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Help please!
Help please!
So, my cousin and I are writing a book, but we're having some difficulty. I basically need help with the naming of villains, lands, and a goal for the main protagonist. I will tell you the main story and the characters. First, I will give a description of the villains.
First, there's the queen of an evil kingdom. She wears a black and purple dress, wears a black tiara, has black hair in a bun, purple eyes, and carries a staff with magical abilities. Please help me name her.
Second, is the head guard of the queen. He is a large man with a black, rough beard, and is usually wearing black armor.
submitted by Lindsey R
(December 13, 2015 - 12:23 am)
(December 13, 2015 - 12:23 am)
Okay, so you can continue to suggest land names, if you want, but I now need suggestions for the protagonist's quest, the thing guiding him and the villain. I will tell you about the hero, so then you know what type of quest would attract him.
Name: Locke Shawn (still working on last name)
Age: 14
Occupation: swordsman in training
Appearance: messy black hair, brown eyes, 5'4, usually wears a blue shirt, brown pants, boots, and a brown cloak.
Personality: Kind, funny, adventurous. He's not stupid, but he's not exactly the smartest person in his class. Brave, but is a bit more of a 'fight now, ask questions later' type.
Likes: Swords, breaking dumb rules, adventure
Dislikes: Cowards, some adults, admiting he's wrong, studying.
Bad at: reading maps
Abilities: Is an excellent fighter, fast, owns two swords called the ShadowCaster, and the LightBearer. These swords are really light and easy to manipulate, and when crossed, form a powerful being.
(December 15, 2015 - 5:35 pm)
Kingdom by the sea: Celestia
Kingdom of magic: Matricia
Evil kingdom: Drankora
Magic forest: Selembarine
Bad lands: Warokon
(December 15, 2015 - 6:16 pm)
Sorry, Lindsey, but we cannot write your book for you. It's great that you come to us for support, but please at least TRY creating a quest. I am happy to offer names for countries, though.
Sea Kingdom: Deltara (Might come up with something better later; nationality is Deltarian)
Underground City: Arden (Nationality: Ardenan)
Magical Kingdom: Enlilika (Nationality: Enlilikan)
Evil Kingdom: Lapikova (Nationality: Lapikovanian)
Magic Forest: Dapplemyst (Nationality: Dapplemysteri)
Badlands: Terrapin (Nationality: Terrapinese)
Hallia says yacy. Almost Macy!
(December 17, 2015 - 10:41 pm)
Oh and the entire world can be called Melamere. Nationality is Melamereian.
Hallia says foez. How many foes do you even have? You don't want to say real words.
(December 18, 2015 - 10:35 pm)
For the queen... as someone suggested, I do like Cassandra. My other offering is Diadora.
The guard: Archer, Hunter, Wayne, or Thorne
I need some help with a charater name. I am writing a realistic fiction novel. The main character is Jacqui, a quirky, sarcastic girl who has trouble making and keeping friends, partly due to her pet snake. Her mother has been out of a job for six months. Her father abandoned them, and Jacqui doesn't remember him. When her mom takes a job at the Round Table Diner (a place where Jacqui curiously has never set foot in, even though she passes it every day ont he way home from school), she discovers that her boss has a daughter Jacqui's age! Pleased, she invites the girl over, much to Jacqui's dismay. I need a name for this girl. She has straight brown hair that falls just past her shoulders, chocolate brown eyes, and looks very shy and innocent—But is a lot of trouble once you get to know her. My original thought was Emily, but I feel like it is too normal, I want her name to have a hint of mystery in it, while being recognizeable.
(December 21, 2015 - 12:21 pm)
I suggest Meriada for the queen.
(December 21, 2015 - 4:52 pm)
Amber or Savanna for the girl.
(December 22, 2015 - 6:03 pm)
Hey guys! Sorry it's taken a while, but my cousin and I have chosen the names for the villians. The queen is Renee, and the guard is either Soren, or Todd, which is a name someone else suggested. Thanks for the help, and I will post the areas soon, since I'm meeting up with my cousin on Christmas. By the, I have now thought of the quest, so that's taken care of. You all can either ask for help here, or just help others with ideas.
(December 23, 2015 - 7:38 pm)
Abigail, please oh please don't choose Amber! Amber is the main character of my NaNo novel. I suggest Curio actually.
(December 24, 2015 - 8:30 am)
Curio as the name?
I'm actually thinking about something like Emery or Emilia.
(December 28, 2015 - 10:54 am)
I would say Ariana fro the evil queen, and for the head guard, actually I don't know what to name the head guard.
(January 5, 2016 - 7:44 pm)