Reverso Poetry Contest!

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Reverso Poetry Contest!

Reverso Poetry Contest!
~❤️~
I know, you guys are probably getting tired of all the contests I'm making. But thanks to Cho (Everyone say thanks to Cho), I've gotten into reverso poetry, and I LOVE IT!!!!
A reverso poem is a poem that has one meaning when read one way, but still makes sense when read the other way. It usually has opposite meaning, but Cho had her own style, so you can either use her style or the original style. Just saying, the original way is much, much harder. We'll decide whether there should be just one judge, or everyone should vote on their favorite later.
Have fun!!!!!!!
submitted by Mei-xue (May-shreh) , Fairyland
(July 8, 2016 - 10:27 pm)

FINALLY SOMEONE DID THE HARD VERSION FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY!!!!!!!

submitted by Mei-xue (May-shreh) , Fairyland
(July 10, 2016 - 5:32 pm)

Okay, this isn't for the contest or anything, but you inspired me to write a couple (fairly short) reverso poems that I would like to share. They actually can be completely reversed word-for-word, instead of line by line, which is probably why I couldn't manage to make them very long. I think I was making it harder than it had to be. Oh well. :-)

The Villain and the Hero

Fear of 
What?
Everything.
Love
Dark hate.
~~~
Hate dark
Love
Everything.
What of fear?
Untitled-but-it's-about-deception
Trust in
Lies
Love your
Deception
~~~
Deception?
Your love
Lies in
Trust
submitted by SydneySong , age 13
(July 10, 2016 - 3:46 pm)

I can't believe it! It's a miracle!

Two hard versions in a row!!!! 

submitted by Mei-xue (May-shreh) , Fairyland
(July 10, 2016 - 5:33 pm)

I think the second one was the original version? Anyway, they're both really good.

Rainbows

Transforming, but still, misty illusions.

Changing life, coming and going quickly,

Wonders painted

Rainbows 

~~~

Flipped:

Rainbows

Painted wonders

Quickly going and coming, life changing

Illusions misty, still, but transforming. 

Rainbows 

~~~

They kind of don't make sense, but oh, well. 

submitted by Alexandra
(July 10, 2016 - 6:26 pm)

I guess I'll try the hard version.

~~

Opposite Ends: A Reverso Poem

Wishing.

For company,

Not

For quiet—

(I have too much.)

Someone to talk to. Please.

I don't want  

Peace, solitude.  

I wish for someone.

To leave me alone?

A nightmare.

To come to me?

A dream.

*REVERSE*

A dream. . . 

To come to me?

A nightmare.

To leave me alone,

I wish for someone.

Peace, solitude.

I don't want

Someone to talk too. Please.

(I have too much.)

For quiet

Not

For company—

Wishing. 

submitted by Abigail S., age 11, Nose in a Book
(July 10, 2016 - 5:43 pm)

Come

Pheonix rising

ashes falling

the moment

sparks

small things

and big ones

life of moment 

invincible

and fragile

life, easily broken

Complex,

reversable

inside out, backwards

Icarus and Ares and Athena

dreams of glory

Thinking of life

Dreaming

*flips*

Dreaming

Life of thinking

Glory of dreams

Athena and Ares and Icarus

backwards, out inside

reversable 

complex,

broken easily

fragile and

invincible 

moment of life

big ones and

small things 

moment the

ashes falling

pheonix rising

come 

 

Well, I'm ridiculously proud of my accomplishment. That was fun! *disclaimer: inspired by the song I was listening to's general theme!*

submitted by Indigo
(July 10, 2016 - 8:50 pm)

Also, just going to put in my opinion: Cho's way is muuuuch harder. I tried both and ended up doing Cho's way for a challenge, but honestly? You have to pay attention to the order of the lines AND the words using Cho's style, so... I really do not get how Cho's way is harder. 

submitted by Indigo
(July 10, 2016 - 8:55 pm)

Wait, what are you saying? At first you sound like you're saying my way is harder. Then you say it's not. Please clarify. 

submitted by Cho Chang
(July 11, 2016 - 3:51 pm)

Sorry, yeah, as I reread it I think it doesn't make much sense. Sorry!

