Fan Fiction Writing!

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Fan Fiction Writing!

Fan Fiction Writing!

I had this idea to have a Fan Fiction writing group. Here is what it's about:

You choose a fandom. Easy enough.

You come up with a plot set in/about that fandom.

You write a long-ish story about it, posting it on here in parts, continuing it until you have at least 600 words.

The form for joining:

Name:

Fandom:

Pretty basic. And then later you can come up with a plot and post it. Since I am the maker of this thread, I get to choose first, (whether that's fair or not) so:

Name: Leafpool

Fandom: STAR WARS!

I think you know that I won't be here from Monday to Friday, but I'll post on Saturday. 

submitted by Leafpool
(July 24, 2016 - 1:56 pm)

*shrugs* I'm a bit bored, and I've got a fanfic stated, sooo ...

Name: Cho Chang

Fandom: Warriors, although I've got a good idea for a Star Wars one ....

*WARNING, THIS HAS NOT BEEN EDITED* 

ALLEGIANCES

THUNDERCLAN

LEADER                          FIRESTAR - HANDSOME GINGER TOM

APPRENTICE, BRAMBLEPAW

DEPUTY                           WHITESTORM - BIG WHITE TOM

MEDICINE CAT             CINDERPELT - DARK-GREY SHE-CAT

WARRIORS                    DARKSTRIPE - SLEEK BLACK-AND-GREY TABBY TOM

APPRENTICE, FERNPAW

LONGTAIL - PALE TABBY TOM WITH DARK BLACK STRIPES

MOUSEFUR - SMALL DUSKY BROWN SHE-CAT

APPRENTICE, THORNPAW

BRACKENFUR - GOLDEN BROWN TABBY TOM

APPRENTICE, TAWNYPAW

DUSTPELT - DARK BROWN TABBY TOM 

APPRENTICE, ASHPAW

SANDSTORM - PALE GINGER SHE-CAT

GRAYSTRIPE - LONG-HAIRED GRAY TOM

FROSTFUR - BEAUTIFUL WHITE SHE-CAT WITH BLUE EYES

GOLDENFLOWER - PALE GINGER SHE-CAT

CLOUDTAIL - LONG-HAIRED WHITE TOM

APPRENTICES              LOSTFACE - SHE-CAT WHITE, WITH GINGER SPLOTCHES

THORNPAW - GOLDEN BROWN TABBY TOM

FERNPAW - PALE GREY (WITH DARKER FLECKS) SHE-CAT,                            

PALE GREEN EYES

ASHPAW - PALE GREY (WITH DARKER FLECKS) TOM, DARK 

BLUE EYES

BRAMBLEPAW - DARK BROWN TABBY TOM, AMBER EYES

TAWNYPAW - TORTOISESHELL SHE-CAT, GREEN EYES

QUEENS                       WILLOWPELT - VERY PALE GRAY SHE-CAT WITH UNUSUAL                            

BLUE EYES

ELDERS                        ONE-EYE - PALE GRAY SHE-CAT, THE OLDEST SHE-CAT IN

THUNDERCLAN; VIRTUALLY BLIND AND DEAF

SMALLEAR - GRAY TOM WITH VERY SMALL EARS, THE OL-

DEST TOM IN THUNDERCLAN

DAPPLETAIL - ONCE-PRETTY TORTOISESHELL SHE-CAT 

WITH A LOVELY DAPPLED COAT

SPECKLETAIL - PALE TABBY

 

 

SHADOWCLAN

LEADER                       TIGERSTAR - BIG DARK BROWN TABBY TOM WITH UN-

USUALLY LONG CLAWS, FORMERLY OF THUNDERCLAN

DEPUTY                       BLACKFOOT - LARGE WHITE TOM WITH HUGE JET-BL-

ACK PAWS, FORMERLY A ROGUE CAT

MEDICINE CAT           RUNNINGNOSE - SMALL GRAY-AND-WHITE TOM

WARRIORS                  OAKFUR - SMALL BROWN TOM

LITTLECLOUD - VERY SMALL TABBY TOM

BOULDER - SKINNY GRAY TOM, FORMERLY A ROGUE 

CAT

RUSSETFUR - DARK GINGER SHE-CAT, FORMERLY A

ROGUE CAT

APPRENTICE, CEDARPAW

JAGGEDTOOTH - HUGE TABBY TOM, FORMERLY A R-

OGUE CAT

APPRENTICE, ROWANPAW

APPRENTICES              CEDARPAW - DARK GRAY TOM

ROWANPAW - LITHE DARK GINGER TOM WITH GR-

EEN EYES

QUEENS                         TALLPOPPY - LONG-LEGGED LIGHT BROWN TABBY 

SHE-CAT

 

