Teresa/L Team Writing

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Teresa/L Team Writing

Teresa/L Team Writing Thing!

Okay, this is where we are going to talk about the thing. Throw out ideas and I will write them in a notebook to keep track.

So Far:

-Trolls v. Yoopers

-DW-esque space-time suspension

-Characters are...?

-A questionable alliance somewhere

14638 

(Yava is grossed out: eewz.) 

--L 

submitted by L
(April 13, 2013 - 9:12 am)

I will also keep a notebook to keep track of things.

So, for our characters we will have to have some Yoopers and some Trolls. For each type we should have some common characteristics like height, number of hands, eyes or other features, powers (if any), or other characteristics like that.

Some characteristic ideas for Yoopers:

on the taller side, dark deepset eyes, able to communicate with forest plants and creatures, small eyes, some type of accent, straighter hair, beards for men (no mustaches)...

Some characterisitic ideas for Trolls:

on the shorter side, persuasive, almond shaped eyes, curlier hair...

These are just suggestions for characteristics and each character doesn't have to completely follow the characteristics.

Would you like to add more characteristics to the list? Then, we can start making characters. 

Another question: What style of writing are we doing ( first person, third person, diary type, or just writing it)? 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 14, 2013 - 5:11 pm)

I was thinking typical third-person-present-tense, because that's the kind of writing that I use most often, but if you don't sit well with present I can do past.

I swear I am going to draw these guys! Geh! Also, we should draw up some profiles. Here's one for a person who's been bouncing around my head a bit (it's all up for debate at the moment):

Name: Lionel Fordsworth

Kin: Troll

Age: Eh?

Appearance: Tall, has curlyish bleached-blond hair and red eyes. As in, freaking red eyes.

Personality: Not too clear on that yet. Basically... insubordinate, a bit of a jerk, but a nice guy if he's on your side (which is difficult, as he changes often).

submitted by L
(April 14, 2013 - 8:12 pm)

Third person is fine. I'm pretty flexible.

I'm still thinking about some character profiles, so I'll get back to you on that. 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 15, 2013 - 1:40 pm)

Umm... what should we do about age? I noticed that you were wondering about the age too. Should we do a variety of ages or stick to teens, adults, etc. 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 15, 2013 - 1:46 pm)

Lionel Fordsmith... I like the name. Very Michigan like.

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 15, 2013 - 1:49 pm)

That was the intent :D

I like to work with a variety of ages. Adults react to certain situations differently then teenagers do than children do then old people do. I was thinking Lionel could be more on the maturer side of teenager-hood or something. Human years = 20, give or take. 

submitted by L
(April 15, 2013 - 6:14 pm)

Top, so L doesn't have to search for you!

submitted by Top
(April 14, 2013 - 5:12 pm)

Here's another character...

Name: Gemma Lakeshire

Kin: Yooper

Age: 12

Ability: can converse with wild life

Appearance: tan skin from countless days in the sun, deep inquisitive brown eyes, brown hair that is usually in two plaits, a buckskin dress, a woolen cloak for winter (very harsh winters), short

Personality: shy around strangers, friendly, gentle, passionate, once you get to know her she will play harmless jokes on people and she will be more animated 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 16, 2013 - 1:51 pm)

New characters. 

Name: Wesley Minton

Age: 17

Kin: Yooper

Appearance: short, dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, glasses, wears old clothes that are too short

Personality: people don't like him that much, timid, extremely smart, weak, people don't think he's important

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Name: Helen Duburke

Age: 100

Kin: Troll

Appearance: gray hair that is swept into a bun, ????????????????????????????

Personality: Helpful, holds the treasures of the past, knows what will work and what won't, understands the land, thinks she is always right 

 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 23, 2013 - 1:52 pm)

Top!

Cappie says vipr. I don't know about a viper in our story... 

submitted by Top
(April 26, 2013 - 1:29 pm)

Do we want more characters right now? Do you have any ideas about how/why the alliance was questionable?

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 28, 2013 - 12:52 pm)

Gah! I am sorry for being missing. 

Let's see...

I have nothing to add. My brain is depleted from NaNo, among other things. But I won, which makes me happy. 

submitted by L
(April 28, 2013 - 1:47 pm)

That is OK, I've been busy too.

Congratulations on reaching your goal. 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(April 29, 2013 - 6:06 pm)

Were you going to draw any of the characters? 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(May 3, 2013 - 1:47 pm)

Were you going to draw any of the characters?   

Cappie says annf. I don't know a girl called Ann F. 

submitted by Teresa, age 14, Michigan
(May 3, 2013 - 1:48 pm)