I'm trying something

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I'm trying something

I'm trying something new . . .

a strange poetry lifting from the soul
and rocks back and forth 
neon
to sweep away and total
and is gone

and  gone

 

 Thoughts? And no, I don't know what I'm talking about . . . 

submitted by poetonearth13
(April 2, 2009 - 5:23 pm)

back to the Inkwell

Cool! It is very unique!

Smile

submitted by Mai, age 12, Milwaukee
(April 2, 2009 - 7:13 pm)

I like it! Very abstract... Maggie?

submitted by Lena G, age 11
(April 3, 2009 - 7:15 am)

Sudden idea . . .

~
The Earth,
The Sea,
The Wind,
The Green,
The Everlasting Force . . .
And Me,
Sedentary,
Cast Into The Wide, Wide World,
Alone,
In Endless Darkness,
With Light Abound.
And You,
Together,
Filled With
Everything,
Good, Evil, Otherwise . . .
The Swirling Vortex Which Never
Lives Or Dies,
Always
There . . .
And The End Of It All,
Drifting,
Unknown,
Unseen,
But There, Still,
Coming Ever Nearer,
The Opposite
Of . . .
What?
~
Er . . . Umm . . . Yeah.  I don't exactly know what I'm talking about, either.  Er . . . Sorry.  
  
submitted by BellaTrix♡♥♡
(April 3, 2009 - 5:45 pm)

What do you mean by 'Maggie?'

submitted by poetonearth13
(April 3, 2009 - 7:14 pm)

Maggie and I are writing an abstract poem and trying to figure out what abstract means.

submitted by Lena G, age 11
(April 4, 2009 - 7:31 am)

Cool!  THAT's abstract! :)

submitted by BellaTrix♡♥♡
(April 3, 2009 - 5:26 pm)

Abstract indeed.

submitted by Mary W., age 11 and one, Bordentown, NJ
(April 3, 2009 - 7:11 pm)