 

WINDCLAN

LEADER                         TALLSTAR - BLACK-AND-WHITE TOM WITH A VE-

RY LONG TAIL

DEPUTY                         DEADFOOT - BLACK TOM WITH A TWISTED PAW

MEDICINE CAT            BARKFACE - SHORT-TAILED BROWN TOM

WARRIORS                    MUDCLAW - MOTTLED BROWN DARK TOM

WEBFOOT - DARK GRAY TABBY TOM 

TORNEAR - TABBY TOM

ONEWHISKER - BROWN TABBY TOM

APPRENTICE, GORSEPAW

RUNNINGBROOK - LIGHT GRAY SHE-CAT

QUEENS                         ASHFUR - GRAY QUEEN

MORNINGFLOWER - TORTOISESHELL QUEEN

WHITETAIL - SMALL WHITE SHE-CAT

 

 

 

RIVERCLAN

LEADER                          LEOPARDSTAR - UNUSUALLY SPOTTED GOLDEN

SHE-CAT

DEPUTY                        STORMFUR - GRAY TOM WITH BATTLE SCARRED

EARS

APPRENTICE, STORMPAW

MEDICINE CAT            MUDFUR - LONG-HAIRED BROWN TOM

WARRIORS                    BLACKCLAW - SMOKY BLACK TOM

HEAVYSTEP - THICKSET TABBY TOM

APPRENTICE, DAWNPAW

MISTYFOOT - GRAY SHE-CAT WITH BLUE EYES

APPRENTICE, FEATHERPAW

LOUDBELLY - DARK BROWN TOM   

QUEENS                         MOSSPELT - TORTOISESHELL SHE-CAT

 

 

 

BLOODCLAN

LEADER                         SCOURGE - SMALL BLACK TOM WITH ONE WH-

ITE PAW

DEPUTY                         BONE - MASSIVE BLACK-AND-WHITE TOM

WARRIORS                    OSCAR - LARGE LONG-HAIRED TABBY TOM W-

ITH UNUSUAL PALE BLUE EYES

ALICIA - SMALL BLACK SHE-CAT WITH WHITE

PAWS

ANGUS - HEAVYSET PALE GINGER TOM

APPRENTICES, HOLLY, THORN, AND HAWK

QUEENS                         ANISETTE - DAINTY BLACK SHE-CAT WITH G-

REEN EYES (MOTHER TO SUN AND MOON)

LUSA - ELEGANT LIGHT BROWN SHE-CAT                                  

Prologue

The apprentices stepped into the cave, expecting that no one would be inside. “Greetings kits.” An old voice rasped. The apprentices bowed their heads meekly, tucking their tails in between their hind legs. That is, all except for one. The silver she-cat with large green eyes held her head high in defiance of the old cat.

“We aren't kits. We're apprentices.” She hissed, glaring at the cat. The old golden cat twitched his whiskers as if attempting to hold back a mrrow of laughter. Apprentices, always getting into trouble. The old cat thought, as he watched the apprentices file into his den. At least, the place he called his den.

More like my prison. He thought wryly. “Were,” He corrected softly. His eyes twinkled with mirth at the apprentice's antics. “Well, anyhow, you're all far from StarClan’s territory.” 

“Do you think we don't know that? You're a stupid old cat, aren't you.” The she-cat retorted sharply. The old cat clicked his tongue a couple of times, shaking his head in dismay. Cheeky little apprentice, isn’t she. “Apprentices these days. They can't show an ounce of respect for their elders, can they?”

One of the other apprentices scuffled his paws in the dirt, obviously ashamed. He then rolled over onto his back, baring his stomach. “Old cat, please don't be offended by Emeraldpaw.” The white tom said, gazing up at the old cat with his large grey-blue eyes. Emeraldpaw glared at the other apprentices.

