I'm starting a

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I'm starting a

I'm starting a poem thread/club thing. Everyone can post poems and comment about them.

submitted by Bookbug
(July 14, 2014 - 10:17 am)

Here's mine, called Golden Tree:

Tree;

With branches of gold

It's out there

I've been told

 

Leaf;

Rich in value 

Falls

At my feet

 

This tree

Shall not be chopped

With an ax

And sold in a shop

 

Gold;

Solid   

With money 

 

Secret;

This tree is

Nobody knows

Why I'm so rich 

submitted by Ellie, age 11, Place of poetry
(July 14, 2014 - 11:44 am)

Wow, this is really good! I like the metaphors. Here's my poem:

My Imagination Is...

The voice of soft breeze, gently pushing things to their limits.

A never-ending well of twinkling yellow.

A shiny-eyed tiger of secret wishes.

The bubbly foam of my heart.

A sparkling clear lake of summer times.

The leaping flames of the past.

A wrapped-up gift of joy.

Trees, waving in the breeze of tomorrow.

Hope you guys like it! Does anyone like writing couplets?

submitted by Bookbug
(July 14, 2014 - 4:41 pm)