responsible when hiking. Calm under pressure and somehow can always say the wittiest things at the exact right moment (how?!?), a steadfast friend, not afraid to be (brutally) honest, always willing to help, never means to be mean, mature even though they're younger
LUGGAGE : camo backpack w/ random stuff
FAVORITE FLOWER : grass!
EDEN OR OLYMPUS : Eden
AND LASTLY —
WHICH RING WILL YOU CHOOSE? 7
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uriel@CBBParticipantplease do fill out the personality! it's quite important for me to write out the story (:
let me know whenever the forms are finished <3
uriel of eden
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantruSilver?
later later later :/For my personality: enthusiastic, super shy (at first) but not at all afraid to be fully and totally myself, happy, overthinks everything to the point where I'm overthinking overthinking (can you overthink overthinking? Well, you obvi can, as I'm doing it right now. But can you call that overthinking when it- ahh gotta finish this up fast you see how I am when I get started 🙂 ), super loyal to the point of self-detriment yay!, uh yeah bye! I'll get Emb's formal outfit up later! 🙂
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Celi & Ember :DParticipantOk so for Emb, they'll be wearing a long, sleeveless sparkling dark-blue-black dress with big pockets yay!, a white pearl necklace, tennis shoes, and their hair will be up in a bun with a silver pin stuck in the middle. Their mask will be a silver eye-mask that's sorta, like, sharp where the nose is if that makes sense? I'll try to draw pictures later 🙂 thanks!
btw, are you Silver?
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@celineParticipantsounds good – nope, not silver. 🙂
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CelineBurning & EmbParticipantAnd yup, forms are finished, thanks!
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantAs Needed
The FireMist SeaI'll finish the forms later
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@uriel, it's Hawk*ParticipantWhen will this be starting, exactly?
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@hawkstarParticipantthis monday. 🙂
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Gloomy's AEsParticipantNAME : ^&Lore&^
PRONOUNS : He/Him
APPEARANCE : (note — please list one “casual” outfit and one “formal” outfit. the formal outfit must include a mask of some sort, otherwise entrance to the midnight masquerade will be denied.) ^&Tallll,Puuurttty.&^ Okay okay, nevermind. I'm doing this. He's tall, kinda buff, pale skin, long dark green hair in a low ponytail, slim gold eyes, eyeliner, sharp canines, broad shoulders, wolf ears and tail the same color as his hair. His casual out fit includes a flowy, white shirt, black skinny jeans, tall red and black boots, earings, and jewelry. His formal outfit is a black and gold Two-piece suit, with long coat tails and gold jewels hanging of his wide sleeves, a ruffled under shirt, lace tights, leather shorts, tall high-heeled boots. His masquerade mask looks like a japanese fox mask, except the markings on the mask are black and not red. The are lace linings on the inside of the ears along with gold tassles on the ears.
PERSONALITY : Cocky, elegant, loving to his child, fairly samrt.
LUGGAGE : Clothing, sewing machine, jewlery, manga.
FAVORITE FLOWER : Red spider lily.
EDEN OR OLYMPUS : Olympus.
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WHICH RING WILL YOU CHOOSE? ^& Any ring fancy enough for me <3 &^
NAME : !?# RIN! #?!
PRONOUNS : !?#SHE/HER!!#?!
APPEARANCE : (note — please list one “casual” outfit and one “formal” outfit. the formal outfit must include a mask of some sort, otherwise entrance to the midnight masquerade will be denied.) Okay. Rin ran away 'cause Lore started Hazbin Hotel up. She's very short, 3'11. She has slightly tan skin, big brown eyes, messy brown hair in a low, over the shoulder ponytail, little horns in her hair. He casual outfit is going to be a dark red shirt, light blue denim shorts and convers. Her formal outfit will be a black flowy dress with a gold hem and a ruffled underskirt and her mask will be a cat mask with black base and gold tabby strips.
PERSONALITY : Chaotic, wild, usually rude but still loving. She's six by the way.
LUGGAGE : Toys, the Nintendo Switch, a stuffie of Mr bob.
FAVORITE FLOWER : Roses.
EDEN OR OLYMPUS : Eden.
AND LASTLY —
WHICH RING WILL YOU CHOOSE?
Which ever one fits her chubby fingers.
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@gloomy's aes Participantplease choose a ring 1-9. 🙂
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GloomyBearParticipantI am so stupid, I thought you meant a ring for a finger. Sorry.
6 for Rin
1 for Lore
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DAY 1 Participanturiel of eden3…
rin runs around her room wildly, jumping on her bed. a vacation — a novelty. how new. how exciting. an adventure. surely nothing bad would happen?
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celine taps a pen on the table. was this “paradise“ a bad idea? would this lead to her demise? well, there was only really one way to find out.
1…
and the doors open.