Now there’s a smart one. The old cat thought approvingly. “Oh, won't you please keep quiet Hailpaw, and stop being so respectful, you little mousebrain.” Hailpaw quailed under Emeraldpaw’s glare. “I-I'm sorry, Emeraldpaw.” He said meekly, hopping up off of the ground.

“You ‘paws shouldn't be out here. As I cannot leave this place, you'll have to spend the night here.But enough of that. I am Sunstar.” The old cat croaked.

“You can't be Sunstar!” A little apprentice with so much white fur it almost looked pink, and large blue eyes piped up. “Sunstar is much, much younger than you. I know Sunstar!” She squeaked, bouncing up and down excitedly. I’m afraid I am Sunstar. Sunstar the traitor, Sunstar thought sadly.“He's much nicer and prettier than you!” She squealed. 

“At least, I think he's nicer than you. He's pretty nice—” She was quickly cut off by Emeraldpaw’s tail sweeping over her mouth. Emeraldpaw bared her teeth in fury. “Cherrypaw!” She roared. Cherrypaw cowered, her tail tucked in between her legs. “Doesn't anyone here know how to shut up?!” Emeraldpaw growled fiercely.

An ash-grey tom stepped forward, brushing his tail over her flank. “Emeraldpaw. I think we should stay here with Sunstar for the night.” He mewed softly, rubbing up against her. “You’re probably right, Ashpaw,” She growled softly.

“But before we continue,” She mewed, sitting down erectly. “We need to introduce everyone, and figure out how we'll get back to our own territory.” She said, baring her yellowish teeth at Sunstar.

“A wise plan, young one,” Sunstar croaked. “How about we give our names, ages when we died, and what Clan we each came from. Then, we will proceed with why in all of the beautiful silverpelt you are this far away from StarClan. Emeraldpaw, you begin.”

Emeraldpaw sighed resignedly before saying, “I'm Emeraldpaw, I was eight moons when I died, and I came from ShadowClan.” Her silver fur seemed to glow in the moonlight as she tossed her head arrogantly. She stood up, pacing around the cave.

Very proud of her lineage. Sunstar thought.

Ashpaw stepped forward, his green eyes glinting. “My name's Ashpaw, and I just turned ten moons before I died. I was ready to receive my warrior name when I died,” His voice turned wistful at this. 

“And I came from WindClan.” He added after a moment's silence. Cherrypaw bounced closer to Sunstar. 

I wonder why his leader didn’t perform that one ceremony if he was so close to becoming a warrior before he died. I guess he must have died in battle.

“Even though I know you're not really Sunstar, I still trust you.” She said happily. “My name’s Cherrypaw, I was six moons when I died, and I’m from ThunderClan.” She said proudly, licking Sunstar’s nose happily.

Bouncy little thing, but she means well. And I’m guessing she has a little bit of kittypet blood in her.

Hailpaw stepped forward, cowering meekly. Emeraldpaw snorted disdainfully, whispering to Ashpaw. “M-my name is Hailpaw, I was the medicine cat apprentice, but I died from a rat bite. It got infected,” He explained, scuffing his paws along the cave’s floor. “I was about nine moons when I died.” He mumbled.

He’s ashamed of his death. Sunstar thought.

The last apprentice stepped forward. She was a pretty she-cat with soft, fluffy brown spotted fur. “I’m Willowpaw. I was a medicine cat, too. I died at twelve moons old. I came from RiverClan.” I never really got to watch RiverClan. Sunstar nodded in understanding. “I am Sunstar, and I died at ninety-six moons old.” Cherrypaw gasped in amazement. “Wow! You’re ancient!” She mewed happily. 

“Thank you.” Sunstar meowed dryly, his whiskers twitching with laughter. “And, I come from the great clan SunClan.” 

“What?! But there is no such clan! By the great silverpelt, this is awesome!” Cherrypaw exclaimed, jumping into the air. “Where do guys live? How come I’ve never seen you guys before in StarClan? Where’s your territory? And oh yeah, why are you sooo old?” Cherrypaw said, panting as she finished. 

