Chatterbox: Chirp at Cricket

AE Vote~

I can read your mind, by the way. You're thinking,

"Another one? Seriously, Abi?"

Yup.

Another one.

And I'm serious. 

I'm not going to do the choose-a-letter thing, because that doesn't leave that much flexibility. But I'd like to know: What do you all think about my AEs? Are any/all of them too cliche? Anything I can do to improve upon their personalities? Advice?

Oh, and I will take you seriously whatever your opinion is. I will not be offended if you think one or more of them needs adjusting. Use tact, though.

In case you are not familiar with them, my three AEs are as follows. (Very brief bios. For more detail, go to Chilly's AE/CAPTCHA RP in Chirp at Cricket.)

Critic A: Smart, sarcastic, and cynical. Loves grammar, dictionaries, and obnoxiously correcting people. Long dark hair, slim petite frame, black square glasses.

Mandy: Bouncy, friendly, and naive. Has an, ahem, fondness for muffins. Somewhat of a crybaby, trusting. Short caramel colored bob, one blue, one brown eye, freckles.

Hobbes: Dark, moody, bluntly logical. Soft spot for popcorn. Constantly teases Mandy and Critic, but if someone else messes with them, he'll jump in and play the protector. Half-tiger. Shaggy black hair, dark eyes, tall and lanky.

Thank you!

~ Abi