==== DAY ONE : PART ONE ====
PARADISE was what it was called. a vacation that promised joy, relaxation, and utter happiness. a five-star-yelp-review vacation.
the 15 chosen souls awaited entrance to this PARADISE on wide, marble steps. they had gotten here through various ways. some had taken a boat through a small river they had never known existed. some had simply exploded into some (bio-degradable) confetti and found themselves here. still others had sat down at dinner (with the kraft mac and cheese, of course) only to find themselves sitting down on the marble steps of the entrance to PARADISE.
nonetheless, they were here, and that was what mattered.
slowly but surely, the grand doors swung open, creaking as they did so, revealing a hall. a rather empty hall, with baroque mahony floors and glossy arches with unlit torches lining the walls. in the middle was a dining table, similarly dark and unlit. plates were set, and there seemed to be namecards placed on top of every plate. at the head of the table sat a figure.
an ethereal figure. she was the sole source of light in the room, her silken hair and soul-piercing eyes glowing a soft, gentle, white. she wore a white silk dress that fell to the floor.
“welcome to the beginning of paradise. find your name and take a seat.”
“then, we shall have the final dinner.”
==== DAY ONE : PART TWO ====
the cbers sat down at their respective places. the figure remained silent. scuttles elbowed the person sitting next to them (anastasia) and whispered underneath their breath.
“who’s the figure?”
“i’m… not sure, actually, but i’m sure they’ll introduce themselves in due time,” anastasia whispered back.
two loud claps came from the head of the table, and torches and candles everywhere flicked on. the (rather small) crowd was full of oohs and aahs — at least, until the figure stood up and clinked her fork on the glass exactly three times.
“as i said, welcome to the beginning of paradise!” the figure exclaimed with a cheeky smile. “my name is uriel, the archangel of eden! i hope you enjoy — and i’m sure olympus will be paying us a visit sometime in the near foreseeable future. remember that popcorn is strictly banned and will be confiscated if found. masks will be provided to those who have not brought them for the masquerade. oh- and one last thing.”
the torches went out again.
“eden is not responsible for any deaths.”
two loud claps came again, and the torches flickered on.
“enjoy your meal! you’ll be transported to our living quarters soon.”
==== END DAY ====
0 : 15
MISSING: N/A
uriel, archangel of eden.
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Scuttles Participant*happy dance* there's a new part! Yay! The mystery is already strong!
Oh, and I believe I forgot to include a description of my mask in my appearance. Here it is:
My moth shaped mask covers the top half of my face, leaving my mouth and nose free. The moth seems somewhat mechanical, the body made of black and dark copper metal and the gray and white patterned wings glinting with little thread of copper. There are no discernable eye holes, although I can see just fine. Every few minutes the moth flutters its wings.
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AnastasiaParticipantoooo i like it very spooky vibes going on
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HawkstarParticipantoooh this so cool so far!! It's so mysterious! I love it :DDD
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DittoParticipantAh, I'm excited! This looks very cool ;p
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Moon Wolf Participantlunars
A Celestial SkyOoo amazing already! Super mysterious….
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urielParticipantedenfor reference : installments will be every 2 days. <3
uriel, archangel of eden
Uriel, please remember to keep this story CB appropriate, not too dark. Thank you.
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@adminsParticipantof course – it's just an element of mystery to it lol. it's a classic fantasy genre story – pinky promise you it'll be cb appropriate. 🙂
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topParticipantwill post segment later today
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urielParticipanteden==== DAY TWO : PART ONE ====
** note : i am sorry for any mischaracterization — if you need to correct me on personality, please let me know, and i will be more than happy to correct that in future installments! without any further ado, please enjoy 🙂 **
on day 1, the cbers had slept in seperate rooms all along the hall of the dining room (due to a “technical error” in transportation). still, they couldn’t shake off the feeling that something was slightly amiss. of course, they thought, it would all be fixed once they officially started the trip.
“rise and shine, all of you!”
endless_parodies was awoken early the next day by a cheery, chirpy voice — quite different from uriel’s soothing, almost melodical voice. she stretched and yawned, before taking a moment to contemplate life.
“hurry upp!” the voice urged. “we’ve got to eat breakfast, and then we have to hit the road!”
parody slid out of bed and began to do the things you would normally do before breakfast with strangers. getting changed. making sure they didn’t look like they had been run over in the night (which, assuredly, they did not.)
within a few minutes, parody was outside, and fae took a seat where fae had sat just last night — a polished mahogany chair somewhere around the bottom left of the ludicrously long table.
the figure who seemed to possess the bright, cheery voice was definitely not uriel, although they seemed to look similar. their eyes were a summery golden while uriel’s were piercing yellow-white. they possessed the same wings, but this figure’s… they seemed to be softer, more angelic. hmm. parody couldn’t quite put faer finger on it. they’d figure it out in due time.
“hey! you’re endless_parodies, right? is it fine if i call you parody?”
“uh, yeah, that’s fine! um, yeah, i’m parody, she/they/faer pronouns, er, nice to meet you?”
parody stuck out a hand awkwardly, and the figure shook it energetically.
“nice to meet you too, parody! i’m azrael, but you can call me azzy or azuki, either’s fine! they/them pronouns!”
“ah! okay, sounds good – um, if you don’t mind me asking, where’s uriel?”
“tch, uriel. she’s always running around. i technically take care of this hall! it’s called the last hall. isn’t that cool??”
azzy flashed parody a bright smile, which parody awkwardly returned.
