BeastTamer Adventure

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BeastTamer Adventure

BeastTamer Adventure

Welcome to the most complex story I have made so far. I can only give a breif outline:

You are a villager in a small village. You live by the woods. One day, you are attacked by a StoneBeast. It looks like a boulder, but it has legs and a head and a tail. Monsters like that were sopposed to by exiled by the Bann, a spell that exiled all elementals. Then you learn you have elemental magic, and you have to stop the Bann.

Ok, here is the sheet if you have elemental powers and hate the Bann. Please don't be OP.

Name:

Age:

Streangth: x/100

Intillect: x/100

What is your job in the village: (Blacksmith, Knight, Farmer, Mercinary, Preist, ECT)

What is your elemental power: (Earth, Air, Water, Fire, ECT)

Appearance:

Personality:

Also, if you want to help protect the ban, you can't have any elemental power, because the Bann has put a death sentence on the heads of those with elemental power. Fill this out:

NAme:

Age: (20+)

Weapon of Choice

Position: (Guard, exacutionor, warrior, King, princess, ECT

Intillect: x/100

Strength: x/100

Appearance:

Personality:

Ok, the story is going to be a lot more cpomplex than it seems. This will be a single writer, and people can join for the whole story, unless to many people  have joined.

Begin! 

submitted by Gared, Vampire
(August 12, 2016 - 11:27 am)

Name: Klia Kirota

Age: 15

Strength: if you mean physical strength, like 10/100

Intellect: 100/100

What is your job in the village: (Blacksmith, Knight, Farmer, Mercinary, Preist, ECT) Librarian

What is your elemental power: (Earth, Air, Water, Fire, ECT) Water

Appearance: Long black hair, pale, greyish bluish green eyes. Very petite.

Personality: Smart, solitary, somewhat quiet.

submitted by Brookeira
(August 12, 2016 - 3:02 pm)

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submitted by Top
(August 12, 2016 - 6:42 pm)

Kilia sat in the library. The books that lined the shelves gleamed a bright orange. Strange. There was no chance of a fire elemental, of course. The Bann had stopped them. But still…

It was a dark, misty night, and Kilia remembered the other misty night that year. It had been the night her brother had been Taken: the night of the Bann. He had been only a year old, and with the tradition of the village, had not been named. Kilia had called him Blaike, but the older members of her family, and those creeps who called themselves her cousins, had called the child “it” or “that thing”, because even before the Bann, those with elemental powers were the pariahs of the kingdom, and Blaike had show the tell-tale red swirls of the innate pyromancer.

Kilia was stirred from her meditation. In the fog, a fire burned. No, not a fire…

A beast the size of a field oxen lunged from the fog. It was a chalky grey, but fire burned from it’s back, and on it’s head, two burning horns stood. It pawed the ground, then lunged. Kilia ducked, but she felt sick. A wave of nausea struck her, and she collapsed. Then sheed stood up. Her anger took control, and she ran at the beast. Then her arms became etched with swirling blue lines. Her arms hurt as if the lines were being carved by invisible knives as she stumbled forward until her hands burst into a torrent of water. The fire beast was hit. It stumbled until it collapsed into a pile of charred stone.

“Kill the water mage!!” Someone yelled. A crowd had gathered around Kilia, her arms still dripping water. A priest pushed his way towards her.

“You are a vile demon. Die!” He yelled as he swung a heavy broadsword.

“Ahh. No, please.” Kilia yelled.

“Die!!!” The crowd yelled.

Kilia threw her arms up to shield her from the blow, but none came. When she looked, all she saw was the priest clutching a bleeding arm, his sword shattered. Kilia ran.

submitted by Gared
(August 12, 2016 - 7:25 pm)

Someone may be a vampire.......

submitted by Gared
(August 12, 2016 - 7:33 pm)

Name: Selena White

Age: 20

Weapon of choice: She would rather use her wit, and when fights prefers to use magic--but uses a silver dagger ocasionally.

