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I've got this

I've got this idea for a story, but it's not complete. Here it is:

Far, far away, there is a land with everything a couch potato could dream of. Endless TV watching, TV dinners, popcorn, comfy recliners & more. But it comes with a price....

That's all I thought of so far. The thing is, I can't think of what the price should be! I was thinking maybe people's souls (like to the devil),  is that a bit too used up?

Anyway, I want to know if anyone has any ideas.

Thanks!

submitted by Magda S., age 13, Philadelphia,PA
(February 15, 2013 - 3:25 pm)

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Hmm. Maybe the price should be immortality. It sounds good at first, but then the main character realizes its not all what he thought it would be, living forever with no purpose. Just a thought... Cappie says zdtu.  You too, Cappie.

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule, age ageless, Writing a Book
(February 15, 2013 - 6:31 pm)

Good Idea! Thank you.

submitted by Magda S , age 12, The Universe
(February 23, 2013 - 4:54 pm)

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submitted by top
(February 18, 2013 - 6:19 pm)

The price should be no cookies on Sundays!!!

submitted by Theo W., age 12, Comic place
(February 19, 2013 - 6:43 pm)