I think your way is harder, and I'm mildly irratating because I don't feel like people are realizing that. 

submitted by Indigo
(July 11, 2016 - 6:36 pm)

Love Letters: by Brookeira

Blood, dust, tears, rust,

The dreams of two souls are faded, tattered, 

Wind, sweep, breeze, gust,

Wind sweeps away dreams that once surely mattered,

Can, need, shall, must,

Maybes captured in old photographs,

Lost heart, lost trust,

Scarred wounds, abandoned laughs,

All sit abandoned on the floor,

All sit beside the attic door, 

Unbroken silence

Spiteful Silence

Silence

REVERSE

Silence

Spiteful Silence

Unbroken Silence 

All sit beside the attic door,

All sit abandoned on the floor,

Scarred wounds, abandoned laughs,

Lost heart, lost trust, 

Maybes captured in old photographs,

Can, need, shall, must, 

Wind sweeps away dreams that once surely mattered,

Wind, sweep, breeze, gust, 

The dreams of two souls are faded, tattered,

Blood, dust, tears, rust 

submitted by Brookeira
(July 10, 2016 - 9:00 pm)

I hope this is right. 

Katherine's Temptation

From The Enchanted Castle

Don't slide the

ring

upon your pale, slim

finger,

don't let it's cold metal

enclose your hand

with magic

like a chain;

don't murmer the words

"I wish"

~

Utter the words "I wish,"

enclose your hand with

magic,

let it's cold metal

slide onto

your pale, slim

finger.  

submitted by Rose bud
(July 11, 2016 - 8:04 am)

YAY!!!!! Hard version!!!

submitted by Mei-xue (May-shreh) , Fairyland
(July 11, 2016 - 3:10 pm)

Oh, I made one! I have flipped words order, but I think it still counts!

 

Remember

Don’t learn

Remember

 

I can’t

 

Remember

 

Less to

 

Remember

 

Don’t die

 

Remember

 

To want, I

 

Remember

 

Flip

 

Remember

 

I want to remember

 

Die, don’t remember

 

To less remember

 

Can’t I remember?

 

Learn, don’t remember.


submitted by DJ Gared
(July 11, 2016 - 9:46 am)

Art 

A line forms.

Twisting,

turning,

something emerges.

It crawls out,

as if hatching from an egg.

A light grows.

Shadows fall.

A cloak creases.

Movement sparks

That face peeks out,

then-

finished.

~~~~

Finished?

Then that face peeks out.

Movement is sparked,

A cloak creases.

Shadows fall.

A light grows,

as if hatching from an egg.

It crawls out,

twisting,

turning,

something emerges.

A line forms. 

Questions 

To be,

or 

not to be,

that is the question.

But what is the question?

A question?

Confused,

am I?

~~~ 

I am confused.

A question.

But what is the question?

That is the question.

Not to be,

or

to be? 

 

 

 

submitted by Cho Chang
(July 11, 2016 - 2:54 pm)

It's not right to be abnormal.

I'm not normal

It's true

I know

Don't listen to yourself

I'm just as sane as you are

When did being normal ever matter

I'm good enough

Sometimes you need to listen to the abnormal

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sometimes you need to listen to the abnormal

I'm good enough

When did being normal ever matter

I'm just as sane as you are

Don't listen to yourself 

I know

It's true

I'm not normal

It's not right to feel abnormal 

-----------------------------------------------------

Water is Life 

Water

Is not

A flood 

Water

Is

A rainbow

Sun shining through

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sun shining through

A rainbow

Is

Water

A flood

Is not

Water

Water is life 

submitted by Luna Lovegood, a.k.a Brooklyn Newsie
(July 11, 2016 - 6:24 pm)