Position: ...She used to be a slave, but escapes and is pretending to be a farmer. She has a strange silver circlet, and is wanted to get that circlet and become a slave again--she was a precious slave, and intercepted royal secrets which she decided to run away when she learned.

Intellect: Pretty high? I'm not really sure what you mean by the rankings, sorry. Could you explain those?

Strength: Hmm. Pretty low. 

Appearance: She keeps her blonde hair under a green scarf, so nobody can really see that part of her. Paper-pale. She never really did jobs outdoors. She normally wears a brown peasant's dress. She's tall, but malnourished.

Personality: Cold, calculating, smart, but has a wit and is all for tricking people accasionally. I'm going to develop her personality more later. 

submitted by Icy, age 11, The Forest
(August 12, 2016 - 8:39 pm)

Ok,mthe ratings are for, out of one hundred, how good your charrie is at certain things.

submitted by Gared
(August 12, 2016 - 9:45 pm)

For Intellectual, I'd probably say 70...or 80....I guess 80...or 90...90...but for combat, 30.

submitted by Icy, age 11, The Forest
(August 14, 2016 - 6:42 am)

Whoops! I filled out the wrong charrie sheet!

My charecter has Ice Powers, and wants to stop the ban. Please do not kill my Charrie!!!!!! 

submitted by Icy, age 11, The Forest
(August 12, 2016 - 8:41 pm)

Name: Florle MacEdwards

Age: 22

Position: Hmm...blacksmiths apprentice.

Weapon of Choice: Dagger

Intellect: 78

Strength: 66

Elemental Power: Air 

Apperance: Light brown hair and pale skin. Blue eyes. Hair comes to her shoulder blades with long bangs.

Personality: Kind, brave, and bubbly. Fierce and shy, not outspoken, but not afraid to stand up for what she belIves in. 

 

submitted by Inktail
(August 12, 2016 - 9:00 pm)

Name: Elysia Pineswallow

Age: 14

Streangth: 68/100

Intillect: 83/100

What is your job in the village: (Blacksmith, Knight, Farmer, Mercinary, Preist, ECT) Works with whatever she can get.

What is your elemental power: (Earth, Air, Water, Fire, ECT) Fire

Appearance: Short, with long black hair with intense amber eyes that get darker further in. Wears casual clothes.

Personality: Intense, hardworking, impatient, and easily annoyed. Dislikes anything girly/fancy, is quite poor. Good at making enemies, not so great at making friends.

Funny I was just looking for one of these earlier todaySmile

submitted by The Riddler
(August 12, 2016 - 9:15 pm)

Ok, the Bann is a proper noun. Just to let everyone know. I will start work on another post right now.

submitted by Gared
(August 12, 2016 - 9:42 pm)

Selena White, escaped slave, ex-farmer, was in trouble. Her pale skin was cold to the touch, and a icy mist swirled around her head. She was running from a mob, lead by the local high priest, that had formed during a brawl with a arrogant baron. He was a rich man, and a stupid one. He had made the mistake of insulting Selena, who had retaliated with a blast of ice.

“Who are you?” a voice asked. Selena saw a figure wearing a cloak and a blacksmith’s apron.

“Stop right there.” Another voice says. Selena turned around. She saw four different people surrounding her. A definite leader stepped forward.

“Halloooo,” He said, pulling of a spotless green cloak to reveal full plate armor. His hair was short, and his eyes were dark. “I am Alex. You are a elemental, nay?”

“Uh, yes.” Selena replied, rolling up the sleeves on her brown dress. On her arm were faint ice blue lines.

“So you are an ice elemental?” A new voice cut in. Selena turned to see a small girl with harshe green eyes and black hair. “I am Klia, Klia Kirota.”

“Hi, I’m Selena White.” Selene said.

“Great, now that we have spent ages here, we are being chased by a mob.” A younger girl cut in. “Since we are doing the whole name game thing, I am Elysia. Now, Alexander, why don’t you put the freaky powers you have to good use.”