“um, yeah! tha—”
a door slammed (very conveniently) right behind azrael, and hawthorn walked out — which meant azzy quickly rushed to greet hawthorn. parody let out a sigh of relief. she really didn’t know how to continue the conversation from there on.
the rest of the breakfast involved a lot of azrael talking. but it was a good breakfast nonetheless.
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the 15 of them walked out around two hours after breakfast — at azrael’s instruction. it seemed that azrael was to stay and tend to the hall — something none of them really expected. nonetheless, they were happy to be going on vacation — perhaps to, finally, PARADISE.
in front of the marble steps was a swirling vortex of flames. it seemed to grow larger and larger, until it finally engulfed them.
“welcome to paradise.”
==== END PART ====
hope you enjoyed !
uriel, archangel of eden
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HawkstarParticipantForever
Penny LaneOoh very nice! I did enjoy 🙂 I love azrael 🙂
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urielParticipantedenme too !! azzy is one of my favorites, shame i couldn't include her more – or maybe she'll make another appearance, *shrugs* dunno
glad you enjoyed!! 🙂
uriel, archangel of eden
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endless_parodiesParticipantOodles!
they/faer/sheoh my goodness, i love it so much! you embody me very well, thank you for that.
loving the spooky vibes.
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Moon Wolf Participantlunars
A Celestial Sky🙂 amazing! Azrael's a cool character!
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Scuttles ParticipantI love azzy 🙂 would love to see their character resurface later in the solo write. Excellent part as usual!
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SempreverdeParticipant@uriel, can I still guess who you are even if I’m not in the ski lodge?
Evergreen says +akbgx+
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urielParticipantof course!
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urielParticipant==== DAY TWO : PART TWO ====
when they opened their eyes, the vortex was gone, and a smiling seraph was in front of them. this one seemed much calmer than azrael (darkvine sighed with relief) but seemed to be much more distant (sev pouted, a “no new friends” pout.)
“good morning, my esteemed guests. welcome to your temporary estate — it will travel with you, and me, and uriel, and whichever archangel is in charge of this tour group.”
the seraph looked around, their golden yellow eyes gazing upon each and every single one of them, as if to find the truth in each one.
“my name is raphael, and i will be your guide for today. uriel is … ah, feeling a little under the weather today. she will join us tomorrow.”
“hi raphael!” sev exclaimed, holding out a hand. “it’s nice to meet you! i’m sansevieria, or sev for short!!”
raphael shook sev’s hand calmly. he offered a slightly cold smile to sev. “nice to meet you too, sev. if raphael is a mouthful — which i’m certain it might be — you can call me raph, or just aph.”
“sounds good to me!” sev beamed. “boa, say hi to raph!”
boa brushed a lock of gold hair behind their ear. “hi.”
raphael nodded. “hello.”
a slightly awkward silence ensued.
“anyways. you will be split into three groups, each with someone from the lowest order leading you.”
“allow me to explain. uriel calls herself an archangel, but really, she is a seraph. the highest order of heaven is consisted of seraphim, like me and uriel, cherubim, and the ophanim. i don’t believe we will encounter ophanim on this tour – but perhaps we will cross a cherubim.”
“the middle orders… you can ask me if you have any questions.”
“the lower orders consist of principalities, archangels, and angels. principalities guide countries. archangels are the higher order of angels.”
raphael clapped his hands, and all of a sudden, they were in a marble triangular room, with a hallway at each corner. above the hallways hung glimmering signs.
“moon wolf. twilight. anastasia. titanoboa. sev. rainbow riot.”
“you will be under the care of kiara rae and ezra blackwell. you will each have your own rooms. you six will constitute the belonging group.”
a blue-haired girl and a black-haired boy nodded at them. above them, the sign read belonging.
“hawkstar. wildsong. endless_parodies. lore. rin.”
“you will be under the care of avian west and avar west. you will each have your own rooms. you five will constitute the purpose group.”
a brunette with expansive bird wings and a green-eyed man nodded at them politely from a hallway. above it, the sign had been changed to read purpose.
“scuttles. fluffles. celineburningbright. ember. darkvine.”
“you will be under the care of layla lilico and shiho yukine. you will each have your own rooms. you five will constitute the storytelling group.”
“unfortunately, layla and shiho could not make it today, due to a slight technical mishap. they will join you tomorrow. in the meantime, you are free to join either of the two groups.”
“we will begin tomorrow.”
==== END PART ====
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CelineBurning BrightParticipantreading SoC quotesAmazing parts!! Yess, Azzy is amazing!! And… do we choose which group to join or will you choose for us?
oh, also, hello!
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uriel@cbbParticipanthello!!
azzy is definitely going to make a comeback… shhh
the groups will be randomly generated, but if you have a preference, you can let me know! 🙂
uriel
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HawkstarParticipantON
Seoul or NewYork or ParisOoh how interesting! I like the groups 🙂
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Scuttles ParticipantThe mystery increases! What happened to Layla and Shiho? I'm so curious
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AnastasiaParticipanteons
she/herwow this is reallllyyyy good so far! :)))
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