I need help

Chatterbox: Inkwell

I need help

I need help with making a prophecy of CaNaNoWriMo! Here's what I have so far:

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“You shall follow the sun, to the place where it sleeps. With one
companion, three shall weep. The truth will come forth, but at disasters mark,
the final foe, will give you your worth."

 

Any tips, ideas, suggestions? Should I make it shorter, longer, rhymes to weird, too easy to understand? HELP!!!

 

submitted by ZB ☮
(June 3, 2012 - 12:29 am)

The "forth" and "worth" don't sound too good as rhymes.

submitted by Melody, age 13, Just being awesome
(June 3, 2012 - 7:38 pm)

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submitted by top
(June 10, 2012 - 5:39 pm)