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ChocoParticipant12
hereEverybuggy who reads all the top posts just ignore them. It just has to do with a problem with my computer.
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MeadowParticipant13
Deep In The FolBright green fur
And deep blue eyes
Helps me forget
My daily surprise
I fall asleep and
Dream my dreams
Holding my bunny
Fingering seams
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Ermm… I kind of failed at that. xD The rhymes were rather horrible, but I couldn't think of anything else in the two minutes I was writing the poem.
Oh and we both had little rabbitses stuffed animals! 🙂
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AnalesiaParticipant12
*wishes she couChallenge: Write a nursery rhyme about a stuffed animal you have/had.
Well, I never really had a stuffed animal. I will write about my beloved blanket.
Sleep will not come to me,
So I go and get thee,
Thy cuddlyness is comforting,
So the sleep bell I do ring.
That makes absolutely no sense. Oh, whatever, I'll post it anyway.
^ANALESIA THE BOOKWORM^
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Sasha B.Participant12
BerkeleyThe lovely toy mouse was yellow and small.
A little girl loved it after all.
Then each year, it was played with a bit less.
(By now it was dirty, in fact quite a mess.)
And the dirty old mouse now sits in a room,
Igrored, or else lost, by it didn't know whom.
Still the girl hugged it sometimes, or dragged it around,
When she went on a trip. It sat there with no sound.
The End
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OlivecubeParticipantWow, very nice poem! Some of the rhymes seem forced but there's something in it that is sort of hard to describe- sort of a strong voice. I really like it. If I would you I would give it an edit over, it seems worth spending a good bit of energy on.
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