Sunstar sighed. “It’s a long story.” Emeraldpaw growled. “I’ll bet. Let’s finish our business first, though, shall we?” Ashpaw flicked his tail over her back in a comforting way. “Calm down. First we’ll figure out how to get back home, then we’ll catch some fresh-kill, and then we’ll finally sit down and listen to Sunstar’s story.” Ashpaw said soothingly. 

Emeraldpaw snorted, obviously unconvinced. But she sat back down anyways. She reminds me so much of Moon. I mean Moonstar. Sunstar thought sadly. 

“In the morning, I’ll give you instructions to get back to StarClan’s territory. There’s already fresh-kill here, so now for my story.

I’m glad Yellowfang and Firestar brought me prey this morning. Sunstar thought, nodding to the fresh-kill pile. The apprentices gathered around, their stomachs rumbling with hunger.

“Is there any rabbit?” Ashpaw asked, wrinkling his nose at the pile. “It’s my favorite.” Cherrypaw let out a mrrow of laughter. “Of course it is, silly! You’re a WindClan cat! But I think I found one! It’s at the bottom of the pile.”

“Thanks. Yummy! Anyone want to share?” Ashpaw asked. “Sure.” Emeraldpaw mewed, touching her nose to his cheek and purring loudly. “I’d like a mouse, if nobody minds.” Willowpaw said shyly. 

“Sure! Here!” Cherrypaw said, tossing her one, before selecting a vole for herself. Hailpaw stepped forward. “May I please have this starling?” He asked. “Of course. I’ve already eaten.” Sunstar said.

Little mousebrained apprentice. Seems afraid of his own shadow. Sunstar thought, twitching his whiskers. It’s not like I’m going to eat him or anything. Silly apprentice.

“Now for my story. I’ll have to begin way back. When I was a kit.” He said softly. “Wait! Wait! Where did you live?” Cherrypaw asked.

“In the twolegplace. During Scourge’s reign. Now, if you want me to tell you this story, you'll have to be quiet and listen.” Sunstar growled irritably.

Cherrypaw nodded seriously. “I will, Sunstar.”

“Good, and now for the story.”   

 

submitted by Cho Chang
(August 19, 2016 - 3:58 pm)

Ooh! I'll join!! 

So, this will be my first time writing a fanfic, so I'm excited!

Name: Joan B. of Arc

Fandom: The Scarlet Pimpernel

Don't know if anyone's watched that movie, but it's AMAZING. Although, I would probably suggest it for older kids, perhaps 12+ 

submitted by Joan B. of Arc, age 14, Camelot
(August 19, 2016 - 7:04 pm)

I'm cooking up a story and it'll be posted soon.

submitted by BumbleBuddy, age Ageless, Nowhere
(August 25, 2016 - 5:31 pm)

First couple breaks of my Warriors FanFic!

NOTE: ALIGENCES ARE STILL IN EDITATION. THIS STORY HAS NOT BEEN BROKEN INTO CHAPTERS YET. THE ONLY PEOPLE LISTED IN RIVER, SHADOW AND WINDCLAN ARE THE ONES YOU HAVE MET SO FAR. THE ONES FOR THUNDERCLAN? WELL, THATS ALL THERE IS. SORRY. IT WILL ALL BE EXPLAINED. ;) THIS FOLLOWS NONE OF THE MINISERIES, AND IS SET IN AN ENTIRELY DIFFERENT AGE FROM THEM. 

 

ALLIGENCES

THUNDERCLAN:

Leader: Dovestar, 40 Moons

Deputy: Breezetail, 15 Moons 

Medicine Cat: Autumnpaw, 6 Moons

Warriors: Cloudleaf, 19 Moons; Meadowpelt, 17 Moons; Mossflower, 20 Moons

Queens: Herbwing, 23 Moons; Tawnystripe, 42 Moons; Flamefeather, 52 Moons

Elders: None

Apprentices: None

Kits: Flowerkit, 5 Moons; Berrykit, 5 Moons; Ivykit, 3 Moons; Jaykit, 1 Moon; Brightkit, 1 Moon

SHADOWCLAN:

Leader: Stripestar

Medicine Cats: Brittlebone 

WINDCLAN:

Leader: Turtlestar 

Kits: Runningkit

RIVERCLAN:

Leader: Rainstar

Medicine Cats: Shinepaw 

Apprentices: Streampaw; Leopardpaw

 

 

PROLOUGE

 

Dovestar watched as ThunderClan fell. She held the power of Ancient Skies in her paws, but was powerless to save her Clan. Her deputy fell. Both medicine cats. All the kits. Half the queens. Five or the six apprentices. Three-quarters of the Warriors. And all ten elders. She had had exactly fifty cats in her care before. Only eleven remained. What could she do?

