Hallo everyone!!!

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Hallo everyone!!!

Hallo everyone!!!

I'm going to try to do this thing on here where it's sort of like an RP, except I'm the only one doing it. That sounds kind of selfish, so I'm going to say that this is sort of like a test. I write a story; you be my readers. feel free to criticize of comment at me you can give me ideas on how you think this thing should go. I have no ideas, for my story, now, so maybeyou guys could help me with that. I might take yours. Thanks!!Wink

 

Chergloofigan says ihhm.

submitted by Amelia C., age 12, my own little world
(May 25, 2012 - 10:50 am)

back to the Inkwell

I'm going to start with something now. I got the idea last night. Tell me if you think it's good.

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So, instead of going on a gaudy vacation like many of my friends, my parents uprooted my family--including Carrie Kennedy Fletcher and Jacob Fletcher, my parents, Piper Anne Fletcher, age 12, that's me, Lottie Francis Fletcher, age 7, and the Terrible Twins, Joshua David Fletcher and Peter Jacob Fletcher, age 2--piled into our seven-seater, and hee-hawed all the way down to Virginia.

We used to live in suburb New York, and let me tell you this is not suburban New York.  The old place used to be owned by my late great aunt. When she died, it came to my mother. So here we are, at the cottage. The weathered white picket fence looked exactly the way it did when I was five, but the brown and white cottage-style house itself and overgrown garden needed a lot of work. The yard needed mowing, but knowing my mom, as soon as we got moved in, everything, including the apple orchard would soon be in perfect order.

submitted by Amelia C., age 12, my own little world
(May 26, 2012 - 9:15 am)

It's nice. I think you should finish it.

submitted by Olivecube
(August 18, 2012 - 6:46 am)