Ok I'm sending this story to a publisher tell me what you think please!

prologe

Our world used to be kind and fair until the Ambassadors took over Rascha threw the our president of Sianni  and the rest of our rightful government down the black hole no one knows what happens down there or if they are still alive. Everyone of us our spilt into groups depending on our power mine is I can heal others. We each have a job I'm a doctor. If we don't do what they ask us to do then we get thrown down the black hole.

first page

I wake up and get up to go wake up my little sister Tailee and walk over to where she is sleeping and shake her gently "hey it's time to wake up" I say gently "I want to sleep" she rolls over and stuffs her face in her pillow.I sigh and pull off her blanket "hey!" she screams at me and throws her pillow at me.We need to go we can't be late you know what happens if we are I say seriously we will get whipped in the commons I say to my 14 year old sister.I twist my navy blue ring that I got from our parents on my 16th birthday. "Hey it's going to be ok" Tailee says gently to me "I'm sorry.""it's fine" I whisper "we both know mom and dad both did the right thing not killing that boy." "yeah they did." a tear runs down my cheek Tailee leans over to give me a hug. "Well get dressed I already have breakfast ready for you!" She comes down the stairs and is dressed in a grey cardigan. and a white shirt to represent her power she can control weather with some dark blue jean her blonde hair up in a bun while I’m dressed in a yellow cardigan with a  white shirt which is a requirement and some light blue jeans with my red hair in a high ponytail.Tailee eats her food fast and goes to brush her teeth and comes back saying “I’m ready”.