When the final apprentice fell, she knew. She could do nothing. The enemies took pity eventually, she supposed. They killed one more warrior, before vanishing into the pines. Dovestar sighed. Make that nine cats. Suddenly, a strengthening rage ran through her. She would rebuild ThunderClan.

 

ShadowClan would pay.

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

It was the day after the battle, and ThunderClan still had no medicine cats, nor deputy. A queen yowled from the nursery, and Dovestar ran over, herbs in hand. The tiny bit of medical training she had would have to be enough. Cloudpelt cried out hoarsely as her belly rippled with spasms. Dovestar helped the queen give birth to a slightly skinny she-cat. Cloudpelt moaned and turned to her leader.

"Dovey....care for her..." And Cloudpelt moved no more. Dovestar blinked back tears and continued licking the kit. Deciding she would call her Autumnkit, she called Breezetail to the nursery.

"Breezetail, lick Autumnkit for me. I have some burials to make." Both she-cats touched noses before turning away sadly. 

 

 

6 MOONS LATER

 

 

"May you be known as Autumnpaw. I shall mentor you on your way to becoming a medicine cat." Autumnpaw's leader faltered. "I...do not know much, so do not hesitate to ask the other medicine cats for help." Autumnpaw tingled with excitement as she touched Dovestar's nose.

Berrykit and Flowerkit began the chant. "Autumnpaw! Autumnpaw!" The rest of the Clan soon joined. Dovestar looked proud as Autumnpaw's eyes shone out over the small crowd. Dovestar ended the meeting and Autumnpaw hopped off the Highledge. The kits crowded around, even Jaykit and Brightkit. Autumnpaw smiled proudly as the kits pranced around her.

"Alright, leave me be! I have to settle in!" She playfully pushed the kits off and they scampered back off to the nursery.

"One more thing-Gathering crews are chosen tomorrow." Dovestar's voice rang out, and Autumnpaw nodded to herself before racing off towards the vacant medicine den. She carefully pushed through the brambles and surveyed her new living quarters.

Settling in a musty nest, she curled up, preparing for sleep, but Breezetail padded over.

"I couldn't be more proud." Her mother choked out. Autumnpaw touched noses with her and Breezetail quickly exited the den. Finally, Autumnpaw went to sleep.

 

~~~~~

 

Autumnpaw awoke the next morning feeling doubtful. Her dreams had not been filled with StarClan figures. She knew that she had not been blessed above the Moonpool, because of the extraordinary circumstances within her Clan. Was StarClan mad at them? Or just her? She hoped not. The buzzing if voices came from outside, and Autumnpaw slipped out the entrance to the fresh-kill pile.

"Gathering members!" Breezetail called, and Autumnpaw rushed over, vole forgotten. "Autumnpaw, Meadowpelt and Herbwing. Plus myself and Dovestar."

Autumnpaw sighed. Even though the other Clans had gotten used to the small ThunderClan entourage, she still hadn't.

'Oh well,' she thought. 'I'll just have to wait.'

 

~~~~~

More coming tomorrow! :D 

 

 

submitted by Inktail
(August 30, 2016 - 9:19 pm)

Dovestar flicked her tail and Autumnpaw followed her Clanmates across the log bridge and down the slope. Stories of the ShadowClan raid rushed into her head, but she pushed them away. Shinepaw bounded up to her, her sleek fur shining in the moonlight. 

"Hi!" The RiverClan cat called. They talked until the leaders called for silence.

Dovestar went first. "First things first, we have a new medicine cat, Autumnpaw." Choruses of 'Autumnpaw!' rang through the clearing so loudly, Autumnpaw was afraid she would go deaf. Dovestar flicked her tail and the cats quieted. "The prey is running well. RiverClan?"

