Mai and Dustfingerfan

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Mai and Dustfingerfan

Mai and Dustfingerfan are doing a Sci-Fi/Fantasy story.

Rules:
1. No fighting.
2. No taking over the story.  Work it out with your partner so you can both do the story equally.
3. Keep the story PG.
4. GloWorm says to always keep to your genre, but I disagree: if you really want to, change genres.
Thank you very much! :) 
submitted by BellaTrix♡♥♡
(March 30, 2009 - 4:18 pm)

How about ever since the griffin's have thought human's were a threat and human's thought griffin's were a threat, the human goverment has setup a project to surrond all civilazations with a body of water. Josh was living with his mother after his father disappered. Can it turn out that his father was taken by the griffin's because he knew their weakness? What are your ideas?

submitted by Mai, age 12, Milwaukee
(April 23, 2009 - 4:35 pm)

Sounds good. Maybe they should be trying to surround the griffins in water?

submitted by Dustfingerfan, age 11, Inkheart
(April 26, 2009 - 1:30 pm)

What excatly do you mean? Sorry to be so clueless;)

submitted by Mai, age 12, Milwaukee
(April 27, 2009 - 7:52 pm)

I meant that maybe instead of surrounding people in water, they should surround the griffins in water.

submitted by Dustfingerfan, age 11, Inkheart
(April 28, 2009 - 5:40 pm)

Oh, I get it. But what I was saying was that the people evacuate their land cities to be safer surronded by water because the griffins can't go in water. But I like your idea about surronding the griffins instaed because then the peeple could capture the griffins and imprisoin them on the islands. In fact, I lilke your idea much better. Way to go!

((By the way, sorry I haven't been on for a little bit. School>:(  ))

submitted by Mai, age 12, Milwaukee
(April 30, 2009 - 5:59 pm)

Yeah, haven't been on because of school too. So, do you think we're ready to start writing?

submitted by Dustfingerfan, age 11, Inkheart
(May 5, 2009 - 10:53 am)

Sure, I think we are ready, do you want to start?

submitted by Mai, age 12, Milwaukee
(May 5, 2009 - 6:57 pm)

I think we might need to work on the setting more. I don't think I have read Ender's Game so I don't really know what the setting is supposed to be like.

submitted by Dustfingerfan, age 11, Inkheart
(May 15, 2009 - 4:42 pm)

Yeah you should read Ender's Game; it's a great book. Basically it is about a boy named Ender who goes to a battle school because the human race is trying to stop the Buggers (an alien race) from taking over the Earth. That description made it sound cheesy but it is a super book.

submitted by Mai, age 12, Milwaukee
(May 16, 2009 - 1:08 pm)