Chatterbox: Inkwell

Writing Thread!

So  here is where you can post bits of stories you are writing, share tips on writing, give polite criticism, etc.

Annnnnnd, I will post parts of the novel I'm writing. I made a thread for it, but it died. So this is a way to revive it! 

Hazel says mewz. That's the second time you've said mew, Hazel. I'm afraid that you are turning into a kitty!