Rainstar stepped forward. He was quite old, but only on his fourth life. "The prey is running nicely, thank you. We have two new apprentices, Streampaw and Leopardpaw." The clearing rang yet again, until WindClan stepped up.

"Thank you. Runningkit was recently born, although we have found scents of ShadowClan within our borders." Turtlestar narrowed his eyes at Stripestar, who didn't move. The pretty she-cat stepped up.

"ShadowClan has nothing to report," She carefully sidestepped the matter and ignored Turtlestar's snort. Dovestar quickly stepped between the two leaders.

"Gathering is over then." Autumnpaw stood, stretching her legs. The ShadowClan medicine cat stopped her on her way out. His eyes shone with sympathy, and Autumnpaw knew he was thinking about Firebush, the previous ThunderClan medicine cat.

"If you ever need advice on anything, don't hesitate." Brittlebone said. Autumnpaw nodded and flicked her tail across his face as a gesture of kindness as she walked out. She felt Meadowpelt's gaze boring into her, and tried hard not to look at the older warrior. Finally though, she couldn't stand it anymore.

"Is there something I can do you?!" she asked angrily. Meadowpelt looked taken aback and quickly averted her gaze, swerving away from Autumnpaw, who sighed heavily.

 

'It's hard being the only one of your kind in your Clan.'

 

~~~~~

 

More coming really soon! 

submitted by Inktail
(September 1, 2016 - 6:26 pm)

That night, it felt as though Autumnpaw had barely closed her eyes before she was awake again. She groaned and closed her eyes again. Poking began, and Autumnpaw rolled over, growling, before opening her eyes. A gray tabby cat scowled at her. 

"Finally." He started walking, obviously meaning for Autumnpaw to follow. She scampered after him, her feelings slightly hurt.

"Excuse me, who in the name of StarClan are you?!" She cried. He wheeled on her, eyes flashing.

"Jayfeather. And you are in StarClan."

 

~~~~~

Autumnpaw gasped. "I'm not dead, am I?!"

Jayfeather huffed. "Of course not. Now come on. We don't have all night." Autumnpaw followed the fuming cat's tail at a distance. Jayfeather stopped in the middle of the forest.

"What you're about to see isn't pretty." His voice softened. "This is the Dark Forest. You must never go in here, unless a StarClan warrior is with you. Understand?" His eyes snapped again.

Autumnpaw nodded, and Jayfeather didn't move. She went red with embarrassment as she realized this cat was blind. "Understood." She said quickly.

Jayfeather nodded curtly and entered the forest. They walked together, pelts twining, hidden amongst the trees, until they came to a clearing. A tall, dark tom was standing in the middle of many Clan smelling cats. They were fighting each other, claws unsheathed. Autumnpaw gasped softly and Jayfeather nodded to the tom.

"See him?"

"Hard to  miss him." Autumnpaw muttered.

