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I started this a while back and then kind of gave up on it...
So- with this whole COVID-19 thing I have a little bit more time on my hands, and I want to write some more... so I'm going to offer some written picturings. :)
Just put your name down, and I'll write how I picture you.
Be forewarned though... my written picturings are not what you would think. ;) (As some of you may remember.) (Dusk if you are still here, then yours is the first one I'm doing, because you were next on my list of names last time, and I'm sorry that I completely dropped everything and didn't do yours.)
Anyways. If you want one, then just put your name down and I'll get one to you as soon as I can. :)
submitted by Joan B. of Arc, age 17 1/2, Camelot
(April 7, 2020 - 11:37 am)
(April 7, 2020 - 11:37 am)
Oh my gosh, I love it so much! It was a really interesting story, I could read a whole book written like this. One thing I'm wondering is, are Indilwen and Erick fraternal twins?
(April 14, 2020 - 8:39 am)
I guess that's up to you to decide.
Having them be fraternal twins could put the story in so many different directions, as they are both from different worlds-her from a fantasy one, and him from the real one. She is an elf, him a human. Maybe that's what happened to Indilwen's father... he's a human and he never came back from an exploration! *gasp* DUN DUN DUN!
*laugh* So yeah, I guess that's up to you to decide whether or not they discover they are twins, or not. ;)
Did the story itself make sense? I'm trying to get my stories to flow in a nice way, and I'd love some feedback. Writing short stories always makes me happy to write, as I think I'm better at writing short stories than novels. XD
(April 14, 2020 - 1:27 pm)
Yeah the story made sense! At the end it felt more suspenseful than wrapped-up though, like I wanted to hear the next part of the story, but that's the only critique I have. Otherwise, it was a really good story!
(April 14, 2020 - 7:45 pm)
Ok, thanks! :)
(April 14, 2020 - 10:46 pm)
Hey, you should join the short story contest.
(April 17, 2020 - 9:40 am)
A.W., your picturing is coming up next! I have a super good idea for yours, so I'm excited about it! :)
(April 13, 2020 - 5:23 pm)
TOP TOP TOP TOP TOP!!! Thank you!
(April 13, 2020 - 5:23 pm)
TOP! :)
(April 13, 2020 - 7:01 pm)
Um.. If you wouldn't mind, I would like one please, Take your time on it. I know you have a lot.
(April 13, 2020 - 8:09 pm)
Strawberri
(April 14, 2020 - 2:36 pm)