While Alexander ran off, Selena talked to the remaining unknown figure.

“Hi.” She said.

“Hello. I am Florle MacEdwards. You should go see Alex fight. He has creepy powers.” The other girl replied.

Alexander stood on a small dirt trail, looking at the blaze of torches coming forward. Then, with one sweep of his arm, he made the trees bend into a wall of twisted branches. The mob stopped, and set the trees on fire. Alexander countered with a chopping motion, and a gaping chasm opened in front of them. The mob stepped back, then ran headlong away.

“I am Alexander,” Alex said. “Life elemental.” His arms glowed black.

“But life. Aren't you supposed to be… less powerful?” Selena asked.

“I am an elemental of life and death. I don’t just make flowers grow. I control the life force of the earth.”

“Uh, we have a group of Bann Enforcers. They look deadly. We should get outta here.” Florle side, shooting a blast of air. Her limbs began to become invisible, then she snapped back into focus.

The group of white-garbed executioners ran forward, only to meet with Elysia’s fiery temper. She shot a blast of fire that chopped through rock and dirt. The Bann Enforcers dodged, and Selena, instinctively, thrust her hand out and shot a wall of ice. To say the Enforcers were enveloped in ice would be an miscommunication. Rather, the ice slammed into them. Alexander looked down at the armored body at his feet. The Bann Enforcer was moving, but the front of it’s helmet was covered in ice fragments.

“Come on. Let’s go.” Alexander yelled.

submitted by Gared
(August 12, 2016 - 10:16 pm)

Yay, this is so good! I'm really excited!

submitted by The Riddler
(August 13, 2016 - 4:05 pm)

The king sat in his throne of gold, a bloodstained helmet lay at his feet.

“So.” He growled. “Inquisitor Dhampir is dead. How, may I ask?”

The High Priest sat in a corner. “Ah,” The priest began. “It was a… elemental savage. Her name was Klia. She has the curse of water that runs through her veins.”

“Send me to the HuntMen. We march on the city. We burn the city.” The kind yelled.

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When the priest left, the king grabbed the dented helmet. He threw it across the room, where it hit a wall.

“Yes, my liege?” I hissing voice echoed from a shadowy corner.

“Qienun, oh demon lord, tell me were these elementals are.” The king whispered.

Out of the corner the body of a humanoid slithered. A human head and chest was attached to a serpent’s body. It’s eyes were white, and they flashed open to reveal eyes completely black.

“Yessssss,” Qienun hissed. “They are in the woods. They are with a prince of mortals: a vampyre. He has the will of an ox, and the sly wit of the assassin that seeks the head of a traitor. We demons know him well. He is a pupil of Avin-Avina, daughter of Rogerouse the Vile One. He is Alexander.”

“Good,” The kind murmured. “Kill them all.”

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Alexander lead the small party through the woods. He lead them to a ruined castle. The battlements had long fallen prey to the elements, and a great part had collapsed. A solitary figure stood at the gate.

Elysia held a small flame in each hand. Even without the aura of cold around Selena, the place was cold.

THe figure at the gate swung a longsword from hand to hand. She had dark skin, and her eyes burned a vengeful red. She hefted the sword, then jumped into the air, landing before Alexander.

“You have come back: Master Klyn-Ezra.” The woman said. She wore a blood red toga, with long sleeves, and a black jacket. Her hair was long, and fell unbraided on her back.

“Indeed, Master Avin-Avina. The Bann is growing in popularity. I have brought more elementals. This is no longer a fight for our kind alone.” Alexander replied.

“Great. But why are you called Klyn-Ezra?” Florle cut in.

“That is my true name. Alexander is a nickname.” Alexander replied.

“It is the truth. Now please enter the stronghold of the the Night.” Avin-Avina requested.

 

 

I have reposted this. I don't think it worked the first time. Thanks for the encoaragement. 

submitted by Gared
(August 13, 2016 - 4:46 pm)

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submitted by New Instalation
(August 13, 2016 - 12:12 pm)