Jayfeather tensed. "That's your distant kin. Darkstripe." At this, Autumnpaw cracked. 

 ~~~~~

 

submitted by Inktail
(September 1, 2016 - 7:30 pm)

Autumnpaw ran back through the trees, back to the safety of StarClan. Jayfeather exited behind her, annoyed. He opened his mouth as if to speak, but nothing came out. He simply stared at Autumnpaw. An icy Blue tinge lit his face and spread to his tail. Shakily, Autumnpaw reached out to touch him, and he sprang to life, snarling. She backed up as he advanced on her, words spilling from his mouth. 

"Ancient Sky and Ancient Leaf must make the Clans whole." Then he leapt at her. Autumnpaw sat, yowling like a kit. She  realized she was back in her  denand that it was morning. She pushed her way through the brambles and a dark gray she-cat that she didn't recongize greeted her. 

"Hello, Autumn's Leaves! "

Autumnpaw froze. "A-a-a-autumn'sLeaves, yep, that's me. " The words fell off her tongue without her realizing.

"All cats to the Rock!" A voice called.

"Robin's Tuft! " A tom yowled and the she-cat ran over. Stunned, Autumnpaw walked over to the crowd of unfamiliar cats.  

"Friends, as you know, I, Jay's Flight, have been puzzling over wether or not to draw stones. Yes, the eagles are a bit much. But should we really throw ourselves into the enemies paws? I have decided. Today, we draw. Robin's Tuft, you know the drill. " Robin's Tuft stepped up and put her stone on the go pile. A tom stepped up after but put his on leave. Back and fourth. Autumnpaw didn't even realize it was her turn until Robin's Tuft nudged her.

She then realized both piles were identical. With a pang of regret, she set her stone on stay. Murmuring spread through the crowd as Jay's Flight yowled triumphanly.

"Stay it is!" Suddenly, the crowd spun and Autumnpaw's world went black. A wrinkled old cat stepped out of the darkness, a stern look on his face.

"You were not meant to be here, Autumnpaw.  Stay in your own memories, and remember this name."

 

Stoneteller. 

submitted by Inktail
(September 6, 2016 - 2:35 pm)

Autumnpaw awoke in a cold sweat, shivering. Where was she? Then she reconginized the brambly entrance of her den and sighed with relief. Just then, Tawnystripe, heavy with kits, entered the den. 

"Good morning, Autumnpaw." She said kindly.

"Morning," Autumnpaw muttered sleepily.

Tawnystripe looked uncomfortable. "Do you have anything for sore muscles?"

Autumnpaw held back a laugh. "Not in stock, sorry."

Tawnysrripe looked slightly dejected and exited the den. Autumnpaw burst into laughter. It had bern an inside joke for her and Tawnystripe when she was a kit and Tawnystripe still did it every morning. Autumnpaw exited the den and pulled a small mouse off the fresh-kill pile. Eating it slowly, she barely noticed as Dovestar came up behind her.

"Deep in thought today, eh?"

Autumnpaw nearly jumped out of her pelt. "Sorry Dovestar! Um-any training lined up for today?" She asked hopefully.

Dovestar laughed sweetly. "Yes, come on. Lets go to the storeroom." Autumnpaw gobbled her last bite of mouse and padded after her leader.

 

 

 

 

 

So, is everyone enjoying it? I feel like its not being read, so ill say this-CRITISCISM IS VERY MUCH APPRECTIATED. Thanks. :))) 

submitted by Inktail
(September 6, 2016 - 10:10 pm)

NaMe: Cassandra (goes by cass/cassie)

FaNdOm: Pery Jackson (first/second series)

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"Honestly, what are you so worried about?" I say (@Everyone it is in first person perspetive from CASS) Annabeth stares at me like I grew a second head.

"Really? your daughter of poesidan and look what you did!" she yells at me, knowing what will happen next, I do it anyway.

"Technachly, daughter of poesidan and Athena, minor goddess," for any of you who think this is wrong beleive it! I mean, I would know my own life right? Zues thought it would be a fun practical joke to set Poesidean and Athena on a blind date with each other, telling both the othe person was mortal, and they neede to pretend they were mortal, when they found out Zues got soacked and covered in feathers, but hear I am, somehow. ANYWAY.

"You have to bring that into every conversation don't you?" she said cleary annoyed I corrected her, yet again.

"Yes, but you know you couldn't bear to lose me," I tease, and she shoves me playfully. even though I am a minor goddess I don't have my own table or cabin, how unfair is that! but I HAD my own cabin sorta, I had poesidan cabin al to myself intell Percy Jackson deced to show up, I guess I can't blame him, he was trying to survive and all. "I mean come on, you didn't despise him when he was drenching Clariese with water," I point out. she rolls her eyes, mostlikely thinking, who wouln't be happy about that? she is pure evil.

"Then you can take over teaching him sword fighting while Luke's sick," she says. i give a dramicit sigh knowing there was no hope for me. 

"come on feather head, me really? he has no experiance and you want him to practice with a goddess?" she just nods her head.

"i have to teach him acnchint greek, this is the least you  could do," she says

"No the least I can do is nothing," I say and she glares at me. "Fine, Fine." 

 

alright more later! 

submitted by Annabeth C., age 11, CA Sacramento
(September 2, 2016 - 12:38 pm)

Name: September

Fandom: Warriors!

Can we have two of the same fandom?? 

submitted by September
(September 2, 2016 - 7:53 pm)