As Nao doesn't

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As Nao doesn't

As Nao doesn't have time to post, I'm her "agent", I guess. She told me that I could put up here some poems that she has written. I think she's really good! I'm just copieing them in the original format from her blog. All written and copyrighted by Nao S. Please give me/her your thoughts on the poems below!

 

LOW
I'll give up.
I'll never fight.
Who cares about life,
life is all boring.
I'll never give up.
I'll always fight.
I care about life,
life is all exciting.
JUMP HIGH AS YOU CAN
HAVE YOU EVER PLAYED OUT IN THE RAIN.
IT'S PRETTY AND WET,
THEN JUMP HIGH AS YOU CAN,
HIGH,
SO THE GOD CAN PLEASE YOU.
I WAS SO ILL,
WHEN I WAS ONLY A LITTLE GIRL.
BUT I FOUGHT,
AND FOUGHT,
AND FOUGHT,
Be quiet, Somebody's Calling My Name
I hear and see what's calling my name.
It's dangerous to go in there,
it's mysterious in there,
you'll get lost,
you'll be quiet and silent in there.
With nothing to cheer you up.
So beq uiet and listen to the sound of nature.
Magical Sky
In war time their wasn't any silence.
You'll hear loud noises from the pieces of glass.
They came up and captured us,
what did we do.
Why are we doing this hideous war.
I wonder.
But nobody would ever tell me.
Keep it a secret.
I could tell that I'll be up in the magical sky,
still looking at the horrible war.
But it shall be quieter and peacefuller.
And they did let me go up in the magical sky.
Where I don't have to wonder about anything.

 

submitted by Jenni T/Nao S, age 12, Nowhere
(April 25, 2009 - 12:38 pm)

Wow!! Those were pretty good!!! Tell Nao I like them!! :):)

submitted by Paige
(April 27, 2009 - 1:10 pm)

Cool! Show me more!

submitted by CJ, age 11, Nowhere in part
(June 9, 2010 - 6:39 pm)