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Will you?&nb

Will you?

 


Footsteps echoed in the hall as a dark figure made their way down it, sliding carefully along the wall. A heavy cloak hung over their eyes, shielding their identity from the outside world. The hems of their black garment rippled as they vanished around a bend, clutching it close to their body. As they skidded into a hallway, suddenly a bright flash of light reflected in their eyes, a beam from a flashlight.

Angry yells coupled with the tromping approach of guards, and hurriedly the cloaked figure whirled around and took off, their hood pulling off and showing a length of thick, silver hair.

“Ey, girl!” an irate man shouted, his blue uniform tight against his skin as he gave chase to the rapidly fleeing character. However, she gave no response—not that he had expected one. “After her!” he roared to his lieutenants, and with a slight stumble four men raced past him, yellowish light cast over the dark corners and revealing beady black eyes. With a squeal the rodents loitering in the darkness skittered away the girl and men just behind her darted past.

Her heart thundering in her chest, she wheeled around a corner and spotted her one solace—what she had been looking for this whole time. Fumbling with a remote in her pocket, she dragged it out with numb fingers and hurled it at the wall, feeling immensely relieved when she saw a panel bend back at the contact. Within seconds she vanished through the wall, melting through solid brick and stone.

Panting, the men rounded the corner and stopped short as they were met with a blank expanse of concrete, impossible to get through. Dumbfounded, the men walked up to it and shoved the shoulders against the wall, but it didn’t yield.

“Come on, men,” the chief grumbled, waving a hand and leading his officers away. “She musta gone down a different path. Ain’t no one who can get through a solid wall.” Hesitantly the officers stepped away from the concrete and followed their boss, casting one or two perplexed glances back. They were sure she had gone through there—but how, they had no idea…


Inside the wall, the girl released a massive breath of relief as she heard the men’s footsteps recede. Shuddering, she quickly loosed the cloak off her shoulders, sighing at the close scrape. She hadn’t been sent here to get captured, so she’d better do what she was meant to and get it over with. Tracing a finger along the outside of the circular room, she slowly felt her way across it until she reached a groove in the wall, one carved by expert hands. Removing a glassy blue bottle from a bag at her waist, she dipped a finger in the choking potion began to fill in the lines with it.

Just as she was finishing up, a slow grating sound from behind her made her whirl around in fear, spotting two icy-blue pinpricks of light glowing in the darkness. A guttural purr followed, and quickly a snake-like neck emerged from the darkness, followed by a reptilian body and two leathery wings.

“A dragon?” the girl whispered, pressed against the wall as the runes dripped potion behind her. Snorting, the dragon crept from the darkness, flaring its ruff and blinking its eyes like a hatchling. It was just then the dragon seemed to notice she was there, and poked a curious nose to her shedded cape.

This wasn’t supposed to happen…

Will she:

A. Try to attack the dragon

B. Try to run back out the into the hallway

C. Try to tame the dragon

D. Do nothing

Two days will be allotted (from your world’s March 7 to March 9) for voting upon her choice. The day of March 10… the story will continue, by the most popular choice voted. Do not forget this thread, for it wouldn't forget you. As long as you keep it on top, her saga will be told.

Her story is in your hands.

Will you?

Won’t you?

 

 

(Feel free to guess my identity, though there’s no telling if I’ll reveal it.)

 

 

submitted by All, age Everything, Nowhere
(March 7, 2017 - 3:46 pm)
submitted by Top
(April 8, 2017 - 8:13 am)

"Do not forget this thread, for it wouldn't forget you. As long as you keep it on top, her saga will be told" I feel betrayed, we, the readers, have been doing our best to keep this story on the top. What happened to her story? Of course, we understand if something happened that would keep you from continuing the story for a while, or if you just forgot about it, but it's been too long, and we are dying to know what happens next. Please come back and let your readers know if or when the story will truly continue.

Will you?

Won't you? 

submitted by Top@All
(April 15, 2017 - 12:12 pm)
submitted by TOPPPPP
(April 16, 2017 - 8:21 am)
submitted by TOP
(April 16, 2017 - 4:31 pm)

*dusts off a heavyy manual entitled Extreme Topping: A Comprehensive Guide*

*assembles support group of dedicated Topping Therapists* 

*dons armor of the Topping Warrior and screams, CHAAAAAARGEEEE!* 

 

submitted by Brown Bear
(April 16, 2017 - 10:18 pm)

CHAAAAAARGEEEE!

submitted by Embers in the Ashes
(April 17, 2017 - 6:04 am)

CHAAAAAARGEEEE!

submitted by Fireburst
(April 17, 2017 - 7:46 pm)

*Puts on heavy topping battle armor*

*Pounds chest like one of those monkey things on video games*

CHAAAAAAAAAAAAARGE FOR THE TOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!!!!!!! 

submitted by GreenMango
(April 18, 2017 - 6:44 am)
submitted by TIPPY TOPPY TIP TOP!
(April 18, 2017 - 7:06 am)
submitted by 100!
(April 18, 2017 - 7:06 am)

Too much. 

Too much, this was- to embark on a journay with no clear idea of the end, to have burden after burden be laid upon you with no release. To have your heart pound with stress each time you saw it again even though you had nothing to fear, to have faithfuls dogging your footsteps, unknowing of what might be in your mind... or what might not be. To know that they depended upon you, when all this was made you feel sick with pressure. Made you shy away from the thread of words, for fear of having to shove through your sickness just to deliver to others. 

Too much it was, Caroline's tale.

Too much to find her future when you were walking in the dark, too much to guide her along when you yourself needed guidance. Of course, I was hating the notion of having to stop the story in the throat, right here and now, but- too much. This, though not everything, all too much.  

Perhaps one day she could return, if it ever felt more comfortable, more soothing on the heart to come here. But for now-

Oh, it was all just too much.  

I hope you all can forgive me.  

submitted by All, age lost, Watching, wandering
(April 18, 2017 - 7:51 am)

That's ok, I'm just glad you told us, I wouldn't like to be kept waiting for nothing. I'm also really sorry for pressuring you to continue, with no clue that you might not want to, I know what that feels like. I have an idea of who you might be now, though I won't say in case I'm wrong. I find it ironic that I finally got an idea of who you might be just as the story ends. :)

Also, a suggestion: if it doesn't make you feel too weird, maybe you could let another reader take over the story. That way you can still be part of the story, except it's less pressure on you to continue, and you can participate in choosing Caroline's path. Sorry if this offends you or anything, it was just an idea I just had.

submitted by GreenMango@All
(April 18, 2017 - 4:07 pm)

No, that's a very good idea! What if, instead of this story depending on one person alone, it was handed down to many? Of course, this is only if other people want to continue the story (to which I would be very honored) then every so once in awhile, the storyteller could hand the reigns to someone else and let them take over writing for a short period. This way no one feels too much pressure, and fresh ideas and readily available. Does that sound good to everyone?

submitted by All @ GreenMango
(April 18, 2017 - 6:22 pm)

That sounds wonderful! In fact, as I was reading your previous post, I was going to suggest that I could carry it on! If this tops, we might get more opinions.

submitted by Rae
(April 19, 2017 - 1:31 pm)

Sorry to pressure you, All (Caroline)! I know that feeling.  

submitted by Brown Bear
(April 27, 2017 - 7:50 pm)